Beta's Note: Okies, since I have no way of contacting the author of this fic (and I blame Shuwazi for that), I'm going to be changing some of the parts to suit what I believe would have been better. However, there are some sentences that kinda just stuff everything up for me, so, please forgive anything that seems choppy or out-of-place. If the actual Author of this story is reading this message and keeping an eye on this, please please contact me. Make yourself an account and send me a message. I feel bad changing things without your permission, since this isn't mine. Yeah, as you could kinda deduce from that, I'm going to start beta-ing this thing properly.
Anyways, I'm actually laughing at the number of hits that this little fic is getting. Seriously, it's almost pitiful.

Fantasy Castle: Chap3

He ripped it and threw it in the recycle bin. 'That letter was so fake, the stupid thing. Like I'd ever fall for something like that. Whoever wrote that was seriously idiotic to even think that something as fake as that letter could fool me. Plus the waste of paper!'

Turning around, Sasuke saw a lump in his pillow; something that he hadn't noticed when he walked into the room. He punched it and upon hearing a whimper, quickly took the pillow case off. Rubbing his eyes at the sight, he looked disbelieving. Naruto was all tied up 'naked'.
Sasuke was immediately felt his body fire up, his face flushing into a vivid shade of crimson. Whimpering, Naruto pleaded with his eyes for Sasuke to help him, but Sasuke simply stood there, drool accumulating at the corners of his mouth.

"This is going to be the best sex you're ever going to have with me, Naruto," Sasuke said, lust evidently pooling in his coal eyes.

Seeing the look of pure evil imprinted in Sasuke, Naruto couldn't help but blush intently. Desperatly, he tried to do something but his hands were tied up behind his back and both his legs were bound together at his ankles with rope. Squirming, he didn't miss the notion that Sasuke thoroughly enjoyed his helpless position.
Naruto's legs were all bruised from the treatment that he had experienced earlier, which had landed him in this demeaning situation n the first place. However, Sasuke couldn't have cared less, knowing that his self-restraint was breaking. Strutting over to the bound ninja, Sasuke's hands gripped the loose ends of the rope that secured Naruto's ankles together. A split second later, a scream threatened to slip pass Naruto's gag, as Sasuka pulled the rope even tighter.

With his mouth sealed by sticky tape, Naruto could only give a muffled whine as Sasuke's hand caressed his cheek.

Sasuke pulled Naruto's gag off, and smiled.

"What do you think you're doing? Untie me now! It hurts; why'd you make it tighter for?" yelled Naruto at Sasuke.

Sasuke had nothing to say, nothing that he needed to say. He simply looked down at the form beneath him, before deciding to allow himself some fun, pulling and nibbling Naruto's nipple. Naruto couldn't suppress his groan, despite how much he tried.

"Like it?" asked Sasuke, smirking.

"S-Shut up!"

Moving upwards, Sasuke started licking Naruto's neck and soon sucked on it. Naruto groaned a little louder this time, not even realising when Sasuke had strategically lifted Naruto up so that he would be staring straight at the crotch of his jeans. Naruto looked up at Sasuke, already knowing what he wanted.

"No, I'm not gonna suck the whole thing. It's big!" Naruto exclaimed, exaggerating only slightly.

"Don't worry, like you're gonna die just from sucking a big carrot," Sasuke dismissed. "Now, unzip my pants."

"But I can't, my hands are tied up!"

"Use your mouth then," said Sasuke evily, knowing that he had won from the look of resignation on Naruto's face.

Naruto used his teeth to get a hold of Sasuke's zip and pulled downwards. A whole big dick flicked up right in front of Naruto's face, and he wasn't really surprised to see that Sasuke wore no underwear. However, he could never stop his amazement showing eery time he saw how big he was. Sasuke was really big. Naruto gasped and Sasuke smiled.

"Hurry up and suck it," Sasuke urged impatiently.

