A.N. Alright, a big update, and the conclusion of Metal Sonic's Arc!
Make sure to read the Author's Note at the end, as it has a very important thingy!
Now...ENJOY!
"It seems..." Neo Metal Sonic said, "That I continue to underestimate you."
The robot stepped forward, red eyes glaring into Super Sonic's brown ones, energy crackling about both forms, Super Sonic holding both the Sword of Light and Sword of Ancients in his hands.
"No more," Neo Metal Sonic declared, and shot at Sonic, who moved blocking a slash with one sword, then returning the attack with the other.
Metal Sonic blocked the counter attack easily, blasting back and holding his hands up, the metal of his fortress bending to his will, coming at Super Sonic from all angles.
Super Sonic spun, swords out, slashing through the metal pieces, turning it into confetti.
Chaos Energy crackled around Neo Metal Sonic, condensing it into hand, black energy forming there.
Sonic sheathed his swords on his back, and held up his own hand, wind and Chaos Energy forming in it.
"NEO BLACK SHIELD BLAST!" Metal roared.
"SUPER SPIRALLING SONIC SPHERE!" Sonic returned.
The two shot at each other, the two attacks colliding, creating an explosion that forced them both flying backwards into opposite ends of the fortress.
Super Sonic and Neo Metal Sonic both got up, glaring at the other.
"...Forty percent," Metal then simply said, and seemed to vanish.
Sonic spun, Metal appearing right behind him, grabbing him with his claws, and brought his foot upwards, smashing it into Sonic's jaw, Sonic crying out in pain.
Still gripping him, Metal spun, then threw Sonic into the ground with a metallic sort of glee, watching as Sonic's head hit the metal ground with a satisfying thud, his golden glow fading, returning to blue.
Metal watched Sonic carefully, as the hedgehog got back up carefully.
"Heh...not...my time to die, Metal," Sonic scoffed, "Round two."
Dark energy condensed around Sonic, who let out a howl, his fur becoming shaggy, claws extending from his hands, spikes from his shoes, and fangs forced themselves forward.
"AWOOOOOOOO!!!" WereSonic declared, pounding his chest, then shot his arms upwards, extending them and taking Metal by surprise, spinning and bringing Neo Metal Sonic down into the ground.
WereSonic then let go, and then pounded forward, jumping into the air then unleashing a series of pounding attacks, Metal Sonic quickly activating his Black Shield, the attacks unable to penetrate it.
"Impressive, Sonic," Metal sneered through his shield, "But not as strong as your Super Form..."
WereSonic grinned, then stepped back, and focused.
The dark energy condensed around him once more, and WereSonic howled even louder then before.
As the energy finished, Darkspine Sonic stood there, having unsheathed his swords again, blank white eyes glaring into Neo Metal Sonic.
Neo Metal Sonic lifted a hand, then undid his cape, letting it flutter to the ground.
"You're going down!" the two yelled, and charged, Darkspine Sonic slashing repeatedly at supersonic speeds, Neo Metal Sonic blocking the attacks with his powerful armor, letting loose with sheer Chaos energy attacks at close range, his body glowing with the Emeralds power.
Metal managed to get a powerful hit in, his fist pounding into Darkspine Sonic's chest, forcing the hedgehog backwards.
"Fifty percent!" Neo Metal Sonic declared, moving even faster now, smashing into Sonic's chest, head, arms, legs, everywhere he could get his hands on, Sonic crying out in pain, losing his form and downgrading back to his normal form.
He landed in a huddled heap, quivering slightly, Neo Metal Sonic glaring down at him.
"I may not be able to kill you, Sonic, but I can make you wish you were," Metal hissed, red eyes blazing, "Our feud ends today."
"I thought...you didn't...need to kill me...anymore?" Sonic sputtered, focusing hard on trying to heal his wounds.
"True..." Metal answered, bending down and grabbing Sonic's chin roughly, forcing the hedgehog to look into his eyes, "But that doesn't mean I don't want to kill you."
