My First Invader Zim Story I hope it gets 5 reviews At least...

Invader Tak: Mistakes

I looked at my new planet. I was finally being able to invade it since Zim found out he was banished

there. This Blue planet would most certainly please the Tallest and Daddy. I say daddy, for Purple is my

father, I know my mother was a Purple Irken too. Tallest Red always seemed to be the one looking for

Earth I don't know if they stole his Water-free candy-bar or something but Zim's special to him...

Why am I talking about Zim? It's been 8 years I'm 17 he's 16. Am I actually Anxious?

Well I landed where the hot dog stand used to be and had to go to school. Hey I'm smart. I know more

than Zim does about this stuff...Ugh!

My human disguise was different I wore a top that exposed my stomach with a blue scratchy skirt.

My hair was still purple but in a different fashion. I walked in as close as to a, "I'm not here to hurt you" pose as possible. Dib and Zim stared at my shirt. I looked down quickly to make sure I didn't

have The Irken sign on it. "What are you guys staring at." Dib blinked twice to answer. Zim kept

looking. I liked this attention. No! No I didn't! "Nothing just your purple eyes" Dib flirtingly said.

"Nice try that glance was too low" I said ignoring my accent. "Tak?" Zim muttered "Hmm?" I said

turning around. He still had on his horrible costume. "Zim?" I said pretending to be surprised.

" Wait.. Tak?!" Dib said almost embarrassed. "Yeah." I thought "You got that right you were checking

out an alien" I thought. I looked at Zim he had a defeated look on his face. My darn Teenage Irken

instincts took over as I started to comfort him. "What happened?" I asked scaring myself. "You know

very well" Zim grumbled. "What?" Dib had that confused expression on his face " Humans" I said.

"Eh?" Zim asked. I giggled. If this were a battlefield then I was losing badly. "Meat-sacks" I said.

He gave me that okay look. I could feel their eyes staring at my top for the rest of the thing. "Dib!"

I said. "Stop staring...That's awkward it's okay if it's Zim or any other skin condition kid but you creep

me out" I said. Zim looked as if he had won a war. Mr. Ill dismissed the class early today. " Hey Zim"

I said stopping him. I stared for a second at his face. "What?" He asked "Sorry. You look like you

desperately need a snack" I said handing him a square of pureed beans. " So what were you staring at

earlier?" I love this it's slowed torture for a narcissist to admit he likes somebody.

"Wondering about..." Zim started. "Need another snack?" I said giggling. "Thanks" He really bit this

one. Okay so he asks me out I turn him down perfect plan! "Zim wondered what those would look like

on display" Dib finished. "I, Zim would never!" He said yelling at Dib. "So?" "You just looked pretty

and stuff" Zim said so low I could barely hear him. "Thanks..." Irkens usually got more straightforward

questions. Had he forgotten his own culture. "So does the Tallest still call you?" I asked. "Only Red"

I looked confused. I felt faint my pak must have lost a lot of power. "Tak you okay?" Zim asked going

behind me. " My pak..." I said standing up. " I have a recharging area at my house" Zim offered.

This Irkens were used to. Sometimes trips would be friendly or romantic. Either way it ended with a

dance. "I can walk.." I said falling again. Zim caught me this time. I looked in to his eyes and in the

fog I could only say one thing. "Red?" I said before passing out. I woke up in his recharge area.

Figures Invader or not Zim was Zim. "Where am I?" "My recharge area" Then the computer beeped

it was from the massive. "Yes Almighty Tallest!" Zim said. "Are you alright Zim? We haven't heard-"

They stopped looking at me. Dad looked white and Red looked from me to Zim "ZIM WHAT ARE

YOU DOING WITH TAK?!" They yelled. "You didn't dance did you? I will hurt you-" Dad said

taking charge. "Zim...You haven't right..." Red shuddered. "No we haven't! He saved my life" I

said. "Zim? Save? LIFE??" Purple asked. I looked at Zim and Red. "Zim? I have a question" He did

the same thing with Purple and me. "Is it about dancing?!" Dad yelled "No! Da-Tallest I'm an Invader!

I don't want..That" I said. "Did she say da?" Red asked. "Tak you're related to a Tallest??" Zim asked.

