I don't know why, I just go overwhelmed with a idea for a new story that I just have to start writing it even though I am writing another one. The first chapter is in 3rd person.

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The fourteen year old began wandering through the woods. Her family is going camping in the woods because her step-father wants to bond with her. In the distance, she heard her name being called franticly. She did not want to return to that house. He had began molesting her when her mother was not at the house.

She just began moving faster. She hated him to the deepest pits of Hades. When she turned her head to the right and saw a buck running straight to her. She immediately noticed it was frantic-looking and must be running away from something. She stopped. She had enough coherency to know if it was dangerous to hide.

She made good use of the gymnastic lessons she had taken when she was younger. She jumped and ended up doing to make her landing while doing a flip around the branch. Then she saw it, there was a dirty-blonde boy that had his mouth to the neck of the deer. Before she knew it, she turned around and she was face-to-face with the predator.

All that was running through his mind was how her blood would taste going down his throat. In the distance, his family was trying to get there in time. They didn't know that by the time Alice had had the vision, he had already sunk his teeth into her neck. Edward had been hearing range and was racing to save the girl. He held his breath. He knew if he smelt the blood he wouldn't be able to resist. He was just entering the small clearing as Jasper began to sink his teeth into her. Edward ran full speed and knocked Jasper out of the tree with all of his force. He quickly covered his mouth and nose.

It was the only way to stop him. He had to stop his sense of smell. Otherwise, the poor girl had no chance against the powerful vampire.

She began to scream. "MOM!! SOMEONE STOP THE FIRE! PLEASE!"

Edward was too late. She was now doomed to the life of darkness that no one else had a say in. She had her whole life ahead of her. (A/N: I was going to end it here, but I am nice and will give you something else.)

As that last thought went through his head, the rest of his family arrived (holding their breath). Edward commanded Emmett, Rosalie, and Alice to take Jasper home. He began to tell Carlisle that the sweet, innocent girl had been bitten, but she told him herself.

"HELP ME! IT HURTS!! STOP THE FIRE!! PLEASE!!" At least, she didn't cuss that was a plus to Carlisle, Emmett did enough of that for everyone.

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Okay, if you like this please tell me. I may quit it. I don't know if I should or not. It was just an entrant idea.