Sonic's eyes widened as Metal picked him up, who began to laugh darkly, a blade being produced from his wrist, Sonic's swords left on the ground.
"I...I lost. I can't do this. I tried everything...but I couldn't beat him...I was...to weak...Everyone...everyone's doomed..." Sonic thought to himself, closing his eyes tightly against the pain.
"What should I do first?" Metal wondered outloud, "I have near infinite powers at my disposal after all...Perhaps I should remove those legs of yours. Send you into a black hole, where you will spend your eternity wishing you could die as you're slowly crushed to death...Maybe I'll simply make you a follower...Ooooh, the possibilities..."
Neo Metal Sonic brought Sonic closer, squeezing his face so hard Sonic was forced to open his eyes.
"Maybe...maybe I'll make you watch, and see your precious friends fall before me, as they meet their suitable punishments for attempting to stop me," Metal Sonic sneered
Chaos is power...
"No...I...won't...let you..." Sonic coughed.
And power...
"I have all the Emeralds, the Time Stones! I even have a few shards of the Master Emerald, to stop that from being used against me!" Metal declared, "You are nothing!"
Is enriched by the heart.
"I have my friends..." Sonic spat, eyes glowing suddenly, and held up his arms.
"CHAOS BLAST!"
Energy ripped out from Sonic, taking Neo Metal Sonic by surprise, throwing him backwards as Sonic landed on the ground, wind ruffling his fur.
He was on one knee though, breathing deeply. He was right. He could use a Chaos Blast if needed...But it had taken what was left of his preserves, and Metal Sonic was soon back up, looking angrier then before.
"You will die a thousand deaths! Each will be more painful then the last!" Neo Metal Sonic roared, the metal fortress vibrating with his voice, "I will raze your precious worlds! NONE OF YOUR FRIENDS WILL BE LEFT STANDING!"
"That's where we have to disagree."
Neo Metal Sonic and Sonic paused, turning their heads as a portal appeared.
Shadow and Silver were the first, stepping forward, adjusting their gloves, ready to attack.
Behind them came Vinny and Cerrivae, ready to help counter Metal's new tricks.
Rozik came after them, cracking his neck and looking determined.
Finally, came Tails and Knuckles, electricity sparking around the kitsune, Knuckles holding his small shard of the Master Emerald tightly.
Shadow smirked, having been the one to speak, "Looks like we got here just in time to save you, blue hedgehog."
"You missed it Shadow-boy...I pulled off a Chaos Blast," Sonic chuckled weakly.
Neo Metal Sonic huffed, shaking his head, "You will all still perish."
"GO!" Tails yelled, and Shadow and Silver shot forward, golden energy coming from their forms, going at Metal as Tails also stepped forward, electricity sparking from his fingers, throwing them forward.
"My friends...they came to help..." Sonic smiled. He could feel everyone down on the planets, all them hoping for safety, for a hero to help.
Cerrivae and Vinny sat on the ground, meditating and concentrating, preventing Neo Metal Sonic from sending them through portals as Shadow, Silver, and Tails distracted him.
Knuckles was feeling the ambient energy, his shard spinning in the air, glowing softly as he quietly recited the mantra of the Emeralds.
Rozik attempted to get close to Metal in order to use his Element, but was finding it to be more difficult then he previously anticipated.
"Everyone!" Sonic shouted suddenly, "The energy all of it...we have to work together...as one!"
He closed his eyes, and everyone backed up, Metal Sonic looking at each of them.
Energy glowed through them all...
"Issai...this isn't right!"
"I don't care Stream! I can not betray my father."
"Please..."
Issai and Stream were at a hotel room, having just taken one. On the table was a portable computer they set up, and it showed data on both of them...
They both glanced to the computer, "Both Eggman and Metal...they both conspired for this...for us..."
"And why should I care?" Issai growled, "Tell me why I should help you?"
