Questioning You Love

Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto...


You sit there, staring at him

Do you even know I'm here?

Or is it just that one

That has captured your stare?


Could it be, that you've realized,

That he doesn't see you that way?

That all your hopes and dreams

Of him will now just fade away?


Is that why you turn to me,

With tears in your eyes?

That the fool couldn't he see

That you are the perfect prize?


And still you now pursue him,

Why are you so dumb?

To try and catch the heart of

Him, that bum?


Please, just listen,

If only for a moment?

To the words I've struggled with,

And maybe, you can catch the hint?


Is he all you really want,

The one to make your day?

Can't there be another,

Who can send away the gray?


Is it true that you can't notice,

That you're the only one I see?

If so, would you just realize

That you are the world to me?


Take my hand, I beg you,

To see things as I do?

If you'll just come with me,

Maybe you could feel this way too?


Now that you feel this way,

Do you regret your past?

The fact that you once ignored me,

Doesn't effect how our love lasts?


I'm glad, truly, beyond words,

But with one answer will you, me bless?

If I asked you to marry me,

Would you dare say yes?


This was something that started out as a onesided SasuHina (I'm currently obsessed with the pairing, and can't find any good fics. If you know of one, please tell me!), but seems more like NaruSaku now that I reread it...

The only reason I wrote this was because I was terribly bored(Writing an essay for Language Arts will do that to a girl...). I also realized something. I get most inspired to write something I enjoy writing while trying to write something for school. Ironic, no? I just felt like posting this because...well, I'm bored, half-sick, supposed to be sleeping, and I want some constructive critisim. I always feel like any poem I write is incomplete, so pleae, be kind and review! Thanks for reading! -