"Are you?" I asked. He looked like a red clone. "No." Zim and Red said at the same time. "Zim are you

lying to me!" I yelled. "I don't know Tallest you talk this out-" "Zim..." Red ordered. "Tell my kid the

truth!" Dad yelled. "I...Was" Zim said sadly. "You Banished a Tallest?!" Dad yelled. "He's not a tallest

he's only 150 units high!" "He's your son!" I blurted out. Dad nodded. "It's okay... I like it on Earth."

Zim said. "They have all these snacks." The Tallest ended transmission after a long fight. " You..."

I said almost intimidated. I stood in front of the next Tallest. "Are a Tallest?!" I said excited. "An

Exiled one." "So I'm in the house of a tallest!" I said. "Dad never lets me in his house Red doesn't like

me." "Everyone Hates me!" Zim said making me feel better. "That's not true Zim." I said "I like you"

I said. My once time enemy had become my only friend. Zim got an uncomfortable look on his face

and looked around the room. "So how much do you know about Earth?" "Humans?" He nodded.

" Well they have nice clothes." I joked. He leaned in closer. "And when they want to show affection.."

I started staring in to Zim's red eyes We leaned in for a kiss. Then Dad and Red got on screen.

"Aghh!" We yelled."What were you two doing?" Red asked. "Human fighting ritual." I answered

before Zim could screw things up. "See Purple they'd fight each other out of house and home."

"Zim needs no home!" I giggled a little. "Surprised you still have one with GIR." Red replied.

They got off transmission. "Computer! Next transmission show rubble falling or something."

Zim was determined to do something. "You are still Irken." I said. "Zim will always be part of the

mighty Irken Empire!" He said full of pride. I can't remember what happened the hours that came.

I looked around. Zim's house. "This is bad." I said. No doubt it we danced. I ran to the base scared.

What if?- No we'd be careful. "Mimi!" I cried. "Yes Ma'am?" I was shaking. "Scan for lifeforms!"

I was almost half-dead when she read the number "3" Zim is a dead man.

Zim's Day

I woke up with no knowledge of what happened last night "Oh, that's right." I said. We danced.

I thought again. "We danced?" I said out loud. "Computer scan for lifeforms in this house"

"1" I looked at him confused "When Tallest find out it will be 1" It was a Saturday so I might as well

get a new Irken shirt on. There was a knock at the door. "Computer?" "It's your girlfriend" I

looked onward. What if- No, no Dear Zim no. "Time?" "2:00 PM" "Greetings Tak!" I said as

cheerful as possible. "Hi Zim I'm just here to spend some time here and talk to dad" She said.

"Computer!" "Yes The Massive called this morning." Purple and Red got on screen. "Greetings my

Tallest" Tak and I said. " Tak mission report"I grumbled about Myself. "Earth has a weakness to

anything smarter than a blumbee" They looked interested. " My Tallest pardon my asking, but how

are things on the Massive?" Tak asked. "Not very good." Purple said. "Hey this is about your mission

not our jobs!" Red said offended. "My mission can't be better." "Wait there's something different."

Purple said. I noticed this too about Tak I think... Purple says random things. She looked...odd.

"Have you gained weight?" That was what I noticed. "Yeah the snacks here are great after being

in that old ship." Tak said. Red glanced to Purple. "So did anything go on yesterday?" They asked.

Of course Red wouldn't buy it he's my father and is brilliant like I am. "No I lost the fight." She

said quietly. "So... What's that problem?" Purple blurted it out easily. "Smeets are decreasing and

dying" We looked at each other in a look that said "That's good" "Purple!" Red yelled "What they have

rights!" "Okay you two want the truth?" Red asked. We nodded. "All I need is the truth from you."

he said pointing at Tak. "We've been afraid that younger generations of Irkens are having smeets and

they are dying." Red explained. I walked away slowly.. "And truth you require is?" "Are you having

Smeets?" Red asked. Tak gulped. "How would you tell?" She asked. "well your body has urges to

want smeets and it tells you to flirt with the first person you see." Red told her. Only that part. "So

What I feel for Zim" "Is temporary." "So He was just my play buddy." "Unfortunately you found Zim"

I walked out in to the clear open now. "Tallest are you mad?" She asked. "no... Purple maybe... I'm

distressed." "So you got suckered in." Red asked. "It was either me or Dib-stink." I said harshly.

"I'm going to get a bag of snacks for Purple." The transmission ended. "A smeet." I said. She nodded.

"Great Irken is ruined." I said.