I rewrote this first chapter because I thought it was too simple. I tried to make it more descriptive. I hope my writing's better now. The first chapter I posted wasn't that good. I hope the rewriting made it better.
The New Girl
Hidden Leaf High: a normal high school with normal students. A new girl with strange bubblegum pink hair and jade eyes has arrived. What are the chances of her meeting his relative there? Very unlikely? Not quite.
Students were loafing around, napping, chatting, in a huge, and noisy, classroom. They seem like they don't give a care in the world. Some girls were either gossiping, talking about homework, or just talking about their interest. Guys and girls exchanged looks, waved at each other, gave high fives, and more. More time passed, and there was still no sign of their homeroom teacher.
A young, hyperactive blond had his arms folded and was rocking his chair back and forth impatiently. Finally he stopped. "I'm getting sick of this! He comes in super late everyday, and I have to put up with you," at this point the blond pointed his finger at a teenager sitting beside him, "every single day!"
"Hn," replied the other boy. He pulled down the hat he was wearing so that his eyes were concealed. Obviously the blond annoyed him.
"Sasuke, can you try not to act cool for once?" asked the blond sarcastically.
"Just shut up, Naruto," retorted Sasuke. He put his legs up on his desk and continued to ignore his friend.
"What did you say, teme?" Naruto said threateningly.
"There they go again," commented a boy with brown, semi-spiky hair. His little white dog gave a small bark that seemed to say that it agrees with him.
"Why don't you just stop giving Sasuke-kun trouble, fox boy?" shouted a red-headed girl from the other side of the room.
"Why don't you stop chasing Sasuke around like there's no tomorrow?" Naruto hissed under his breath.
At that moment, the classroom door slid open, and in walked a silver haired man with a mask over the lower part of his face. He casually walked to the front of the class, reading a small orange book. Finally, he closed it, and spoke, "Hello everyone. Sorry I'm late. I was actually helping this new student get to her class."
"Are we supposed to believe you this time, because it actually sounds like a believable lie, Kakashi-sensei," commented Naruto. Sasuke smirked at Naruto's comment. Believe it or not, those two were actually really good friends, despite their small fights with each other.
"You should, Naruto, because it's true. Sakura Haruno, you can come in now," said Kakashi.
In walked the new girl. Her long, pink hair sashayed as she strolled into the room. Some of the boys were impressed at the new student, but other boys completely ignored her. She isn't really that pretty, but she had some good looking traits.
"Start us off by introducing yourself, Sakura," said Kakashi.
The teenage stepped forward and stated, "My name is Sakura Haruno. My hobbies are listening to music, reading for pleasure, spending time with my friends, but at the same time, having some time to myself. I like my i-pod, my computer, dango, ice-cream, and my loyal friends. I dislike people who are too self-centered, who hurts other people's feelings, or hurt them physically." The rosette scanned the room, looking at her new classmates, when she spotted the boy who had his hat down, covering his eyes, with his legs up on the table. Her eyes immediately widened; she kept staring at the young teen.
"Don't tell me we have another one," mumbled a male student. It wasn't strange for new girls to fall for the popular Sasuke. In fact, it has happened so many times that the students had become used to it. This is just a normal, new girl who transferred to another high school, right? Not really. Soon her staring turned to glaring, and she quickly took her eyes off him.
"Heh, looks like she doesn't like you very much, Sasuke," taunted Naruto. "She's different. I like her already. The first new girl to actually glare at you, teme! I have got to get to know her better."
"Stop bothering me, idiot. You're annoying," mumbled Sasuke, taking off his cap. Naruto just stuck out his tongue at him.
"Okay Sakura, let's find you an empty seat. Oh, there's one beside Naruto. He's the boy with spiky blond hair sitting beside the guy over there with black, spiky hair," led Kakashi. He pointed to the two boys. Naruto was waving at Sakura enthusiastically.
Sakura casually walked to her new seat. Along the way, she could hear everyone whispering. Many girls were jealous that she could sit closer to their Sasuke. The rosette looked like she didn't care about the whispers at all. She plopped down in her chair and put her bag on her desk. She faced Naruto and gave a smile. Naruto grinned back.
"Hi there! I'm Naruto Uzumaki! Nice to meet you Sakura-chan!" greeted Naruto, extending his hand.
"Nice to meet you too, Naruto," replied Sakura, shaking his hand. Naruto gave her a high five after the handshake.
"He seems very nice. He has a very friendly personality. He must have a lot of close friends," thought Sakura.
"I'm actually blinded by his friendliness," commented Sakura's inner personality: Inner Sakura.
"This guy here," Naruto dragged the teen by the shoulder and turned him around. "Is Sasuke Uchiha."
"Uchiha, huh? No wonder he looks so similar. What are the chances that I would encounter his relative?" Sakura thought. She glared at Sasuke non-stop. The Uchiha was getting more and more nervous. Naruto kept grinning; the blond was enjoying the show.
"Sakura-chan? Do you hate teme that much? If you do, then I've got a new buddy to hang out with!" exclaimed Naruto, putting his arm around Sakura in a friendly way. Sakura stopped glaring and laughed along with Naruto. Suddenly, two pieces of chalk came flying towards Naruto and Sakura's foreheads.
"You two can get friendly later. Right now, listen to me," said a smiling Kakashi.
"Sheesh, Kakashi-sensei's sharp," whispered Naruto.
"Well, we were pretty loud," said Sakura.
"Dobe, will you and the new girl shut up? It's annoying," muttered Sasuke.
Naruto stuck out his tongue again and retorted, "Well, everything annoys you Sasuke. Are you emo or something? After all the years I've known you, I never expected you to be emo!"
"I'm not emo, you idiot!" hissed Sasuke.
"Just joking with you, teme," whispered Naruto. Sakura slightly giggled at Naruto's teasing personality.
"He seems really fun. I would avoid Sasuke Uchiha though," suggested Inner Sakura.
"Yeah, I agree. He seems to have a lot of fangirls too. I may need to avoid contact with him. I can literally feel his fangirls' glares piercing through my back," Sakura told her Inner, mentally.
Meanwhile, Sasuke was slightly intrigued by the new rosette. "She's definitely an interesting one. At least there's a girl who's not willing to throw herself at my feet. I can't help but wonder why she hates me. I can't seem to remember meeting her or doing anything to anger her. Hn, only time will tell, I guess," Sasuke thought.
It's short, but revised. I hope you guys thought it was better than last time's. ^_^
~ Sakura Uchiha Hyuuga no Sabaku