Hey everyone

Hey everyone!

Sadly, like all things, this story has come to an end. I just wanted to thank the people who stuck with and read this story, it is my first fanfic ever and I really appreciated the reviews. I am pretty bad at writing endings, but I tried my best and I hope you enjoyed it. I came up with this story listening to my ipod and was thinking about how much I loved it in MR3 where parts of the story were all fang's POV and he was always thinking of max. and how he would react if he lost her perminatly. But since I wasn't going to kill her off I needed to find a way for him to feel like he lost her, but also have an opportunity to get her back. Also it had always bothered me that Fang never did tell max that he loved her. And I thought that maybe, a close call would give him and her an extra push to get together. Then it was stuck in my head and I couldn't get it out. I tried to make it as much like the book dialog as possible and add some references to earlier books. It would be great if anyone had any suggestions of how I could improve for my next story (if I write one) or any other advice you guys have.

MiChIgAnDeR

p.s. thanks again for reading

p.p.s. with the advice thing, tell me if its okay if i use your suggestions for this story like "maybe fang should say sadkfjlsf here" and i will give you credit at the bottem of the page if i use it. i just don't want to be accused of cringes in horror PLAGARIZING!

p.p.p.s. I really do wonder if there is a limit on how many p's you can put infront of the s.

(see ch. 2 if confused)