The lights were blinding, as blinding as blinding could be, one peek alone left me reeling out of control, as though I was looking directly into the sun itself. After keeping my eyes firmly closed for a few seconds, I breathed in and out, in and out, before braving another peek. Everything blurred in and out of focus, and I was unable to distinctly make out any shape or form more than a metre away from my face. Was I dreaming? Was I dead? Was this heaven? Hell?
I looked down at myself, and tried to lift my hand – which took as enormous effort, as it felt like trying to lift a tonne. When I did finally manage to move my hand, I felt a pain shoot through my entire body, as though I had just been struck by a bolt of lightening, I let out a slight moan of shock. I looked to my right and saw a bar; I reached out my hand towards it and clung on for dear life. Something then caught my eye – a person sat on my right stirred, as if woken from a light sleep - and then suddenly jumped up in surprise. Their outline jerking suddenly caused my head to spin like a merry go round, and I groaned again as they screamed at the top of their lungs; "Oh my god, finally!"
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