Naruto no Satetsu

I have decided to take a challenge fic. And make a Nartuto with the Iron Sand bloodline story. This is my first fanfiction so please go a little easy on me, but I do like constructive criticism so if you have suggestions on how to improve my writing I would greatly appreciate it.

Summary

Naruto was used as the container of the Nine-Tailed Demon Fox, The Kyuubi no Kitsune.

After a beating at an early age Naruto unlocks the once thought forgotten bloodline of the Iron Sand. He begins to train in the way of the Shinobi in his home village of Konohagakure, but runs away as he is still hated and tortured. This is his journey.

Prologue

The Village of Konohagakure was a peaceful village where the shinobi and civilians lived together. One day tragedy struck. The great Demon Lord, the feared Kyuubi no Kitsune attacked and began to lay siege to the village. The shinobi fought brave and strong to defeat the beast but stood no chance at beating the monster. The Yondaime Hokage, Minato Namikaze, was forced to face the demon. Having no other option and running out of time he to seal the demon inside a baby that had been born that very day.

(At the Front Lines)

"Hold it off until the Yondaime gets here, we have to buy him as much time as we can for this," shouted a Jounin commander trying to as much as he could. A chorus of 'Hai's' was his answer. He watched on as many more of the proud shinobi were cut down in the wake of the beast.

"I want every ninjutsu specialist up here now!" he yelled as five shinobi gathered in front of him. "Get everyone of your best jutsu after that thing," he barked out his order. "Hai,' they said as a group. He watched as ANBU after ANBU forced forward trying to conserve their chakra by attacking the beast directly, only to be cut down, stopped on, of incinerated as they got closer.

'I hope the Yondaime gets done soon I don't know how much longer we can last against this thing,' the out-of-uniform ANBU, Kakashi Hatake, thought to himself. 'Hurry up Minato-sensei,'

(In the office of the Hokage)

Minato was standing in his office preparing for the sealing. "Minato, I must insist that you let me do this, you have so much more to live for," pleaded the retired Sandaime Hokage. "I'm sorry but it has to be me," he said closing his eyes. 'And more than one reason, Kushina and I have to go through with this,' he thought letting a frown crease his young face as he thought of the false death of his wife.

"If you say so, but you realize that you will be abandoning him to the villagers, and condemning him to a life of torment and hate," the Sandaime said letting a grimace on his face thinking of the outcome of this event.

The Yondaime got a gleam in his eyes. "Sarutobi I want you to promise me that, that you will tell the village that this child is to be counted as a hero among them," he said gesturing to the child in the crib. "Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze you will be a hero from birth and stronger than I could ever imagine," he mumbled as he jumped out the window.

He didn't even notice the Sandaime's deep frown at the young man's foolishness. 'I have a strange feeling this will one day come to bite me in the ass, Minato you fool' he thought as he began to get ready for his part in the battle, trying to ignore the current blaze lighting the outside.

Minato summoned Gamabunta on the way to the battle knowing he would need any small advantage he could get.

"Hey 'Bunta it looks like this is our last battle together," he called down to the toad chief. "Minato, it has been an honor fighting with you," the toad chief lamented for his soon to be lost friend.

"Yea same here Chief, so let's get this over with," Minato said looking down.

When the duo arrived at the battle field, wave after wave of ninja were going against the monstererous demon lord. "Hahahaha, puny ningen you can do nothing to the likes of me," it boomed gloating, mocking them.

The gathered shinobi saw the Yondaime riding atop the large summons and cheered. "Yes the Yondaime has arrived," shouted multiple legions of shinobi.

"And what can you do that can stop me you insolent little pest of a ningen?" taunted the fox. "This," was all he said as he made the hand signs. "Shiki Fuin!" he yelled summoning the God of Death.

/- Who has called me to this plain?-/ thundered the Shinigami only to Minato and the Kyuubi. "I have Shinigami-sama, in the hopes that you will help me in defeating this beast by sealing it into this child," Minato says bowing and presenting the child. /-Very well mortal-/ was the response as the Shinigami stuck his hand in Minato's body as the medium, when he noticed something was off.

Noticing the motion Minato smirked. He swiftly removed his shirt exposing the Soul Lock Seals on his body. "I'm sorry Shinigami-sama, but needed this done and still have things to do," he said to the semi-corporal form of the Death God. /-You may have escaped me this time mortal, but when your time comes your soul will be mine-/ it said with an insane smirk plastered all over its features.

The Shinigami's hand shot out of Minato's body and grasped the soul of the Kyuubi slowly dragging it from its body. "NO, I refuse to die," it screamed and roared as it struggled in the grip of the Death God. "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO," screamed as it was shoved into the navel of young Naruto and the seal placed atop.

Minato bent over as the Shinigami disappeared. "I'm sorry for leaving you, my son," he mumbled making a death clone to take his place. "I'm sorry but I know you will grow strong."

And he ran away.

Hiruzen Sarutobi was arrived seconds later and spotted the supposed body of the dead Hokage. He walked closer and picked up the baby that was resting on the body as it began to cry. "Shhh, hush little one it's alright," he cooed softly making his way back to the village with child in his arms.

(In the Council Chambers)

Within the Council Chambers, old Sarutobi was trying desperately to ward of the headache that was getting to him. The Civilian Council was calling for young Naruto's death, others were saying he should be made into a weapon, and still others were saying to use him as breeding stock when he got older to create supper shinobi for the councils.

Then Hiruzen snapped. "SHUT UP," he roared at the assembled peoples.

"So what will it be Sarutobi?" asked the one eyed former ANBU captain Danzo. "I believe that you should hand him over to me and I can train him into Konoha's ultimate weapon."

"NO, he should be killed right now," screamed a pink haired civilian councilwoman name Ama (?) Haruno. "We will be revered as heroes for riding the world of the demon Kyuubi," she continued to screech.

"SILENCE," Sarutobi hollered getting tired of the charade. "We will not do any of those things, we will leave him be and let him grow," he continued. "And that is final, and Hokage's law, anyone who breaks it, no matter who they are will be punished with death."

And with that he strode out of the room.

So tell me what you think, cause I like criticism to a point and I always like to hear ideas to improve the story. And if you want to look at the challenge for yourself then look it up on Nirvana12's page. I've been looking up some basic things on French so I might throw some in now an again. Au revoir!