This is my first chapter of my first fanfic, so I'm sorry if it's not all that fantabuless. I'm trying to figure this website out…
Disclaimer: If I owned Twilight, this would be it a book, not on a fan fiction website.
EPOV
As I walked down Chicago's crowded, windy streets towards home, I was thinking about tomorrow. That would be the day of my father's return from the war. It would be wonderful to see him again after the year he had been gone, because I had missed him immensely. But for that one nerve-racking year, at least I had had my mother, Elisabeth. Though I was close to my father, my mother and I had always shared a special bond.
"Edward, thank god you're back! Will you please help me clean the house before your father gets home?" She said as I walked in the door.
"Alright mom, but what else is there to clean?" I sighed, my mother always was very particular of how the house looked, and there was always something to be dusted or mopped.
"Well, lets see… Oh! You could tidy all those books in the living room and put them back on the shelf." I myself was a big reading fan, and there were often piles of books lying in random places around the house. Until mom spotted them, that is.
The rest of the evening was spent cleaning every last inch of our two-floored house. Eventually, my mother noticed how sluggish I had become, and told me to get some sleep. I thankfully complied, and the next thing I new, it was the next day.
I jumped out of bed, eager to be ready soon enough to accompany mother to the center of town to see my father. As I ran down the stares, taking them two at a time, I found my mom waiting for me by the door.
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As we stumbled through the crowd in the town square, we saw several soldiers marching in the middle, awaiting their last order, the order that would allow them to come home.
Then I spotted my father, He was scanning the crowd restlessly, not bothering to listen to the general in front of him, and then he found us. Not waiting to be released with the group, he sped towards us, and once he got there, I found my mother and myself in a big bear hug.
"Oh Edward," My mother sighed, referring to my father whose name was also Edward, "I've missed you so much."
"I missed you too." My father replied. "Now let's get home."
Sorry, like I said, I'm still trying to figure this website out. I'm gonna post the next chapter right now (if I did this one right). Really hope you guys don't hate it!!!!!! Tell me if you do (if anyone even sees this) REVIEW PLZ because if you don't, then I'll assume you don't like it and stop!!!
-Stupidlamb