(Sorry people, glitch in the system, saying the story could not be put on, since I never saw it there before, but that may just be me but I took it off to see if it was working or not…I was wrong…it was just my sense of observation going a litlte flat :S So…yeah…review! I updated this two days ago but.…but…yh…personal glitch! ENJOY)
Oh my goodness, it took me forever to find a keyword for the plot of this chapter! Ahh! You don't know how frustrated I was! It was either using the word 'Perfection' again, or using something different. I decided to NOT use the same word again since it would kind of have the same plot if I did, which is not really experiment. I even tried using a variety of words, but nothing seemed to work, so I looked for phrases. Again, nothing, until…I found the answer was in my own USERNAME! HA! XD I am SUCH an IDIOT! It is actually quite cool too! I told Akira about it and she was like 'you're such a genius! Yet a nut at the same time!' I was quite proud of myself zD ANYWAY! Here I GO!
OH before I get started, here are a some comments to my lovely reviewers 3
-AshXDawn4Ever- - Nearly always the first to review =) Thank you! This story might not have that though I am sorry to say, but I may try it with the chapter title!
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Gerbilftw – lol! Neither could I! XD I was quite proud of myself :D Although I think I do a better view point from Ash then of Dawn! So this chapter may be disappointing, but I hope not! We shall see how it flows!
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Okay NOW we should get on with it :D Dawn's POV by the way!
A chance was simple
A chance was elegant
It was pure and it was courageous.
Courageous chances were usually reckless and unthinkable for some reason, all though, if lead in the right way, with the right person…it always leads to a good place in the heart and in the mind.
A chance is an option between two things usually, two things you love. You take a 'judgment' on the two things and pick out which is best for you. It can end well; or it can end badly…
That's why you have to take a chance.
Yes, I seem to be expressing the word chance a lot. However, that's not what I wanted to talk about…
Actually I'm not sure if I should talk about it? Should I?
I hugged my knees as I leaned into the tree bark, looking upwards towards the tree branches that swayed from side to side in the blissful breeze. It's funny, day in, day out, I keep thinking of the way that Ash Ketchum, looked at me. From the balcony, looking down on me with those brown, loving eyes that sunk deeper and deeper into me.
Brown…
Deep…
Alive…
..with emotion…
It's quite strange, lingering into his eyes,
And I mean, really looking into them, I'm starting to feel…vibes
Not just because of that, but the way he really looked at me, so…different. I mean, I have never seen him look at me like that.
New and fresh.
A grin that was graced upon his lips like none I have ever seen. Although, his smile did always get better and brighter I have to say…and I'm not ashamed to say it either.
I mean, why should I be ashamed
This is Ash Ketchum
I can't really complain.
I smiled, for some awkward reason. It's funny, whenever I think of him; I always smile. It was a beautiful thought though. Funny isn't it? You know what else is funny?
Probably, whenever I look at him, my heart does backwards flips when he stares at me. My heart pumps so fast I feel like it is about to pop out of my chest like a firework! I giggled at the thought…a bit too imaginative, maybe I should slow down.
Rubbing my knees, I realise that I had changed clothes recently, a pair of denim shorts and a white tank top with black boots. Simple, yet elegant, just like chances and destiny.
From the moment I met that boy, I knew he was going to drive me crazy! Not the bad type, the good type. Although a few times, he has driven me crazy, but he learned not to do that, but still. I mean, what wasn't there to be suspicious about this boy? I mean, I know he looked normal, but I had a 'vibe' that my life was going to change with him being around me.
And I was right…
Throughout our journey, all our bad situations have been a 'life and death' situation. Wherever that boy walked, trouble was bound to follow him. Every step he took changed the future, every action he made, changed his destiny.
That's why I absolutely adore being with him.
The rush
Something I wouldn't get with anybody else, just him. A funny thought, but a pure one that kept me going. Everything he did was new and wonderful, sometimes being reckless, but wonderful anyway. I just need to give him one look, just one, and I would know that something was up.
However, I'm sure he felt the same way about me, I can tell.
I mean, all he has to do is give me that smile and I do something utterly stupid or crazy! Causing him either to:
No 1: Worry
No 2: Take Action
No 3: Smile at me even more!
It was so evil that I could explode. It's actually quite comical once thinking about it. Every time he touches me, even with the slightest brush of a hand or such, I can always feel my cheeks beginning to rise. Every single time he glances at me with those stunning chocolate eyes of his, complementing the dashing smile he had, my heart always rest and all the worries melted away, and for that, I was truly grateful to him.
It always worked!
Whenever he gave me that striking beam, my mind always set off the problem and deeper into those eyes.
I huffed, that's all I can think of, the eyes, the smile. It was all too much. I mean, Ash was…
Special
Not just him, but he made people feel like they were special. I mean, who else used to do that to me
Who used to be there 24/7?
Who kept me on my feet?
Who never quit on me?
The answer? Ash Ketchum…
Somehow, once thinking deeply into him, you always found yourself babbling on, and I wasn't done just yet.
I mean, that smile
That smile!
Pure gorgeousness in every way, the perfect thing to show off, the best feature to have when being asked what you are like…
All you need from Ash was a simple smile that could set the whole city a light with purity that no one had. He was different, original, unique, all of the above. It was...fascinating.
He was fascinating.
I mean…the achievements he has made, the good deeds he does, he always has something different around the corner, but you always know the new thing comes from Ash. He was too good to be true…. But he was true…
I blushed, feelings suddenly dashing around as I hold myself tight. Looking up as the rays of the sun seep through left out gapes in the swaying branches, beaming onto me as I sat there, thinking of him and only him.
Sometimes I ask how I get myself into these current subjects.
Wait, how did we get onto the subject anyway?
You know what?
Never mind.
