Um hi this is actually the user vrbtny. I'm Ellerosse's younger bro. Anyone who has already read this story will remember how bad my bro's punctuation was. So i took up the task of fixing these problems.
I hope it improves the read for you.
But remember this is my bros work i just cleaned it up for him.

30th October 1980

James and Lily sat in their cottage living room, Harry was sitting on James' leg while Matthew was balanced more precariously on Lily's. "Lily how is Alice and the Longbottoms" James asked stroking Harry's jet black hair that was so like his fathers

"Alice is fine, she says her son Neville is growing up so fast"

"Like these two" James said lifting Harry slightly "Who do.." The rest of his sentence was cut off by the sound of the front door being blasted inwards, knowing it wasn't as social call James passed Harry to Lily "take them and go" he said with urgency ,pulling his wand from its holster and heading for the door.

Exiting the Living room he was met by the terrifying form of Lord Voldermort his snake-like features twisted in a sneer "Potter" He simply said "Voldermort how did you find us" James said his mind already putting the piece of the puzzle together beside the longer he held this...man the more chance their would be that lily and the twins escaped

"why your friend Pettigrew of course" James felt his heart sink Peter was the traitor, it fit they knew their had been a traitor close to the Potters and who would think of Peter.

"Now Potter stand aside all I want is the boys theirs no need for you to die, think it as my present to you" Voldermorts eye's shone with glee "Never you monster I would die before I let you harm them"

Voldermorts face showed a flicker of annoyance before it returned to the emotionless mask it had been seconds ago "Very well ….. Crucio" James was able to dive to the side avoiding the curse before being struck in the shoulder with a bone breaking curse and a diffindo nicked his leg causing him to cry out in pain his breathing becoming haggard.

Voldermort stepped delicately forwards like a ballerina this thought brought a flicker of smile to James face "I've had a change of heart Potter I won't kill instead i'll let you live so you can feel the death of your son, Guathca" A wispy dark purple spell shot form the yew wand hitting James in the center of the forehead, he remained thus frozen to the world around him before pitching forward his eye's rolling up.

"Pathetic" Voldermort hissed glaring at his fallen foe, Climbing the stairs he swept along the corridor stopping outside the Nursery. Raising his wand he blasted the door of the hinges revealing a small well decorated room. Lily watched in terror as the nursery door was blasted off its hinges not a minute earlier she had heard her husbands scream.

Backing into to a corner she stood protectively in fornt of her two sons. Voldermort stepped over the threshold "Lily Potter" he hissed causing her to shiver "Stand aside". Shaking her head she croaked "no" Voldermort wasted no more time with a wave of his wand the purple mist shot forth confusing Lily as she was expecting the killing curse, Her surprise made her raise her wand a fraction of a second to late, surcumming to the cloud she dropped to the ground.

Voldermort hissed in victory and approached the cot, the left most cot held a sleeping ,slightly chubby faced boy his jet black hair stroked back. The right cot however held a young boy who was wide awake staring at Lord Voldermort with bright green eye's so like his mothers, the two remained eye's locked until voldermort looked away, those eye's they scared him and very little did, the little boy seemed to have the ability to read people and Voldermort knew he would make a worthy adversary one day "but not today" Voldermort whispered his voice, unknowingly sounding more human than it had in years.

Voldermort stood his wand pointing at the boy who's eye's now showed the terror he must have felt "fair well" Voldermort hissed his blood red eyes locked with the emerald one's wanting to see them when the life left them " Avada Kedavra".

The sickly green curse that had claimed so many lives shot forth, Harry raised his arms in a vain attempt to block his approaching doom, a pure white shield faded into existence surrounding the boy, The curse collided with it and Voldermort thought he had succeeded as a slitter of the curse penetrated the shield hitting the child on the forehead, his joy turned to shock and horror as the curse seemed to intermingle with the white shield before half a dozen beams of green shot forth three hitting Voldermort as he tried to dodge.

Voldermort screamed in rage as his body was torn apart before a pile of black robes and a yew wand toppled to the floor. Unnoticed to young Harry was the fact that the stray spells had hit the wall causing part of the ceiling to cave in, a small object fell from the shelf above young Harry's cot impacting on the shield and breaking, glittering yellow particles spilled from the spot just as the shield collapsed being sucked into young Harry's body who glowed yellow before he lost consciousness flopping to his soft mattress.

