I just recently finished editing this story. However, the only things I did was fix a couple spelling errors and separate the dialogues into their own paragraphs. I find this story very cringe worthy so I've now marked it as a crack. When I originally wrote it I had been quite serious about it but that was during a time long before fanfiction. My spelling was still bad and I wrote the first thing that came to mind without worrying if it made sense or if the characters were in character. Also, though I have never admitted this before, became inspired for this story when I read a similar story written by someone else in Quizzlia (while it was still functional, the sight is now long gone) I also truly believed, though the stories were similar, mine was original since i was using vampire knight characters and using a over all different "plot." I was also around 12-16 years old.

Anyways, in short, the story was "edited" and I will be doing this with the other stories I wrote in this style