Officially, I'm BACK (Though only gone for a day…)! 'Falling in the black' would be the official sequel to 'Double Metal' which I have completed. If you intend to read this story, I strongly advise you to read the first story 'Double Metal'; you can gain access to it through my profile page or in may still be on the page of Fan fiction.
This is an introduction chapter which I though I should add. It consists of the source of inspiration to the story and meaning behind the title.
At the same time, I though I could use this chapter to reply all the reviews before the start of the sequel officially. Thanks to those who reviewed on Double Metal, Chapter 33~!
Sigma: Thanks for all the compliments! I am really glad the story worked out! Sorry if I'm disappointing you with this introduction chapter but I thought I could share the title's origins. I promise, the next one would be the real deal. I'll post it immediately a day after this.
Dim Raven: Thanks, I had fun writing too. There isn't really a battle between John and Future John as if you noticed, only John's part is jealous and Future John just failed to realize or didn't cared. Thanks. The next chapter would be it.
Starman800: I was intending for Cameron to leave and continue the story from the future as I am better in writing romance. As I think you noticed. Future John would not make a real appearance but things happen because of what he decides to do in the Future and you will not hear the last of him. In other words, he would definitely be mention heavily in this sequel.
zahnfan23: Thanks. I hoped the Carter and disappearing together wouldn't be too much though I did consider leaving Carter here but I didn't want John's jealousy for Carter to linger.
Dre4mwe4ver: Lol! Thanks! Yup, I glad it did make sense. At least if I'm a soldier, I would follow him loyally even if he's a bastard just as long as we, humans, lived on! Derek's side is hard for me to portray, believe it or not, I changed his reaction to his buddy's death more than a handful of times! Finally, time to read the real review for my story finale… (Not that I'm complaining for a long review, I love it!
I also thought of the portable time machine when I was using my TV remote. I thought why could a time travelling thingy be summoned with a touch of a button on your remote? Then I did it! The 'Back to the future' statement made me feel insane writing it. I thought it would be too much (The goodbye between and Sarah) but I'm glad it worked.
Derek's innocent but yes, he's very good at that. In fact useful to me at times too. In the sequel, he'll shatter an important moment between John and Cameron, emphasize, between John and Cameron. (I'm really evil aren't I?)
Nope, I'm not letting you. Close your mouth and don't spit it out…Please… I don't want to reveal anymore spoilers for your sake. Though I think you can already guess it so keep it to yourself and yourself dying to find out its truth.
Thanks!!!!!!! SO MUCH! I am really scared it would be too cheesy!
Don't get all your brain cells killed thinking about that though. It's not worth it. I thought it would be obvious. (Cameron was going to admit her love to Present John but thought better of it. This is no spoiler, just trying to help you understand.)
It broke my heart to write it. But I had to make people understand his pain without Cameron there so that it would connect with the sequel. And lastly, don't express it. Just feel it to the maximum and here it comes! I won't keep you waiting long, I promise. I would post the story about a day after this one.
Aaron Leach: Thanks!
Jeremy Shane: Thanks so much.
Dagda06117032: Good! Yes, you understood John's feelings perfectly there.
Dirt Rider 712: Thanks, Cameron was going to confess her love for John but she thought better of it… Sorry you didn't get that!
Thanks to Dre4mwe4ver again, folks, I replied your review here instead of in the chapter of the story. His/Her review is very long and after I finished replying all your reviews, I felt like I have written a chapter of my story, though a short one.
Feel free to skip this if it doesn't strike your interest but repeat, there may be hints (repeat, it is hints, no spoilers of the main body) in the song lyrics as to where the story is leading to.
PLEASE DON'T MISTAKE THIS FOR A SONG FIC! IT IS NOT! JUST FOR PURE ENJOYMENT PURPOSES.
NOTE: You can also view a YT video on John/Cameron to this song (Something like what John and Cameron's relationship would be) - .com/watch?v=ALWE9kta85c&feature=PlayList&p=7E6D200CDC8577C3&playnext=1&index=33 – Thanks to MagickWiccan92V2(Creator of this awesome video)
FALLING INSIDE THE BLACK BY SKILLET
(This song is from Cameron's point of view)
Tonight I'm so alone
This sorrow takes ahold
Don't leave me here so cold
(Never
want to be so cold)
Your touch used to be so kind
Your
touch used to give me life
I've waited all this time, I've wasted
so much time
Don't leave me alone
Cause I barely see at
all
Don't leave me alone, I'm
[Chorus:]
Falling
in the black
Slipping through the cracks
Falling to the
depths can I ever go back
Dreaming of the way it used to be
Can you hear me
falling in the black
Slipping through the
cracks
Falling to the depths can I ever go back
Falling
inside the black
Falling inside falling inside the black
You
were my source of strength
I've traded everything
That I love
for this one thing
(Stranded in the offering)
Don't leave me
here like this
Can't hear me scream from the abyss
And now I
wish for you my desire
Don't leave me alone
Cause I
barely see at all
Don't leave me alone, I'm
[Chorus:]
Falling
in the black
Slipping through the cracks
Falling to the
depths can I ever go back
Dreaming of the way it used to be
Can you hear me
falling in the black
Slipping through the
cracks
Falling to the depths can I ever go back
Falling
inside the black
Falling inside falling inside the black
(Falling in the black
Sipping through the cracks)
[Chorus:]
Falling
in the black
Slipping through the cracks
Falling to the
depths can I ever go back
Dreaming of the way it used to be
Can you hear me
falling in the black
Slipping through the
cracks
Falling to the depths can I ever go back
Falling
inside the black
(Can you hear me)
Falling inside the black
(Can you hear
me)
Falling inside the black
(Can you hear me)
Falling inside, falling inside the black
In the next chapter, I'll go to the story! I promise. STAY TUNED!
Review at your own wish for this one, though not needed. I'll have the starting chapter of the story up by tomorrow and I'll post it, or maybe tonight.
P.S. This introductory chapter is for replying my reviews as well as sharing with you the title's origin. Don't hate me for pushing the first chapter of the story back…