A Vote?
Hello, hello Nikki9Nine here with some urgent news! Now I don't hate my story so far, but I find myself becoming a tad critical of some elements. The villains: Lionel, Guiremetyre, Ramzant, etc….They are extremely cheesy and I wince every time I go back and read my work. I warned everyone and I think you all got the damn point already. I'm really trying to have villains while not letting them overpower the story too much. Yes I could have worked a tad harder on them, I know, but the truth is I really don't want to go back and change everything about the story. I think I do want to kill off the villains as soon as I can. To be quite honest, the cheesiness of the villains was supposed to make the story a little more comedic but I failed yet again. At least I laughed haha. I got some good feedback on the dialogue from a very awesome person. Thank you very much. Now as a heart felt apology from Cassandra and Ramzant for being so god damn cheesy, I would like the people to decide. So here's the deal. I was thinking that next chapter, the pathetic villains should die a miserable cheesy death and I should get on with the love story. That's gonna happen weather or not people like the villains, I'm sorry for your losses, really. Here's where the vote comes into play. Ditch all villains made up by me for the rest of the story and just bring in Vergil. What do ya think? I have a really hard time with original characters, so I think I should stick with the DMC ones. It's your call though. If you want Vergil to replace the cheesy made up villains, review my story with PRO VERGIL. If not, just review with NAY. I'll be waiting. Cheers!