Okay so I'm reading this and I realize I started this as a ninth grader in 2009, now I'm a junior soon to be senior in 2012. All I can say is looking back I see all my grammar mistakes, and my lack of detail, that was my voice back then, I have matured Physically, Socially, and Academically so consequently my writing will probably not be the same. I am giving this another shot but if it's bad message me and I will give it up. ~Missy 3

Carlie's POV

"Daddy, I said she is a bitch." I replied back smartly.

"Yeah that's what I thought you said." He grunted, his voice full of anger.

Next thing I know he grabs onto my arm and leads me into my mother and his room. He throws

Me on the bed and stares at me for a few minutes, then he shakes his head paces the room

And does the same thing over again. This continues for about 10 minutes before I finally get bored

And say "Dad, we really have to go do that stupid family thing, so if you're going to yell do it already!"

My dad just looks at me, tears in his eyes that will never fall. Then he whispers

"I'm so disappointed in you, when did you get so mean, so.. so, resentful, what happen to my little girl?"

I didn't know what to say to that, or how to reply. I do know those words dug into my chest like a knife.

Each word forever etched into my brain, as they played over and over again in my head.

What happened to his little girl? I wanted to say daddy your little girl is right here, but I knew that

wasn't true. His little girl is gone, so where does that leave me?

At that thought my father started sobbing, no tears but the same hurt. He sat on the bed next to me,

holding me as if his life depended on it, and I let him. My tears were ruining his shirt but neither of us

moved or spoke a word. Finally I felt as if I cried all I could cry and I was so tried, I stared to drift off to

sleep. I felt my dad's weight shift from under me, and I heard his say right before he closed the door.

"Whether you think so or not, you will always be my little girl, I will always love you." And a single tear

Fell from my eye as I drifted off to sleep.

I kno its short but i have to see if im good to continue... Reveiw