This is just a message for everyone who has read this story. I have recently re-read this and have decided that it is kinda terrible – not great writing in places, very rushed and really not well concluded or explained at all points.
On this basis I am going through and basically re-writing the whole story again. It will not be completely the same but will follow the same general story line. It may be a little bit longer in places too.
I will be creating a separate story for this, under the same name, and once finished I will delete this version (unless anyone really doesn't want me to).
I don't know how long this will take as I do not have that much free time but I hope to upload chapters in batches.
So if anyone wants to read what I hope to be a new and improved version of this story then please do!