So, hello, long time no see!
Right now, I'm kind of starting an experimental fanfic, or a couple of them, and I would like feedback. Just so you know, your feedback will decide it's life. The fanfic, I mean. Yeah... Just saying...
Sooooo, the pairing is up to you people.
Hopefully, you like this story, the chapter's short, but it'll get longer, I promise, although I don't have much time on the computer, restricted to an hour a day...
Disclaimer: I don't own Inuyasha. DUH. I wish.
Summary
Kagome lives in the shadow of her sister, the most popular girl in school. Tormented and made fun of for not being beautiful like her glamorous family, her life is a living hell. Until she gets a chance to study abroad. Now Kagome is back, hotter than ever, and revenge has never been sweeter...
Chapter 1
Kagome walked through the doors, parting a way through the chattering crowd with her generous body, and greeted her friend, Sango.
"Hey Sango!" said Kagome cheerily.
Sango gave her a quick glance, then turned away. "What did I say about talking to me in public," she hissed.
"Sorry," said Kagome, her head drooping. "I forgot."
"Well then, you better not do that again!" spitted out Sango. "And what the hell are you wearing?"
Kagome donned a plain white shirt and jeans over her very ample body.
"If it's possible, it makes you look even fatter than you are now!" Sango snorted.
"Sango!" A high voice called out.
"Rin!" Sango's demeanor changed instantly to a bright, cheery girl.
"Kikyou is coming with Ayame and Kanna. They are just so slow. I mean, they seriously need to hurry up, or wake up earlier," complained Rin. "Oh, by the way, I absolutely love your outfit!"
Sango was wearing a tight pink shirt with cherry designs all over it, a short red miniskirt that barely covered her ass, and strappy red stilettos. Her nails were painted pink, her hair was in a ponytail, and her eyelids, lips, and cheeks were overapplied with more shades of pink.
"Really? I love yours too!" squealed Sango.
Rin was wearing an orange kimono top with pink flower designs. However, it was obviously far too big for her and it was sliding off her shoulders, giving any perverted guy a good look at her abnormal cleavage. 'Total boob job,' thought Kagome. She was also wearing a tiny pink miniskirt that actually showed some of her red thong.
"Hey, bitches," said Yura, walking up to them.
She had on a bikini in a pasty shade of pink, with a sheer veil covered her naval, tiny, white, leather microshorts, and strappy pink heels. Her hair was quite short and a brownish color. Her breasts were also abnormally large, done at the same appointment as Kikyou. Her face was so heavily caked with makeup, you can barely see her facial features.
Just then, the doors slammed open, and three girls strutted inside.
The first was wearing a ripped up, tight red shirt and tiny, black, leather micro shorts, complete with a pair of high, red stilettos with ribbons wrapping around her calves. Her overlarge breasts bulged inside her little shirt. Her brown hair was done in a very high ponytail. The girl somehow managed to look more indecent that a stripper. Her overdone makeup had the same basic color: pink. It was obvious she had gotten plastic surgery on her massive chest and her nose. Her brown eyes searched around the room. She was at the head of the three girls.
The next girl had red hair that was in two pigtails. She wore a white, see-through cami with 'Bite Me, Bitch,' on it in pink letters, and a pair of pink barely-there, leather shorts. Her bra was a bright, hot pink color, very noticeable under her see-through cami. Her ensemble was complete with a revolting pair of knee-high, lace-up boots. Her outfit clashed horrible with her hair.
The last girl had a blank look on her face. Her clothes consisted of a white cami bellyshirt, a white leather mini-skirt, and white ankle boots. Her hair had two white flowers on either side of her hair. Her skin and hair were incredibly pale.
'Kikyou, Ayame, and Kanna,' though Kagome revoltedly.
She noted that all of them were stick thin.
She walked over to a boy with silver hair and adorable little doggy ears at the top of his head. He had on a black muscle shirt and very baggy jeans. His feet were adorned with Keds. Kagome blushed. It was a certain hanyou. A very specific hanyou. One named Inuyasha. She had a crush on Inuyasha. For five years now, in fact. The two began making out.
'If Kikyou was a bit taller, Inuyasha would suffocate in her false cleavage,' snickered Kagome mentally.
