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The Rise Of Naruto Uzumaki

Tome 1: Training Begin!

Chapter 3 : Akatsuki's Attack, Kyubi immerge!

A year as pass since he left the village. He gave Nyu's birthday date the day he received his friends speech. One of his precious moment. Naruto didn't know what to give her until he saw her looking at a stuffed animal, she seem to like it so he buy it.

"Happy birthday Nyu!". Said Naruto while giving her the red fox plushy.

"Twank wou daddy". Said Nyu politely.

"How interesting, a red fox! Say Nyu do you like fox?". Ask Jiraiya while smiling at her.

Nyu just cuddle her fox and kiss Naruto. Jiraiya gave her some kid toys to develop the brain. Naruto thank him as well as Nyu. Naruto start remembering her first word.

(Flashback)

6 month earlier(Nyu was 6 month old):

They were traveling to the land of wave to see Inari and his family, when they arrived Jiraiya was shocked by the name of the bridge. It said "The Great Naruto Bridge".

"You're a hero even here! That's two village; the sand and the wave. Part of the leaf also see you as such". Exclaimed Jiraiya.

"Naruto? How are you? Who is he? And who the baby?". Inari started bombarding Naruto with tone of question.

"Nice to see you too Inari! I'm good, in training of three years away from Konoha with Jiraiya of the Sannin and…" Starting to answer all of Inari's question Naruto was stop by the boy's mom Tsunami.

"Oh my she's so cute, you're under Jiraiya-sama wing wow!". Said Tsunami in awe.

" Your student is already great, look at the name of the bridge!". Add Tazuna.

"So can we know who is she?". Ask a very curious Inari while Nyu started to chuckle.

"Well her name is Nyu…"Naruto was interrupted by Nyu first word.

"Da… D… Da-dy… Daddy!". Nyu finally said while hugging Naruto closer.

Everyone gasp, Naruto even if shocked had a feeling of proud ness. He hug her, that's when he really realized that he was a father.

"Yeah that's right, daddy is proud of you! You first word!". Said Naruto proudly with teary eyes.

"Can you say grandpa?" Asked Jiraiya.

"Daddy, daddy(giggle)" She smile while cuddling her father.

(End of Flashback)

After that little visit, Nyu could say Daddy and after a while word like; ramen, hungry, thank you and please. Sure it was slightly different like ramen for her it was "lamin". As they entered another part of the town witch was deeper, something didn't feel right. No one was out, everything was closed.

"How touching, finally a weakness to use against you easily!". A sinister voice announced.

"You shall surrender or we'll kill the girl". Said dark voice without any emotion.

Jiraiya and Naruto knew them as Itachi Uchiha and Kisame Hoshigaki, two "S" ranked missing ninja. Two members of the Akatsuki, their eyes grew dark at the mention of killing Nyu. Jiraiya turned into sage mode while Naruto let flare his two tails form.

"Don't you dare touch one hair of my daughter!". Said Naruto burning with rage and power.

"Kisame capture the girl". Ordered Itachi.

The battle start at that order and rage on but even in those stage Naruto and Jiraiya were having a lot of trouble since they were protecting Nyu from Kisame and Itachi. Naruto decide to go up the 3rd tail form, he was still in control but was more aggressive.

"Damn brat you've improved! I'll cut her in tiny peace since you refuse to follow us! Hehehe!". Declare the shark like men.

Nyu was now crying in fear behind Jiraiya, smelling his daughter's fear Naruto did the unthinkable, he expose himself to the 4th tail form changing him into a mini version of kyubi with 4 tails. Jiraiya was scare for him since that form was shortening his lifespan and was incontrollable. The beast unleashed start to slash his enemies away even Jiraiya was toss aside. Kisame took the chance and took Nyu in his arms.

"Now die short stuff!". Said Kisame maniacally.

Suddenly Nyu's eyes began to change into blood red cat-like slit with claw and fang, red chakra started to appear around her.

"DADDY!!!". Said a mix of a mysterious and Nyu's voices.

Naruto regained his form but still had four tails. He had a look of shock and of sadness, she was like him. Suddenly two more tails appeared without side-effect and Kyubi's voice was heard through Naruto.

"Don't you dare touch one hair of our daughter or you'll die! I Kyubi, demon lord, give his word on is title that no more I will try to control my host. He and I are now one, for he's the one who protect my daughter Kyushina. He's a good men!". Declare fiercely the demon lord.

The three remaining tails erupted giving Naruto absolute control over the demonic chakra.

"Kisame we must retreat to tell our leader about this". Said a shocked Itachi.

"Agree, here catch!". Agreed Kisame while throwing Nyu to Naruto.

While the nine tailed Naruto catch Nyu, Jiraiya run after Kisame and Itachi. Using their retreat to gain advantage, he fuel all his anger at Kisame who was in his range.

"Fire style: Fire rasengan!" Yell Jiraiya still in his sage mode.

The jutsu was 10 time stronger since Jiraiya let almost all of his sage chakra and normal chakra go in that technique. A huge tornado of fire was seen by many people from far away. Naruto, still in the 9th tail form, appeared only to see Jiraiya panting heavily while removing the ring from the roasted body.

"One down…huff! No one mess with my family…huff…". Said the tired sannin.

"Kyushina my little girl… Happy birthday!". Kyubi said gently to his daughter.

"Daddy…(snore)". Kyushina whispered before falling asleep.

Nyu turn back to normal and she too fell asleep, because of the transformation. Naruto transform back too, a sad smile covered both man's face as they made their way to a safe place to camp since the town was partly destroyed by Naruto and the others. They had to learn more about Nyu's tenant and Kyubi's declaration. Jiraiya suffering from minor chakra exhaustion, pass out in is tent. Naruto was unable to sleep due to the recent attack and all the question he had in is head.

The end of the first tome.

Just a reminder I took Nyu's name from Elfen lied but not the character itself.

Don't worry all tome are on paper so they will come quickly. Unfortunately I have school so less time to write them, please bare with me.

Next tome : Tome 2: The last two years, Kyubi take actions!

Like always R&R and the fic is mine poupou02