Naruto slowly enveloped the tip and gradually eased half way, being especially careful with his teeth, lest he bite down. For a while, he licked the half of the length that was in his mouth, until Sasuke's impatience finally got the best of him and he forced Naruto's head all the was down to his ball sacks. Naruto found himself struggling to breathe, inwardly panicking. Sighing at the thought of having to do everything himself, Sasuke gripped Naruto's blond locks and began thrusting into Naruto's open mouth, saving Naruto from doing anything. Being the wimp that he was in the story, tears trickled from Naruto's eyes, saddened at the fact he couldn't do anything. His eyes flickered upwards, however, once he heard Sasuke's groaning and he found a fire igniting in the pit of his stomach.

He wanted more; from Sasuke, from their relationship, from himself.

Sasuke grip on his hair faltered and, with his newly-made resolution in mind, Naruto did what was wanted of him; he sucked long and hard, making Sasuke come.

"Na-Naruto, well done, you did well," said Sasuke happily, still exhilarated from his orgasm.

Naruto couldn't bare the idea of swallowing all the sperm from Sasuke's big dick, falling sideways and doing his nest to expel all of Sasuke's essence from his mouth.

"Oi, we're not done," said Sasuke, leaning over and watching Naruto continuously spitting out sperm. "Seriously, you could have just swallowed it. Come on already, get in bed." Naruto nodded his head and gave a puppy-dog look as Sasuke lifted him onto the bed. He was still tied up, which he did not like at all.

Sasuke looked at Naruto.

"You okay?"

"Oh, of course I'm okay. After all, here I am, still tied up like some sort of rag doll after being forced to give head," Naruto hissed, obviously pissed.

"Oh, I'm sorry," Sasuke reassuringly untied all of the ropes and let him free. Naruto smiled which meant a 'thank you' and made a place on the bed for Sasuke. Sasuke smiled softly, though he was still slightly apprehensive. He knew what he wanted now, and so did Naruto, it seemed.

"Are you sure I can go in?"

"Yup."

Sasuke wasted no time, immediately climbing onto the bed to join his lover. Kneeling between Naruto's legs, Sasuke made sloppy work of coating three of his fingers in his own saliva. Naruto took far too long, being the shy creature that he was when it came to sex, and Sasuke was getting too eager to be picky. Slowly, making sure that he didn't hurt Naruto too badly, Sasuke pushed one spit-slick finger into the quivering hole. He poked around for a few seconds, before simultaneously adding the second and third finger.

"Mergh!" groaned Naruto.

Sasuke kept on pulling in and out, until he found the place of Naruto's pleasure.

"Umph! Ahhh, ahhh" moaned Naruto.

"Oh, so that's the sweet spot, ey?"

Naruto flinched. Without a single warning, Sasuke took his fingers out and put his dick in straight away.

"Gah, too big! Sasuke, slow down!"

"Don't worry, it won't hurt much. You know you love it, anyways."

Sasuke thrusted, Naruto unable to help but moan in his usual ways.

It was hot, so hot, I thought I was on fire, I couldn't breath.

"Sasuke…"

Every move he made, I loved it, if only this could go on forever.

Sasuke slowed down his pace, not wanting it to be over too soon.

"I-in front too."

"Here?"

Sasuke started pumping Naruto's small dick.

"More, more, please Sasuke!" Sasuke did as he was told, thrusting and pumping as Naruto's erection just went up and up. Naruto couldn't hold it…

"Umph, gah, mmm, ahhh," moaned and groaned Naruto, spilling his completion.

"You were so fantastic," laughed Sasuke.

Sasuke pulled his cock out, only to find a very big hole and lots of sperm.

"I'll clean it later," smiled Naruto. They both embraced each other and fell asleep.

In some other part of the story (The beta does not know where)

"Lu Xun! Lu Xun! Please, wait!" shouted Guan Ping in the distance. Luckily, he managed to pick up the pace Lu Xun had and catch his hand. "Lu Xun?"

Lu Xun tried to smile, managing to turn the corners of his mouth upwards, but there was no warmth in his eyes. Guan Ping didn't know what to say. He held Lu Xun's hands tighter.

"I love you."

Lu Xun made a small frown.

"Don't say things you don't mean," said Lu Xun sadly, so quiet that it was almost unheard. Guan Ping's face became pale white. He grabbed both of Lu Xun's cheeks with his hands and held Lu Xun still, drawing his face closer.

"I love you a lot, please understand that," Guan Ping whispered, leaning in to give Lu Xun a peck on the lips, and hugged him.

