I thought I would spice it up with a totally different point of view.

Prince Helos was in his bedroom chamber when the news had come. A servant boy, 6 years younger than his sixteen, had rushed in and announced warriors from his nation had seen his sister in the depths of the forest and she had gotten to Edward. He had jumped up and yelled to retrieve the guards.

While he waited he pondered the thought of his sister being alive and having one of his servant boys. He didn't mind the loss of Edward; he was a poor servant as it was. He was lazy and rude and deserved what he got. But the thought of someone actually seeing his sister surprised him. At that, the guards who had been in the forest, minus Edward, entered the chamber.

"Inform me of the encounter," he said, business-like when the warriors had saluted him.

"Sir, we were in the outskirts of the deepest forest when Bella appeared high in the trees and demanded we leave her forest. We barely had time to get out. We had to leave Edward behind," he replied smoothly, looking at the floor.

"And you know this is her, why?"

"Sir, she appeared in folklore as the ruler of that forest. It must be her!" The solider argued respectably back.

The prince nodded, solemn, but there was small tweak at the corners of his mouth. He shooed the soldiers out and sat on the bed. There was a small possibility that Bella, his lovely twin sister he missed greatly, was alive. His mother's dying wish she had told to a slave who was to inform me at the age of ten that I had a sister out there somewhere and to find her. Every since the thought never left him and he made a silent promise to his beloved mother that he would find Bella and teach her of her legend. She was to be queen.

Moments later, he pulled a piece of parchment and a quill to the table and wrote down instructions for his soldiers. When he finish, he stomped out of the room and into the weapons closets. He would find his sister himself.

I hope you enjoyed it, because I did. I really like Prince Helos. Do you?

Please tell me what you think.