Alright I left basically the same message on I am Bella, but I am taking down this story as well because I want to edit it, like I said make it sound like a four year old didn't write them. It is possible I might re-work the story. Only I will only work on one story at a time as it's easier that way, especially with college, and wedding plans on the go.
Sorry to all who liked it as it is, but I feel it needs to be done, and as the author I have rights. Lol
So just keep an eye on my profile for updates on either of the stories.