Lu Xun could feel the warmth of Guan Ping's breath on his neck. A single tear escaped him as he returned Guan Ping's gesture, cupping his soft hands over Gaun Ping's cheeks.

"What's wrong?" asked Guan Ping, upon seeing Lu Xun's tear.

"N-n-nothing, I just couldn't believe my wish would come true; that you would ever love me back."

"I'm sorry; I didn't realise when we were young, but now, I know. I DO love you so much, Lu Xun, so much."

Lu Xun turned backwards and hugged Guan Ping. Guan Ping kissed Lu Xun again, just with a more adult kiss this time. Rainbows shot up right in the air, and fireworks came, and Chinese music came, and lastly a dog came and farted.

Lu Xun and Guan Ping giggled.

"Have you seen a blonde boy by the name of Naruto?" asked a boy with red hair, who, like all the inhabitants of Sasuke's Fantasy Land, popped up out of nowhere.

"Yeah, he's in the castle of Sasuke's. Why do you ask?" said Lu Xun politely.

The red boy just smiled and bowed his head, and went off without a word. Guan Ping and Lu Xun became worried, questions entering into their head. Who was this boy? And what did he need Naruto for?

Lu Xun looked at Guan Ping and Guan Ping understood straight away. They were both about to run in the direction of Sasuke's castle, when a sudden voice called out to them.

"Hey wait! Can you please tell me where this little red haired boy went? He's going to cause a lot of trouble for my nephew, Naruto," said a random young lady with pink hair.

"Uh, he went that-a-way" said Guan Ping, pointing. Lu Xun nodded and the young lady with pink hair ran off in that direction.

"Good idea Guan Ping, but it wasn't really nice to give that young lady the wrong direction," said Lu Xun.

"Ah well, we'd get in more trouble if we give the real direction anyway," said Guan Ping before continuing with their dash towards Sasuke's castle.

And now we're back in Sasuke's castle (The beta is suddenly craving ice-cream, and has decided to make little notes at every scene change in a sad attempt to postpone beta-ing)

"Naruto?" Sasuke woke up dazed. "Hey! Fatso, where are you?" Sasuke called Naruto's name again and again but heard no reply.

"King Sasuke! King Sasuke! There was a red-haired boy carrying Naruto out of the castle! We couldn't catch up to them. The red-haired boy brought a beyblader with him, I think?" reported one of the maids from Sasuke's castle, showing up as she was needed in the story.

Sasuke gasped. "Beybladers? They're not allowed in here!Only Yu-Gi-Oh duellists should have access; what's going on?" Sasuke stood up from the bed, starkly naked. "Get my clothes, quickly, I'll be in my sports car soon!" Sasuke wondered who in his Kingdom could have red-hair and a beybalader as a bodyguard.

Suddenly, a fit of giggles came from the window. Sasuke looked over to see a man with long, silver hair wearing a mad-ass black, leather costume, which was part of his design. One thing that was out-of-place, however, was a fluttering pink cape with little golden stars sewn into the fabric. It was very unbecoming.

"Do not worry! Sephiroth the Super is here! I have come from very far, just in that neighbourhood, near Cloud! Cloud will come soon with his chocolate factory!" Sephiroth let out a girlish laugh with his hand over his mouth. Sasuke lifted one eyebrow up. "Naruto, that's who you're looking for right? Anyways, I found him. He and the other two guys he was with went into Cloud's chocolate factory and Cloud got angry, cause they started eating all his chocolates, so I think we should fly there." Sasuke looked at over at the eccentric man that Sephiroth was in the story.

"Fly?"

"Yeah, I got a cape and everything, no harm done," Sephiroth said, twirling his cape around.

Sephiroth picked up Sasuke and they both flew off. Sasuke had never been to the Chocolate factory before, and because only five children were allowed, he was going to be the sixth.

"We're here!" Sephiroth did a spectacular landing, and put down Sasuke.

"The factory is sure small," Sasuke commented and went inside.

Lo and behold! Every room he wandered into was full of chocolate. Sasuke felt sick, looking at the large amount of sweets that covered the floors. Sasuke roamed around everywhere, but he still couldn't find Naruto.