"It's your choice Issai...Metal didn't tell you everything..." Stream sighed, "I'm going to help...It's your choice on what you want to do..."
Stream stepped back, then disappeared with a Chaos Control. Issai sighed, making his way to the computer, and started to read over the piece of data that had started this argument.
"Eggman's Log
The Ultimate Life Form Project is going well. Both Number 1 and Number 2 are progressing more or less on schedule. Number 1 is having slight difficulty taking all the DNA, but Metal Sonic reports that he believes he's found a way to make it work.
The second one, the female one, is also giving some problems. While her DNA does not come from any of the heroes, she still must be fine tuned and given enough Chaos powers.
Of course, they are only the first part. Once they are created, the proper situation must be met.
In order to create the real Ultimate Life Form, a natural child of the two must be produced. To do this, Metal and I shall make it so that they will be immensely attracted to each other. Of course, we can not let them know this. They will be sentient beings.
We will use them for this goal. To create an Ultimate Life Form even grander then what my grandfather could imagine.
If all goes according to plan, we shall have our Ultimate Life Form. After that strange...The previous two experiments will be terminated..."
Issai shut off the computer hurriedly, finding a seat and closing his eyes. He had always believed in Metal Sonic. He looked to him like a father. Would he really have been planning to kill him sometime in the future...?
He buried his head into his heads...
Neo Metal Sonic pulled back, watching as the heroes pulled their energy, the ambient energy of Metal giving them a boost as well.
"NO! You will no win!" Neo Metal Sonic declared, holding out his left arm, energy gathering in it.
"We have to focus the power into one person!" Shadow yelled, "We can't stop him if we're all just sharing it evenly!"
"But who?" Silver wondered, the two bracing themselves to Metal's attack.
"Me."
Electricity crackled through the air, and Tails stepped forward, glowing as his body seemed to absorb the Chaos energy like a sponge.
Tails was lifted up into the air, holding out his arms, as golden energy seemed to surround him.
The others glanced towards each other, then focused, feeding the energy into Tails, aside from Knuckles, who was slowly finding the Master Emerald being rebuilt before him.
As the energy died down, Tails floated there, his fur yellow, a determined expression in his eyes, a flowing red cape behind him.
"Super Tails?" Neo Metal Sonic paused, looking at the fox.
"No..." Tails answered, "Turbo Tails."
Turbo Tails shot forward suddenly, bringing his hand back and then throwing it at Metal, electricity bursting from it, hitting the robot and sending him flying backwards.
"Chaos Control!" Turbo Tails, disappearing and reappearing behind Neo Metal, spinning around and unleashing a kick, Metal smashing into the floor.
"Ugh...Not...bad..." Neo Metal Sonic said, "Seventy-five percent."
Tails' eyes widened as Neo Metal Sonic glowed brightly, shooting upwards faster then before, unleashing a fury of well aimed punches, hitting Turbo Tails repeatedly.
The fox gritted his teeth, then spun suddenly, more electricity condensing around his form.
"Lightning Lightspeed!" Turbo Tails declared, shooting at Neo Metal Sonic, who grabbed the spinning fox, being forced back slowly as energy crackled around both of them.
"Eight...eighty-five...percent!" Neo Metal yelled, grabbing Tails tighter and throwing him into the air.
"CHAOS SPEAR!"
Turbo Tails uncurled, and fired two powerful blasts downwards, Metal barely avoiding them.
"HAH!" Tails flexed his arms, and the Chaos Spears stopped in their descent, then moved, coming around and going after Neo Metal Sonic.
Metal curled up, his Black Shield activating, taking the hit, though the attacks seemed to momentarily disrupt his shield.
The two almost gods glared at each other, knowing they had yet to go full strength.
"I honestly never expected to have to fight you like this, Tails," Metal said, "Why don't we stop this game, and go to full one hundred percent?"
"If you insist..." Turbo Tails said, holding up his hands, energy crackling in it.
Neo Metal Sonic stepped backwards as well, energy swirling about his form.