Disgusted, Kagome turned away, only to see Sango intwined with Mirouku. Mirouku was a cute guy with violet eyes and hair always in a little rattail. Today, he wore a white muscle tee and baggy jeans. He had the reputation of one of the most perverted boys in school. Kagome saw Mirouku slip a hand under Sango's miniskirt, and roving around in it. Sango seemed pleased, and giggled.
Ayame was leaning over to Kouga, a handsome ookami youkai with piercing blue eyes and jet-black hair. Rin was falling over Sesshoumaru, or 'the ice prince.' He had long, silver hair and liquid gold eyes. Kanna went over to Naraku, the school's biggest slimeball. And a manwhore. And somehow one of the most popular people in the school.
"Little piggy little piggy, the cafeteria is in the other direction. You're going the wrong way," Kikyou said snidely.
It was as if Kikyou had given a signal. All at once, insults began to pour in.
"How much did you eat today?," "Don't squish us, please!," "Earthquake!" and many other insults to Kagome were thrown at her.
A tear trickled down her cheek, and she ran for the bathroom.
Kikyou smugly smiled, snickered, and went back to making out with Inuyasha.
Bathroom
Another tear trickled down her face. Kagome had no idea what she had done to receive all of this hate. She glared at herself in the mirror. She was incredibly overweight for her age, her eyes were squintly, she wore huge glasses, she had braces, her face was red with acne, her lips were chaffed, her hair was short and frizzy, etc. She could see why everyone made fun of her.
And she endured this every day.
At home
"Kagome, get down here!" yelled Kun-Loon.
Kun-Loon was Kagome's mother. Quite pretty. A short, stylish bob. Pretty, sophisticated face. Thin. She loved her daughter, but she was uncomfortable around her. Kagome was just so ugly! It was hard to believe that Kagome was part of the Higurashi household, seeing as everyone was so pretty. Even Souta, Kagome's younger brother, was good looking. He has already had around ten girlfriends, even at the age of nine.
"Dear, I got a letter from a friend who lives in America. Earlier I had sent a letter, asking about an abroad program. She says it's fine for you to live with them. What do you think? Thing is, it'll be for 3 years, and you're only a freshman," Kun-Loon said.
Tears filled Kagome's eyes.
"If you don't want to go, you don't have to," said Kun-Loon.
"NO!" yelled Kagome. "I really want to go. Please. Please."
"Alrighty, then, you're leaving tomorrow!" cheerfully replied Kun-Loon. "Better start packing! Oh, and you will get allowance, and bonuses at holidays. It'll be like you're still here, just at a sleepover or something..." Kun-Loon trailed off as she heard how stupid she sounded.
Kagome ran up to her room.
'Finally, a fresh start.'
Next Day...
"Kagome, are you all packed?" asked Kun-Loon.
"Yup," replied the ectastic girl.
"Eat your breakfast, quick," said Kun-Loon. "We have to leave in thirty minutes."
Kagome began to eat some cereal, but could barely eat anything, due to her excitement.
"Kagome, are you really leaving?" asked a mournful Souta.
"Of course I am, snot," she replied affectionately. "I'll be back, though, don't worry."
Souta spluttered at the snot comment, but smiled at his sister. He had always loved his sister, no matter how big or ugly. He had to say he hated Kikyou. Kagome was his favorite sister. And he would miss her a lot.
Airport
"Why do we have to be here?" grumbled Inuyasha, who had followed Kikyou.
"Kagome is leaving," she replied, bored.
"Why should we care if that ugly bitch is gone?" growled Inuyasha. "Who cares about a butt ugly fatass like her?"
Kikyou nuzzled Inuyasha's neck. "We can go to your house later," she whispered huskily.
Inuyasha grinned. Jackpot!
The two, engrossed with each other, missed Kagome boarding the plane. In which they wouldn't see her for the next 3 years.
On the other hand, Kun-Loon and Souta had sent off Kagome in a tearful goodbye.
Kun-Loon something about her baby growing up, and Souta about losing his sister.
On the Plane
"Bobby, get away from her," said a woman sharply, holding said boy by the hand.
Bobby was staring at Kagome. He couldn't believe all of the flesh was attached to her body.
"Bobby!" The woman yanked him away and took him to his seat a couple rows back.