Since, I've started, you guys probably want me to continue…don't you?
……
Fine then…
Destiny has chosen me, out of all people, to be partnered, with him. Destiny…hm, never really thought about it. Was it really destiny? Or was it a coincidence. I mean, anyone could run into Ash without a worry let alone a problem. A simple hi and such yet nothing would happen to them, only the ones he was destined to travel with. I mean, all these amazing things I hear about, with Misty and May. So inspiring…the stories always made me wanna ask Ash how it went. Like a 5 year old girl wanting her mother to tell her certain stories.
Chances were things I was always bat at figuring out, you always had a choice, which always came with a chance. Like a two in one deal, which unfortunately isn't always the best thing. A chance was a risk, a risk was a hazard. Was Ash a chance? I mean, I have always been in 'peril' with him around. Annoying at points, yes. However, I can't help but grin when I think about it, because no matter how much trouble I was in; Ash was always there to help.
When I was upset with a contest – he was there
When I thought I wasn't good enough – he was there to help me perk up
When I needed a path to go on, a path, which I thought I couldn't take alone – he was there to push me.
Everything he did, everything he said, always has an effect. I keep thinking…if Ash wasn't there? I wouldn't be able to do anything, all the things I can do now, are because of him.
I was nothing when I started my journey.
Nothing
But as a saying goes:
Nothing add nothing still remains as nothing, thus no effect has come forth.
You always something or someone to add something to the 'recipe' as they call it, to make an effect. Such as, someone adding sugar to a cake recipe, thus making it sweeter, or, lining domino's up, you need someone to push the first domino, so it can push the second, then the second to the third etc.
…Now thinking about it…Ash was like the person…the someone…that made the effect…on me.
Extraordinary how little theories start making sense by putting the missing pieces in…the only problem is…is finding the actual 'digits' to use. Otherwise, it is good as gold.
Look at me…. turning my thoughts on Ash into my own little theories…just shows how bored I can get…but it was practical, better then dozing off like Ash does. GAH! I always seem to revolve back to Ash. I bite my lips as I hit my head against the bark tree.
Stupid, stupid…
Who knows why I feel like this? Who knows how I feel like this? I really don't know. However, it was really freaking me out. I mean, why out of all the people does Ash always linger in my head with those…
Dreamy eyes…
Black jet hair…
Dazzling smile…
Urgh, I think I'm gonna up chuck on a wood chuck…. I know, I am usually the 'romance' girl, but lately…it's been all too much.
Every time he looks at me, every time he sighs, every time he smiles, every movement he makes, every breath taking, heart flipping sound he makes when he comforts me…
I….think…I'm falling…in love.
Yes, that explains it! All my actions, all my emotions, completely changing when he comes around! It was him. It took me long enough to figure it out! I mean, why couldn't I be in love with him. I mean, he's so…
Sweet
Kind
Caring
Handsome
Affectionate…
But of course there was always a down side to it….
He was reckless…
He went into things to fast
He always did what he thought was right
He never listens in big situations
He's constantly on a roll…
But that's what I can't help but fall head over heels in lovewith
An even bigger grin crossed my face as I shut my eyes, with a blush covering my cheeks…
Itall made sense now…
I mean, his ways I was truly starting to love and starting to learn. It was a right to fall in love…
It was a chance to fall in love.
It was destiny to find love…
'Dawn!' I heard a shout, I turn my head instantly to find the boy I was thinking about, seconds ago, running towards me, His hand up in the air, waving at me with the other holding his cap to keep it from blowing away. Hm, I need to ask him why he wears that hat all the time. Although, a cap was made for wearing…obviously…
SEE he is making my mind go ballistic! Make it stop!
"Heya Ash!" I shouted back as he came to a halt in front of me, I smiled at him as I looked up at his grinning face that was now darkened due to the shadows from the tree.
"You coming in yet? Lunch is done!" He smiled even wider. Oh, that stupid, dazzling smile that made me do cart wheels and such. I can't help but smile!
"Nah, not yet, gimme a few minutes." I said.
His face softened into a calm expression instead of that excited one, "Okay, see you inside." He put his hands in his pockets and turn around to walk to the Pokemon Centre, although, he did stare back at me a few times.
That same expression,
Soft eyes…
Calm smile…
The same look he gave me a few days ago…
Is it possible…that he liked me too? I don't know…
Once he was out of sight, I leaned my head once again on to the tree, being greeted by the same scene as before.
Going back to all the facts…
A chance was simple
A chance was elegant
It was pure and it was courageous.
….
A chance was a risk…which makes it more courageous
Destiny was made, not chosen by you
Love was a sign, It was an emotion that nothing could ever come…
Only you know when love has arrived…
A pure destiny, was made with a courageous chance.
With someone helping you along the way…
Again, a chance…a risk…
Love is a risk, Ash was a chance, emotions were destiny…
All those things…was I ready to put them up for the test, was I ready to show I was capable? I look to the Pokemon Centre windows, finding my Ash…
My Ash
Smiling with pure delight at me from the window, and with that…I had found my answer…
He was a chance…
A chance I was willing to take…
A destiny…
A destiny I was willing to lead…
Destiny and Chance…
(let me get this right…I manage to edit yet I still get it wrong?) OMG! That was crazily bad! Don't shoot me! It's funny how a GIRL can't think of the elements a girl should notice and CAN'T write them down =( I am soooo sorry this was a horrible chapter but I promised another chapter! So I HAVE to put it up, I will definitely edit this if things come up! I am soooo sorry you guys would think this would come out better. All I did were the same things over again! I think you guys thought I would do something better…didn't you? Again I am so sorry….again will add and edit as I go along. I don't mind a few reviews :) But if you say it is suckish...no need to tell me twice. Thanks for your time anyway...bye.
-DeCh-