"Should we...do something?" Silver wondered, off to the side with the others.
"Not yet...The Master Emerald isn't complete...a couple shards aren't responding..." Knuckles answered, looking over the mostly completed gem.
"Metal has them," Sonic answered, being supported by Rozik at the moment, "We still can do something...Vinny, Cerrivae...You guys need to get Rozik close enough to Metal. Cancel out his energy."
Rozik nodded, and handed off Sonic to Silver, who sighed slightly.
"Counting on you two blokes not to get me killed," Rozik grinned, "Wish I had something strong to do this with..."
"We'll do it!" Vinny grinned, confident.
Cerrivae merely nodded, focusing.
Vinny grabbed Rozik, and warped, the two appearing by Neo Metal Sonic, who paused, turning his head to see them.
A portal opened by them, but Vinny and Cerrivae held their hands up, the portal disappearing.
"Hurry!" Vinny yelled to Rozik, who nodded, stepping forward as close as he could, the energy around Metal making is difficult to move.
"Little closer..." Rozik thought to himself, then focused, deep inside for the power he knew he had.
"ORDER!" Rozik yelled, and Neo Metal Sonic screamed.
Turbo Tails paused, the energy around him dying down as Neo Metal Sonic writhed, feeling the energy begin to be sucked away from him, falling his knees, sparking madly.
Neo Metal Sonic twitched, as his body changed, shifted, returning to his normal form, the Emeralds falling around him, along with the Time Stones.
"You've lost..." Turbo Tails said, stepping forward, Vinny grabbing Rozik and warping them away.
"No...NO!" Metal said, clutching the ground, "IF I CAN'T WIN, NO ONE WILL!"
The Emeralds suddenly pulsed black, feeding off the raw hatred Metal was giving off, the robot floating into the air, and waved his hands, Turbo Tails suddenly being blasted backwards, hitting a wall hard, then slumped downwards, unconscious.
"I...AM...THE ULTIMATE...CREATION!" Metal roared, black energy sparking about his form.
"NO!"
Silver was thrown back as Sonic sped forward, jumping right into the energy, grappling with Metal.
"This is crazy Metal! You'll destroy everything!" Sonic yelled as the two fought in close range.
"I DON'T CARE!" Metal answered, eyes completely red now, "I WILL KILL EVERYTHING!"
"We need to help Sonic!" Knuckles yelled, "Everyone...focus!"
Energy began to swirl around the blue hedgehog, and he felt his strength returned.
Soon, Super Sonic was grappling with Metal, the energy around them continuing to condense...But it wasn't enough. Sonic was still losing.
There was a flash of blue, and the others tensed, as Stream stepped forward, looking sad.
"I'm not here to fight you..." she answered, "I want to...I want to help...I never wanted this..." she looked to Metal and Sonic, then held up her hands.
"Chaos."
Sonic felt a new surge of energy, and his fur turned multi-colored, Hyper Sonic tangling with Dark Metal Sonic. They were now about even, but that was a win for Metal. They needed more! Somehow...
As they all watched, hoping against hope that Sonic would somehow pull it off, one more figure appeared.
"Issai!" Knuckles growled, clenching his fist, seeing the hedgehog appear. Stream paused, glancing over at him.
"Issai...?" she wondered, as he stepped forward, and placed a hand on her shoulder.
"I..." he paused, and looked at the others, "I can't let Father kill everyone...How will I prove I'm the best if no one else is around?"
Stream smiled, and Issai turned, holding his hands up.
"Sorry...Father..." the hedgehog sighed, "Energy."
Hyper Sonic let out a yell, the energy in his system expanding, his fur turning white, as Ultra Sonic floated their with Metal.
"There's only one way I can save everyone..." Sonic thought to himself, "Goodbye...everyone..."
"CHAOS..." Ultra Sonic started, "CONTROL!"
There was a brilliant flash of light.
And both Sonic and Metal vanished...
