Ok, I should be doing HW instead of writing this fic, or perhaps working on "Differences", but I finally got a good idea for this sequel. Well, on with the show…oh yeah, and it's still in Pan's POV
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The Laws of Love
~ Prologue ~
"I love you so much," I said as I kissed his soft, tender lips. I could feel his arms wrapping around my waist, pulling me closer to him. I gasped as out warm bodies touched, my bare chest pressed against his. I ran my fingers through silky hair the color of lavender petals blowing in a mid-summer's breeze. My eyes caught the gaze of two orbs as blue as a tranquil ocean…peering deep into my soul. I then let my heavy lids fall as I felt my body move closer to my sheets…
BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! BEEP!
I rolled over and rubbed my eyes groggily, trying to unblur my vision, though it seemed only to make it worse. Damn alarm clock. It woke me up during the same part of my dream over and over. I've been having the same dream for a few weeks now. The fact that I have it doesn't really bother me…but the fact that it has no beginning or an ended. I have no idea how we get where we are, or where we go from there. It's just an undetermined moment in time…
I actually know what moment it was. It was the moment that my life changed forever. It was when my conventional notions of loved changed. Love does not have a rulebook, and it has no confines. It is a brutal game, a challenging institution…as lawless as the Wild West of yesteryear before it was one. But, it seems this game can never be won…it is a war to be fought…only to have unfortunate casualties.
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Hehe…I don't know when I'll actually start writing, but I guess I had to let y'all know there was going to be a sequel. Remember, expect the unexpected and don't complain about pairings.
After reading a particularly disturbing review, I decided to make my first official Author's Rant…
Hello and welcome to Sosoru's Theater. Today, I'm going to go out of my normal routine to address certain issues I've seen come up when reviewing my reviews. A fellow FFN author, Purpleflame, said, "Ok, please don't hate me, but I decided to review you work and uhm...origionality? You seem to use Trunks & Pan in most of your fics and people look for interest in difference, your fics seem to lack these. Your stories are kinda monotonous!" while reviewing this prologue.
Now, keep in mind, I have nine fics uploaded for viewing. Three of them are Sailor Moon fics, one is an original work. The others are DBZ fics. One is a G/B, one is a humor fic and the other is pure angst with T/B. When I wrote something original, like "The Ties That Bind", I was given reviews like…
"EEEEEEEEWWWWW!!!!! BRA!?! The only time I ever saw a brother/sister
relationship was on Jerry Springer!!!!"
and…
"The T&B thing? Eww, having a brother myself that seems totally gross! No offense, but I hope it's nothing that has to do with them doing something they shouldn't, lol that makes no sense"
So, Purpleflame, your assumption that my fics all contain T/P is wrong, for if you had actually read my fics, she would know that. Secondly, you talk of a lack or originality when three out of four of your DBZ fics contain MT/Son Thai (yes, I actually read through yours). As a matter of fact, I reviewed you fic "Eternal Love" before you claimed it was "new and improved" and I tried to give you pointers, which were obviously ignored upon reloading. I also left a review for you in "An Androids Ultimate Destruction" trying to give you more pointers. So, do not tell me what I lack and what MY readers want until you examine and improve your own writing. And no, I don't hate you and I don't think I'm the Sama of DBZ fics…but I do feel you are no in to position to talk.