Hey! No this isn't another chapter. Just a short side note. I have 2 reviews for this story, and none tell me where the problem is. not that i want you to list it all out or anything. but mind telling me where the problem is? typos? or something else? please do. I know this gets a fair number of hits, which makes me want to rectify the mistakes more, but with the knowledge of what they are.

Yes,so long to ask people to tell me the mistakes? Yup. 2 reviews,negative ones, don't make me sad, it's that i can't let readers read the story properly. that's all.