In the middle of nowhere, in the blackness of space, two figures appeared, wrestling with each other.
They shouted at each other, but their was no air for it to travel through.
It was to late though, Metal Sonic had absorbed a large amount of energy, and it exploded outwards from his body, Ultra Sonic raising his hand, using the power of Chaos Control to try and contain it.
Metal laughed, eyes sparking as the energy erupted from his body, swirling around them, condensing, being forced smaller and smaller.
A silent explosion, and the energy imploded upon itself, Ultra Sonic's eyes widening as he felt himself pulled in, Metal Sonic gone.
His energy began to fade away, and he fell into the abyss of a black hole...
Back on the Moon Fortress, the Emeralds and Time Stones still all glowed with their brilliant power, threatening to explode anyways from the stress that Metal Sonic had put on them.
"Rozik! Can you get close enough?" Shadow yelled, turning to the hedgehog, who was shielding his eyes.
"No way! I'd get vaporized!" Rozik shouted back.
"Vinny, Cerrivae, can you do anything?" Shadow then turned to the other two.
"No...there's just...to much. We're not that strong..." Vinny answered, shaking his head, Cerrivae nodding his head in agreement.
"The Master Emerald!" Knuckles yelled. When Metal had downgraded, Knuckles finally received the last few shards, and the gem was complete, "It can stop them...But we have to get close enough..."
"Let me do it..." Shadow said, holding out his hand, "I'm the only one who has a chance."
"What about me?" Issai scowled.
"You don't know what to do," Shadow answered, "We don't have time to give you a lesson. Besides..."
Shadow's bracelets fell off, clattering to the floor, "I'm the Ultimate Life Form."
The black and red hedgehog turned, taking the Master Emerald from Knuckles, who had shrunk it down, then turned to the swirling vortex of energy.
Golden energy came over him, and Super Shadow jumped into it, suppressing a scream of pain as he felt his body become entangled with in.
He held up his arms, the Master Emerald growing before him.
"Chaos...is...power..." Shadow began, gritting his teeth, eyes closed, "Power...is enriched...by the heart..."
A shuddering breath, and a vision of Amy appeared before him, giving him new found strength.
"The controller is the one...who unifies the chaos..." Shadow continued, "You are the one to control the Chaos!"
The energy seemed to pause, then Shadow cried out, as the energy of the gems seemed to drain into him.
"AUUUGHHH!" he yelled, his body unable to cope with the energy, screaming in pain as he clutched his head.
"I'll be there...when you need me..."
"Amy...?"
"Heart."
Suddenly Shadow felt calmer, the energy had a shape, a form he could manipulate.
His eyes opened, and he saw everything.
He blinked warily, and suddenly it shifted. He paused, seeing someone who looked much like him, apparently battling a green bat. He shifted again, and saw the past, a younger Gerald holding a baby Maria happily, looking at his granddaughter fondly.
Shadow continued to shift, then paused, seeing a fight insist on itself, as though it was important.
His eyes widened, seeing Scourge and Mighty fighting, seeing the sword stab into Mighty's stomach, and Scourge step forward to finish the armadillo off.
No! Mighty couldn't die! He was needed!
Shadow stretched his hands outwards, then paused, feeling the world shift about him.
In a flash, he saw Scourge before him, and Mighty laying on the ground. Shadow threw his fist forward, and Scourge was thrown backwards from the sheer power that was unleashed. Glancing down to Mighty, Shadow focused, and the two vanished.
"Woooo!" Shadow yelled, then paused, finding himself in a blank world, then looking down, a dieing Mighty at his feet.
"Sha...shadow?" Mighty coughed, then closed his eyes, shuddering. Shadow's eyes widened, and he bent downwards, and attempted to heal the armadillo. He seemed to have lost the energy he felt earlier though. Mighty's wounds were severe.
"Mighty...Mighty, listen!" Shadow said, "You have to heal yourself...Trust me! Use your Element, let it heal your body...I know you can do it! I've seen you do it before!"
