Me: OH MY GOSH!!!!!!! This is my last chapter of the first part. Also I have to warn you there is a very graphic and in depth look at a very gushy kiss.
Kim: Do your thanking speech later and get to the chapter
Me: Someone has been reading my notebook but so be it. Raimundo the disclaimer if you please.
Rai: DISCLAIMER: She doesn't own Xaolin Showdown. It is owned by Christy Hui. If you don't have that squished into your head by now you're crazy.
Chapter 20
LOVE
I sat in the gardens by my favorite fountain. It felt so good to be in my robes again. The memory of Chase's hurt face drifts into my mind. I banish it
instantly. I love Rai. I could never leave him unless it was to save him or a loved one. Unfortunately Chase knew my weakness. "You okay?" I hear.
I turn to see Kris. "Yeah just thinking" I reply. "No you're not, you're worried about Chase. Now you listen to me. I had to talk Rai out of depression
twice because he thought he had lost all of the ways to helping you. But not even when you became totally evil did he give up on you. Now you will
not give him up because of some evil freak and his friends." She yells at me and walks away. I stare at the fountain and think about what she said.
I don't know how long has passed when I hear "Hey babe, are you okay?". I look up and see that it is sunset and Rai's sitting down next to me. I
light the candle in the middle of the fountain. "Yeah I'm okay" I reply. I stare at him for a long time and finally pull into a kiss. This is the kiss we
should have had the night I was taken. It was passionate, deep and full of love. Rai ran his tongue along my lips and I opened them letting him in.
I threw my arms around his neck and pulled him closer. He wrapped his arms around my waist pulling me even closer. After who knows how long
we pulled apart. I rested my head on his shoulder. "I love you" I whisper to him as I move my head up to stare into his eyes. "I love you too, and
that's why I need to ask you something" he says to me. He goes down on a knee and stares into my eyes.
"Kim I love you. I know we both have been through a lot and our loyalties and our love have been tested. But none of that matters. We made it
through it all and never left each other. Kim I know we're young and that it will be difficult but I want you by my side forever. Kimiko Akira Kyoko
Tohomiko will you marry me?" Rai asks pulling out the most beautiful ring Kim had ever seen. It didn't take Kim 5 seconds to say "Yes" And tackle
Rai into the fountain as he put the ring onto her finger.
Kim: OH MY GOSH I LOVE YOU!!!!!!
(Tackles Rai onto floor kissing him)
Me: The kissing scene was written by my friend Ashley who has a boyfriend and has kissed him many times in this fashion. Especially in front of us.
Kim: And we must thank the writer of this fic for the lovely proposal
Me: I need to thank the following people for encouragement and help:
Allendra for helping me out of my depression and also for reading and reviewing my fic. May you be blessed with great reviews and fics
Youtube for giving me my songs and videos. Without them this might have taken 2 more months
My family for encouragement. May they be blessed
xXWindxFireXx for reviewing my story. May you have good wishes
Chocokikikitty for letting me use a few of her ideas. May you have awesome fics until you decide to quit. (May that never happen YOU ROCK AT WRITING)
My friends for talking to me at midnight and putting up with my rants against my computer. I love you guys.
All of the authors out there who are all amazing. The ones I have met and the ones I haven't.
cartoongal11, Gina, and Rebecca Kits for being some of my first reviewers. You guys rock.
And finally to girl you don't know for her encouragement and her great new story idea. Thank you so much.
Me: I know this was long and sappy but I think I have SSS or Second Story Syndrome.
Kim: She doesn't want it to end but she forgets that she has 2 more parts to write.
Me: You're right. I do need to get off so that I can start to write more fic's. Maybe I will have a new one out before the end of today. Now everyone for the last time on this fic!
Me/Rai/Kim/Clay/Jamie/Omi/Kris/Dojo/Master Fung: THANK YOU ALL AND PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =~)