I thought up a bunch of new plots, but this is my favorite one. It's about Sandpaw dying and yeah…so here's a prologue!
PROLOGUE
Firepaw slashed at the ShadowClan tom's nose. The brown tabby tom stumbled back, blood pouring out of his nose. He hissed and aimed a swipe at Firepaw's ears. Pinning the flame-colored apprentice down, the tabby tom lowered his head for the killing bite.
"Let go of him, you lump of fox dung!" A loud screech echoed the clearing, and suddenly the weight of the ShadowClan cat was gone. Firepaw blinked open his eyes and saw a lump of pale ginger fur and brown tabby fur rolling together in a mass of teeth, claws, and whiskers.
"Sandpaw!" Firepaw called. Before he could leap into the battle, Dustpaw flashed by and grabbed the brown tabby by the scruff of his neck. "Dustpaw!" Sandpaw gasped in anger. "I could've handled that lump of fur and bones by my-"
Before she could finish, Firepaw saw the ShadowClan deputy Cinderfur leap onto Sandpaw's shoulders. Sandpaw rolled over and battered at Cinderfur's soft underbelly with her hind paws, but it was too late. Cinderfur opened her jaws, revealing sharp white teeth and sank her fangs into Sandpaw's throat.
"Sandpaw!" Dustpaw yowled. He darted to the ginger she-cat's side. Sandpaw was lying on her side, gasping and shaking violently. She slowly turned her head to face Dustpaw. "Sandpaw! Don't…don't die!" Dustpaw wailed, pressing his nose to her fur. "Dustpaw," Sandpaw croaked with a gurgling sound in her throat. Blood bubbled out of the wound in her neck as she spoke. "Tell Firepaw that I-"
The sandy colored she-cat's pale green eyes rolled into the back of her head. Her body convulsed, and was still. "Sandpaw…" Dustpaw whispered. His voice rose into a sharp wail. "Sandpaw!"
Awwwww…sadness…not very long, but this is just the prologue. So don't review saying, "try to make the chapters longer" because this was all I could write to make it short and cliffie. And yes, I'm aware that all of this is italic (slanted). This is kind of like a flashback for poor Firepaw. Anyways, please review! Sayonara!
Peaceoutyall,
Amberstar