Albus Dumbledore had been having a quite evening, the usual letters from Ministry, scared parents and the school governors. The flashing of one of his many gadgets caught his attention, he stood skirting the oak desk hurrying to a side table. Picking up the gadget he confirmed is fear it was the gadget that told him of the Potter wards with currently shone a deep red signalling the charm had failed, chunking the gadget door he sprung for the door.

He arrived at the Potter house 15 minutes later to find part of the house caved in. Stepping through the door less entrance he spotted James leaning against the coffee table, an Evenarte later and James was up his moves frantic "Lily....kids...Voldermort...Sirius" Dumbledore paled and followed James as he charged up the stairs like a maddened bull.

The two entered the Nursery to find part of the ceiling had collapsed inwards, James checked on Lily while Dumbledore proceeded to the cot to find a screaming Matthew Potter clutching his forehead were a long jagged scar stretch from above his left eye down across the bridge of his nose and finishing at the top of his pudgy cheek it was a miracle that he hadn't lost an eye. Dumbledore glanced at the other twin Harry who was sleeping peacefully though he twitched once or twice.

Hearing the approaching footsteps of the members of the Order of the Phoenix he quickly made his decision, turning as over a dozen people entered he raised his voice "may I introduce you to the Boy who lived.

From that day forward Harry had noticed that he was slowly being ignored, he originally put it down to him not behaving properly but when he behaved his best he was still ignored. Over time Harry began to live with it and at the age of two Lily announced her Pregnancy. Lillian Rose Potter was born on the 15 August to the joy of the family, for the first few months Lily divided her time between her new born babe and her youngest son but over time she was, just like harry pushed out of the family. Harry did his best to help her changing her nappy, feeding her etc and over time a strong bond developed between the two.

A year later and Lily was pregnant again, Harry couldn't see the point in becoming pregnant giving birth celebrating the new babe to the joy of the media and then chuck her/him aside. On the cold wintry morning of 7th of December Lily gave birth to twin boys Michael and Mitchell and again Harry found after 3 months the two boys ignored.

So Harry grew up looking after 3 younger siblings yet at the same time he was researching magic using the Potter Library. Much to Harry joy and shock he found he could practical stay up all night, needing only an hours sleep so each night after tucking in the twins and dear Lillian he would sneak into the Potter library and read all he could. On one of the nights he found totally by accident that he could do magic when extremely stressed, hypothesising he tested his theory and over the next month instead of spending his evenings in the library he spent them in his room practising his control of wand less magic.

He used his new found ability to help him in his chores, though he still cooked by hand as he found he didn't have enough control to create edible food. After his younger twins spied him doing magic they begged pleaded and blackmailed him until he promised to do so and after approaching Lillian he began instructing the three on wand less magic but only after drilling the ethics of such power as it was easy to abuse such powers.

One on of the numerous trips to Diagon Alley and Gringotts Harry swindled a few Hundred Galleons from the Potter Vault adding them to a new Vault he set up under the name Evans. He kept a small amount of money with him to buy books from flourish and blotts. The rest lying in the vault. Harry planned to leave it there for emergency use by him and his younger siblings (Minus James)

By the age Harry was five Lillian and the twins had improved vastly on their magical and reading ability and so the four spent the afternoon in the Library working their way through the mountain of books or chatting about current topics. On the downside James had started to bully his siblings Harry being his usual self tried to keep his younger brothers and sisters out of trouble instead saying he did it, as James grew he used his large bulk to punch his younger son and James didn't stop him saying it was character building. Harry began to study the muggle martial arts and after seeing what he was doing the younger ones decided to follow his example.

So it was that often on a sunny afternoon the four of then could be found deep in the nearby forest practising their martial arts on each other away from prying eye's. Of course neither their parents nor Brother noticed their improved fitness thanks to their daily morning run nor their brilliant intellect. Only dear uncle Remus spotted the difference and after their explanation he promised to keep it a secret much to their joy.