Mighty, to out of it to argue or ask questions, only nodded vaguely, then screwed up his eyes, reaching inwards as he felt his life begin to fade.
"Body," Mighty whispered, then gasped, feeling his body begin to mend, heal, blood seeming to flow back, and with a shudder, he felt himself healed.
"Oh...wow..." Mighty muttered, getting up slowly. He paused, looking at his hands, then quickly ripped off his bandages on them.
"I'm healed..." he glanced to Shadow, "How did you...what happened?"
"It's a bit confusing," Shadow started, "I'm from the future...and there's something you're going to need to do."
The Time Stones reappeared around Shadow, and the hedgehog focused, feeling time ebb and flow around him, then pointed forward.
"There..." he saw himself, talking to Maria, "You need to go there and help me there...Heal Maria. Find my brother, Cerrivae, he will be able to get you back to your time."
Shadow plucked a Time Stone from around him, then handed it to Mighty, "When Cerrivae opens the portal, just throw this through it. It will go where it belongs."
"...Will I find out what happens then?" Mighty wondered, "I mean...I have no idea where these weird things even came from."
"Metal Sonic...He's collected all the gems...We were fighting him," Shadow answered.
"Does this mean we've won?" Mighty asked.
"I honestly don't know yet. I still have one last thing to do...Just please, heal Maria, then find my brother!" Shadow pleaded. Mighty nodded, taking the Time Stone and stepping forward...
Shadow then turned, and the gems appeared around him again, giving him a flow of power.
"I get it now..." he said to no one in particular, "You're trying to help. Setting things right. I also understand where you all need to go."
Shadow held up the Master Emerald, closing his eyes, "Chaos...Control..."
The Chaos and Sol Emeralds pulsed, as did the Time Stones, then disappeared, granting Shadow energy for what he needed to finish.
"Chaos Control!" Shadow yelled again.
Shadow appeared in a flash of blue, appearing on some old metal. His eyes settled on a white hedgehog in a black jacket.
"Rozik!" Shadow yelled, stepping forward. Rozik had bunched up, but relaxed, seeing his friend and ally.
"What's happening?" Rozik wondered, pointing up at Metal's Fortress. Shadow looked upwards. Right now, Sonic was fighting Metal alone.
"Metal Sonic...He's gotten all the Emeralds...Chaos and Sol alike, along with somethings called the Time Stones," Shadow answered, "You're needed...are going to be needed...Augh, time travel!"
Shadow sighed, calming himself down, "Look, I'm from the future...or the past...or both...Look!"
The hedgehog held out his hand, "I need you to get you to the other world. You'll be needed there. I've already saved Mighty."
Rozik paused, then nodded, taking Shadow's hand, "Alright...Looks like I'm here to help save the universes again."
"Just one universe now," Shadow smiled, and focused. The two warped away.
Shadow dropped off Rozik, and watched, silent, hiding, as they left through the portal. He waited more, seeing the group left behind worried.
He glanced at the moons, and saw it shake, then felt it...that dark energy explode from within. Then he felt it weaken, but the Emeralds still there. Finally, they too vanished, and Shadow closed his eyes, focusing once more...
Shadow, the Master Emerald, the Chaos and Sol Emeralds, and the Times Stones had just disappeared. Knuckles was checking on Tails, who was beginning to regain consciousness.
"What's going to happen now?" Vinny wondered.
A flash of blue light, and Shadow appeared again, breathing deeply, and holding up the Master Emerald.
"It's done..." Shadow answered, "Ugh...I need a nap."
As Shadow fell forward, he smiled slightly, knowing that, at least for him, it was done for now. He could rest...
One Day Later
Mobius – Planet Chaos
Even with the Emeralds having disappeared, no one able to sense them, the dimensions had not reseparated. Metal's tampering had not forced them together, but rather, fit them together. They naturally went together, and now the worlds/dimensions were beginning to know each other.
