This is my first story please don't be mean.
Summary: main character introduced, plot begins to unfold (yay).
Ummm yea there's not much more to say so let's get started.
Oh and the story will switch pov's once in awhile.
Oh and also some chapters will be in past tense. Just adding this stuff as it's my first story ).
Chapter 1
I was walking down the road on a dark starry night. It seemed almost…eerie to have it this dark. Maybe it's because the streetlights are out and I'm so used to having them on when I walk down this street. Anyway my name is Caroline….well I can't remember my last name. It's been so long since I was last called by it.
I am 16 years old and I have black hair…like a lot of other people around here…
Well anyway I was walking and walking looking for a good place to sleep. You see I'm homeless and the only way I survive is by going to the homeless shelter but I got there too late today so I have to sleep hungry and cold tonight. As I was looking for a place to sit down and sleep I head a rustle in the bushes as a man leapt at me. Next thing I knew I met the ground and everything went black…
The next thing I knew I had awoken in what seemed to be a test tube. There were some people in white coats all moving slowly around but when one of them saw I was awake and seemed to motion to his colleges and they all hurried over. When they all saw that I was awake they all started cheering and said something about an experiment being successful…
The next thing I knew I was on the floor spluttering and for the first time I realized that I was naked (crap).
I covered my feminine parts with my hand…not that it really made much of a difference. Then one of them spoke to me. "Here put on some clothes fast." He then handed me a small stack of clothing. I accepted it gladly and quickly put it on.
As I was putting it on, one thing that really creeped me out about this place was that the people in white coats seemed to be staring at me and the walls were all white. When I looked down at the floor, it seemed to reflect everything around it a little. There were some beakers for possibly something in a science lab. I suddenly realized that maybe…the experiment they were cheering about was I. I decided that it would be a good idea to just keep my mouth shut. I also realized that they might be scientists. So I'll just stick to that name for these people
I then realized that I seemed to have a pair of icy blue wings on my back. I tried to make them move and to my non-believing eyes they did! I flinched when I moved them, then started to shake. This was the scariest thing I had ever seen in my life. I would have gazed at them for a long time but then one of the scientists ushered me to hurry up.
When I was finished putting on my clothes, one of them called me and said in a deep tone "follow me". Of course I had to follow him what choice did I have? The wings on my back felt a tiny bit restricted by the clothes I was wearing but I didn't have time to worry about that right now. We walked out the door and into a long corridor filled with doors. I walked beside the man whom was guiding me. After what seemed like a few minutes of walking we reached a large door labeled "container" on it. He opened the door and kicked me in. He then locked the door and I was once again alone in the dark.
So what'd you think of my first chapter of my first story?
Please do some R&R D
Pretty please? With a cherry on top even?