'Yeah, thanks. Right after, the best sex we ever had just to be taken away by two guys, I couldn't even protect him!'

Sasuke didn't give up, however, and he found new friends along the way; the five children who had been lucky enough to draw the golden ticket. A new pokemon and Harry Potter's seme, Professor Snape, Mickey Mouse and of course, Milhouse and Bart Simpson from 'The Simpsons'.

Sasuke didn't mind them following him, because as they were the five children who had received the tour of the rather small chocolate factory, he was sure that they knew where they were going.

"Ha-ha! Mickey Mouse knows that Cloud's office is that-a-way!" said Mickey Mouse enthusiastically.

"Ah, okay, thanks for your help slash assistance," said Sasuke sarcastically. Sasuke made his way to Cloud's office, where he could hear the sounds of his lover's voice.

"Gah, Gaara, go away! And get that booblader away from me!" yelled out Naruto, looking at Gaara over his shoulder.

"He's not a bad guy! He's just Tyson! Come on, he's a legend!" yelled back Gaara, as he chased after Naruto.

"Naruto!" Sasuke felt so much happiness in his heart. Latching onto Naruto as he ran past, Sasuke pulled Naruto into a gentle hug.

"Umph, Sasuke? Sasuke!" Naruto gave Sasuke a big smile.

"I found you, I found you!" Sasuke was so happy he let out a big hooray and did a little teeny dance, then lifted up Naruto and spun him around.

"Hey, calm down! Gaara's here, did'ya know that?"

"I noticed."

"Nice to see you again, jerk," Gaara looked at Sasuke with eyes filled with disgust and loathing.

"Same here."

Naruto looked at Sasuke then looked at Gaara, before looking back at Sasuke.

"What you did to Naruto in the past; you still remember right?" said Gaara angrily. "You hurt him in everyway, you killed him! And my mum sacrificed herself to save Naruto's life!" Gaara stared into Sasuke's deep dark black eyes.

"Get a life, Gaara, and stop putting your nose into other people's business!" Sasuke and Gaara looked like animals fighting each other, even if the only thing they had done was throw insults at each other.

"Stop it, please!" Naruto pleaded, feeling left out since the fanfiction was supposed to be based solely on him and Lu Xun.

Gaara backed away, walked in the other direction and out the door.

"Hey! Get all your bums out of here except for The King, Naruto, and the five children. The rest of you get lost!" Cloud called, waving his hands around to address his point. Naruto was beginning to wonder just how the people of Sasuke's land could materialize out of thin air, like Cloud had.

Everyone whose name had not been called walked out of the factory.

"Cloud! I've been looking for you, Rufus was too. We gotta go up to heaven and take care of some business," Sephiroth shot a flirtatious smile and wink in Cloud's direction.

"Already? No wait, give me a second, I just need to take the factory with me," said Cloud letting out his own set of wings. Sasuke turned to the five children and waved, meaning for them to leave as well. Tugging on Naruto's hand, he pulled him out of the factory and they watched as Cloud carried the factory away with him. Then, he turned to Naruto.

"Did he do anything to you?" Sasuke asked.

Fantasy Castle: Chap3 End

Beta's Notes: Lookie here people!! I actually did a real job of beta-ing for this chapter!! I've twisted a lot of the wording, as I'm sure I had mentioned before, plus, I've added some of my own sentences. Like, the description of Sephiroth's cape, the notes in-between scene changes and even the line " feeling left out since the fanfiction was supposed to be based solely on him and Lu Xun" I had fun writing it, though, so I can't complain. It was hard, I'll admit. Anyways, don't expect this kind of treatment for every chapter. The quality of the chapters all depend on my beta-ing mood of the day - maybe I'll even post up a chap that hasn't been beta-ed at all!! Muahahah Anyways, to the laughable number of people reading this, comment/review ya? ANDDD SOMEONW FRICKING GIVE ME THE EMAIL OF THE AUTHOR!!

And yeah, I admit that the ending of this chapter was off. Hey man, I'm not the author!! To the author: sorry for taking so long with this anyways, but really, I do need your email. It's hard beta-ing something for someone without me knowing what kind of situation you want to create. If there's anything that you don't like with this version of your ff, please contact me somehow.