On Planet Chaos, as it was slowly being known and referred to, having been the home of the Chaos Emeralds, Shadow had introduced Amy to Maria, and vice versa. The two instantly got along.
Tails had elected to stay on the planet he spent most of his life, and had promised Shadow he would fix Omega once more, having gone through the wreckage of Angel Island and managed to find his CPU intact.
On Angel Island, some of the others, Knuckles, Cerrivae, and the Chaotix helping, were rebuilding, creating a new home. They were working.
After Metal's defeat, Issai and Stream had disappeared, and no one was looking for them. They figured they simply needed time for themselves.
No one had heard from Sonic...
The Nation – Sol Planet
Blaze paced her room, her eyes red and puffy. Silver, of all people, had told her what had happened to Sonic. He told her how he had been a true hero, sacrificing himself to save both worlds.
There was currently plans to create a tribute to the hedgehog, on both worlds that he had saved. This was only passing comfort to Blaze, who had taken to staying in her room, Amedeus taking charge over The Nation talks, and what to do about Eggman-Nega.
There was a gentle knock on the door.
"Who is it?" Blaze demanded to know.
"It is I...Merlin..." the old wizard answered, "I have something that may help you."
Blaze paused, then turned to the door, opening it up, and letting in the blue cloaked fox, who had a book in his hands.
"This book may provide you some comfort, dear Princess...But I warn you...Do not skip to the end. You must read it in order...Understood?" Merlin said, and handed her the book, tapping it lightly to emphasize his point.
Blinking, the cat nodded, "Ummm...why though?"
"You will understand once you start reading..." Merlin answered with a small smile, then left, closing the door behind him.
Blaze ran her hand over the book, looking at the old title peering at it, then gasped.
"Tales of the Wind..."
And on the cover, ever so faintly, was the image of a blue hedgehog...
A.N. WOOOO!...Big update for this! Muhahahaha.
Anyways...what's happened to Metal? Or to Sonic? Are they both really dead, or does Merlin's book have something to say about that?
What will happen to the two worlds, now that they're a moon's throw away from each other? Will their be peace, or will such figures such as Snively or Eggman-Nega create trouble?
Keep your eyes on Chaotic Memories as we go into the 'Tales of the Wind' arc!
Now...The Important Thingy
I think...I might like a beta reader/tester for the Chaotic universe here.
I'm looking for someone who's willing to look over the chapter(s) before hand, point out grammar/spelling errors, things that don't make sense, and all that stuff.
I also want the person to be able to listen to random ideas I have for these stories and for the future I have planned with it. Something like an idea tester!
I do not need an expert. If you're super special awesome at the grammar stuff, that's better, but not absolutely necessary.
What does this person get in return?
Spoilers. I will divulge what I have planned for the storyline and other ones to come.
Chapter(s) in advance. To look over of course, but still.
Power!...Basically, it means, whoever is picked will most likely have some influence over what happens, or random ideas, or maybe even entire storylines if they pitch a cool idea. I WILL be sure to give the person credit for this!
IF they have an OC...I may include it in the story. I say this because I'm not sure if I will, and I already do have four others, but we'll see what happens.
What I absolutely need
MSN Messenger. If you want the 'job' you gotta have it. Whenever I'm on the computer, I'm almost always on it, and it's free to get, so there's no excuse for letting that stop you.
Punctuality. Obviously I don't expect whoever is picked to get me back the looked over thing the same day. If you do, cool but I know how things get. A week (barring uncontrolled circumstances), is probably the maximum I'll wait before asking again.
Courage. PLEASE. Tell me if an idea is bad. Tell me if what I said somewhere doesn't make sense, and if you can, nitpick my grammar in the story. I want to get better.
Note: I will be biased to the people who ask that are frequent reviewers.
If you are interested, send me a PM (NOT in the review! I will ignore those!), and let me know if you're interested, and if you are, how available you think you might be.
So you know, my Time Zone is Pacific Time. California! Whoop.
Thanks!