Kagome sighed. She would never stop getting all of the unwanted attention. Already, before the flight was to take off, she could already sense many pairs of eyes on her.
"Please fasten your seatbelts, everyone, we will be taking off shortly..." the pilot said over the intercom.
Kagome pulled her seatbelt to the maximum length and put her seatbelt on with much difficulty. She sighed again.
Many Hours Later...
Kagome stretched out her legs and yawned.
"Please fasten your seatbelts, the plane should be landing shortly." The pilot sounded far away and distant on the intercom.
Kagome reluctantly put on her seatbelt difficultly.
After Coming Out of the Airport...
Kagome walked through the airport, looking for 'her' family. She finally found a cardboard sign with 'Higurashi Kagome' on it. She walked over. The family, which consisted of a mother, father, daughter, and son, all stared at her.
"Higurashi Kagome?" asked the mother.
"Yes," replied Kagome.
"My name is Alyssa Heartz, and this is my husband, Josh Heartz. My daughter, Claire, and my son, Derryk," she explained.
Kagome looked them over. Claire had bleached, white-blond hair with an inch of brown roots. Her hair came up to her shoulders, and was very glossy, obviously work of a blow dry at a cheap, knockoff salon. Her cheekbones were low, her nose was too small, her lips were thin, and her eyes were cold and distrusting, not to mention that she was incredibly thin. She wore a hot pink pantsuit. Kagome would guess that she was fifteen, around her age. She eyed Kagome with disbelief and ridicule.
Derryk was certainly handsome. He had tousled, very dark, coal colored hair and blue eyes. His body looked very fit. He wore a semi-tight black shirt with a Nike swoosh on the front. He had on baggy jeans, and a black pair of Keds. He eyes were glassy, and he looked bored. He looked about sixteen.
Alyssa was a middle-aged, yet beautiful woman with a heart-shaped face. She was a slender, cheerful woman. She had her hair in a bun, and wore a black suit with a white blouse. Her tortoiseshell glasses were perched on her nose, and her generous lips, touched with light pink lip gloss, were parted in a huge grin.
Josh Heartz was a well-built, powerful-looking man. He was well built, and was wearing a black tuxedo with a white blouse and a red tie. His dark hair was slicked back, and had piercing blue eyes. His eyes were somewhat cold and hard. His face betrayed no emotion. His aristocratic features were very suited to his form.
"You'll be coming with us for the next three years," Alyssa said cheerfully. "You can just call me Alyssa and my husband Josh."
"Thank you very much," Kagome replied.
Alyssa said, "I hope you will be comfortable at our household. If you need anything, darling, don't hesitate to call one of the maids. My husband and I are usually away at home, so you'll probably have to go to one of the maids. Hopefully, Claire, Derryk, and you will become good friends."
Kagome smiled. "I hope so, Mrs. Heartz."
Alyssa laughed. "Don't call me Mrs. Heartz, please, it makes me feel really old. Alyssa will be fine. And you do speak English, right?"
"Of course I do," replied Kagome.
"The limo is waiting outside," Josh interrupted. "We should get going now."
"Of course, dear," replied Alyssa cheerfully.
The unlikely group went out, and tumbled into a limo. The seats were buttery soft, there was a many-sided television suspended near the roof of the limo, and a fridge stocked with various waters and food. Expensive ones, of course.
By the end of the three hour ride, they got to a huge mansion. It was white stucco, with a navy blue tile roof. It had flowers bordering the neat edge. Kagome was impressed. Very impressed. This is where she will live for the next three years.
They got out of the car. Alyssa led Kagome through a maze of halls, and showed her to her room. It was plain white, in which Alyssa said that she could decorate the room as much as she wanted. It was pretty bare, except for a white bed, a white desk, a matching white chair, a white rug, and a white lamp. Kagome lay down in the bed. It was very soft and comfortable. Kagome grinned. She was going to like it here.
So, how was the first chapter? I'll try to make it longer.
Hopefully, you people will R&R.
PLEASE.
I'm dying for feedback here.
Should I continue my story?
Or no?
Yes, I do notice the difference between Say0miSaki's incredibly good stories, but after the first two chapters or so, it'll be way different. You'll see. And I can't write that good anyway.
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