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Ok guys for those of you who have never read my story before i hope you like it :) and to all of you who have i would just like to let you know that i will be continuing on with the story and i hope you like it :)

I have recently edited this chapter and i plan to go on and do the same for the others, storyline is still the same, i have just added a few bits :)

I was out the front of my new school. My new boarding school. Forks boarding school.

It was a surprisingly sunny day for Forks. I had been here for three weeks and every single day it had rained.

I had moved to forks because my mum had gotten remarried, and I didn't want to hold her back, but when I arrived I discovered that my dad had found a new partner too; Sue Clearwater.

For the first week she seemed nice enough, but then all of a sudden it was like we where competing for Charlies' attention. After two weeks of trying to live with her, I gave up. So that was when I decided to come here. Sure I know I sound like a regular bratty teenager, and sure maybe I was being a little over dramatic, but if I lived with that woman for two years I was going to go insane. Just thinking about her was enough to make me feel sick.

I started walking up the path leading to the office. As I opened the door in front of me I felt the warmth coming out of the building. I walked up to the receptionist behind the counter. She had bright red hair and thick framed orange glasses. She didn't look like your typical school receptionist.

"Hi, my name's Isabella Swan, I'm new here and I was told to come and collect my schedule."

She searched around her desk for a minute then pulled something out from a random pile. "Here you are," she said as she handed me a large envelope, "In there is your timetable, a map of the school, and your dorm room number and key."

"Thanks," I said as I opened the envelope. My room number was 511. I looked at my map; it was in the building furthest away from my classrooms. Typical.

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It took me ten minutes just to get to my building. I welcomed the heat from the building as I walked to the lift. As soon as I reached my floor I looked at the number of the door directly across from the lift; 511.

Well that wasn't too hard to find,I thought to myself. I opened the door, and stood there dumbstruck. The room was massive! It had three king-sized beds, a big kitchen, a lounge room with a gigantic plasma TV and a huge bathroom. I had just started unpacking my things when the door opened. A tiny girl walked in. She had short, spiky, black hair and a huge grin on her face.

"Oh, hey there! My name is Alice Cullen, I'm one of your roommates." She ran up to me and gave me a huge hug. I surprised myself, I actually liked her, I wasn't normally someone who lets people in easily and even new I could tell we were going to be great friends.

I smiled widely, "Nice to meet you Alice. I'm Isabella Swan, Bella for short. Who's our other room mate?"

"Her name is Rosalie Hale. She's my best friend. Oh, and she is also going out with my older brother, Emmett."

"Wow, are you ok with that?"

"Of course! I was the one who set them up! And, well, I'm going out with her twin, Jasper."

"Aw, that's so cute."

"Now all we need to do is find you someone." She grinned at me.

"Alice, I just got here. I'm not looking for anyone right now. I just want to get settled in."

"Well, I hope getting settled in means getting to know the shops."

Yes shopping! "Definitely!"
Just then a girl with beautiful, wavy, blonde hair and a figure to die for walked in the room. I guess that's Rosalie.

"Hi I'm Rosalie; you must be our new room mate?"

"Yeah, my name's Bella. It's nice to meet you." I felt bad just to be in the same room as her. Rosalie was just about say something when the door opened for the third time and three boys walked inside.

One was muscled, like a serious heavy weight lifter, with dark curly hair.

Another was taller and leaner, but still muscular and honey blonde.

The last was less lanky, less bulky, with untidy bronze coloured hair.

The musclier one went straight to Rosalie and kissed her and the tall one went to Alice and did the same. I take it that's Emmett and Jasper.

I looked up at the bronze haired boy, who was standing awkwardly near the door and our eyes met, he had brilliant green eyes. I looked away too quickly and I could feel the heat in my cheeks.

"Bella this is Emmett, Jasper and Edward." Rosalie said, gesturing to each guy as she said their name.

Edward, I liked it. Wait, what? I don't even know him! "It's very nice to meet you all."

"Hey, I'm hungry, do you guys want to go get something to eat?" asked Emmett.

"Yeah, let's go. I can unpack later." I replied and grabbed my purse.

Luckily our building was the closest one to the cafeteria; it only took 5 minutes to get there. "So where are your dorms?" I asked the boys.

"The level under yours," said Edward. His voice took my breath away. It was a perfect velvet voice.

My cheeks must have gone red, because Emmett said, "Are your cheeks permanently red or something?" That just made them turn a deeper scarlet and everyone laughed.

"Okay, okay, enough making fun of me, what to we want to eat?"

"I could kill for a burger," said Alice.

"Or two," said Jasper and we all started laughing again, "What?"

"Well the best burgers are over there at World of Burgers," said Rosalie, pointing towards it.

We all bought our burgers and picked a table. I ate two burgers, Alice ate three, Rosalie ate one and all the boys had five each! "Geez how can you eat all that?" I asked, amazed.

"That's nothing, I once ate ten!" Emmett boasted.

Ten, wow!

We had a fun night. After we ate we all went to my room and watched movies, but the whole time I couldn't stop looking at Edward and his brilliant green eyes.

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