I wrote this on the outline of improving my dialog a little. I struggle with that sometimes. Anyways, I ended up liking the end result very much, though it is very short. Really, Mike70056, writing is so much easier when you have comments like yours. Thanks!


"Good morning,"

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"Hey. Mom making pancakes?"

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"Yes. They're blueberry this time,"

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"Thought they smelled different."

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"You feeling okay, Cam?"

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"Perfect. I watched the tom cat that has moved into the alley next door."

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"Pretty nifty,"

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"You do not approve of me seeing the kitten?"

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"No. Seeing the cat's fine. It's just kinda creepy, you know?"

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"No. I do not understand,"

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"Thanks, mom. Forget it, Cameron."

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"But I still do not understand. Will you explain, Sarah?"

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"Hey, leave me out of this. You two do your own thing,"

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"I have nothing to do at night. I patrol. The cat wandered in."

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"It wasn't scared of you?"

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"My superior strength undermined whether it was scared of me or not. I observed it."

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"You didn't hurt it or anything, did you? Cam, you can't just go around 'observing' things! Next time—"

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"Talk about this on the way to school. You're going to be late. Go! Hurry,"

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"Do not worry, John Connor. I did not terminate it."

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