The Potters noticed he wasn't spending enough time with their beloved son and so James banned him from visiting, naturally Remus was annoyed, not at not being able to see Matthew rather that he wouldn't be able to visit Harry and the Lillian spotted a loophole saying Lupin couldn't visit them but they could visit him and so after some persuasion they got him to agree to met them in their clearing.

Remus was joy to have and he didn't mind spending time with them teaching them about the less 'light' side of society such as the werewolf's, Vampires etc. Remus shook his head sadly at Lily and James actions, Fame had gone to their head and they were now only interested in Fame, wealth and social standing.

The next two years continued apace every trip to Gringotts Harry removed several hundred Galleons as well as some ancient books that would be of great use, it was on one of these trips that much to his shock, dismay and horror he found that he and all his youngest siblings bar Matthrew had been thrown from the family meaning that they could only claim the Potter Fortune if the whole Potter family died. Harry realised it was so Matthew would be the only one to claim it, on the up side though it made being adopted much easier and Harry wondered whether he should try so form of adopt maybe uncle Moony.

He had tutored his young charges with the help for Lupin through their first year of Hogwarts already and Harry had high hopes for the future but first tonight was that night again the night he and the other potter (not counting James, Lily and Matthew) the night of Matthew's birthday party he and his young charges preferred spending the evening away from the media and hundreds of well wishers but the elder Potters made them put in one appearance (to keep up appearance of a perfect family).

The evening went well they were able to get away from the merry making fairly quickly and they entered the house Harry in the lead just as James came out holding a massive cake with a eager Matthew following his eye's glued to the cake, it was for this reason that he didn't see his left foot knock a broom over which got tangled between James legs causing him to lose his balance and fall the cake doing a graceful arch before landing on his and Matthews' face.

Harry sensing dangers frantically gestured for the others to retreat, they were able to get clear before James cleared his face of cake "HARRY" he roared. Harry froze whimpering in fear, James stood shaking in fury "Bed...now " he was able to hiss. Harry didn't need telling twice, he squeaked in terror and ran for the stairs scampering up the stairs, James lazily reached up grabbing Harry's retreating ankle yanking hard.

Harry lost his balance smashing his jaw against the stair falling backwards he flipped down the stairs ending in a bloody lump which James grabbed yanking him up the stairs painfully banging his head on each step. 30 Minutes later James left his room with a smug Matthew just behind,the twins and Lillian watched their retreating backs before hurrying into Harry's room. Lillian gasped in shock and promptly passed out, the twins could hardly blame her even they felt incredible sick.

Harry was laying on his bed covered in blood his nose appeared broken in several places and blood could be seen gushing from several wounds visible through the torn fabric. His breathing was coming in raspy gasps, Michael woke Lillian while Mitchell approached Harry "Harry...Harry can you hear me" "ye..ess" came the reply through the rasps "Harry hold on we'll get you to a heal"

"n..no" Harry croaked shaking his head slightly "" he croaked his voice gaining strength slightly "promise me you won't....look for revenge" Harry paused slightly to regain his breath "forgive but do not forget remember me and use your powers for good" a twitch of the lips showed Harry's attempt at a smile "we'll see each other again I promise" he croaked before closing his eye's ad setting his expression into a peaceful one, the rise and fall of his chest stopped and silence feel on the Potter, outside the revels partied on.

Lillian broke into tears and her two younger brothers tried to calm her "sshhh Lillian" Mitchell whispered, Michael could only stare at the corpse of his brother in shock his brother his one true family member was dead he bowed his head tears leaking from his closed eyelids. Michael opened his eye's as he felt the magic build up in the air, glancing at his twin and older sister he noticed they were equally confused. Turning his attention back to the Harry he started in shock as his brothers corpse began to glow, the three backed away as the magic pulsed with increased speed until it exploded outwards rocking the house an unearthly scream accompanying it.

All over the planet the scream and the movement of the earth could be felt, many of the muggles put it down to a planet wide earthquake a few thought it was the will of the god, so the muggle world forgot about the incident. However the world of Wizadry knew what the feeling was and many feared it was the return of Voldermort. Few knew what could cause a blast like that and even few knew who had caused it as only three people in the world knew, Harry Potter was dead.

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