Ok, the first chapter, put this one's a bit better. Please give me as many suggestions and feedback as possible. If you have any ideas on how to make this different from other stories like this then please tell me, I want to hear them!

Ch.1

Naomi groaned loudly as she struggled to wake up. She took a quick glance at her watch.

"Oh my god!! I'm going to be so late!! What happened, why didn't the stinkin' alarm go off? Why-WOAH!!"

Naomi looked around and found herself surrounded by trees. Lots and lots of trees. O.O Naomi cautiously walked up to one, as if it could bite her at any minute. Her finger reached out and poked it. She walked all around the tree and poked it constantly, until she was finally quite sure it was a tree. For a second she just stood there, staring at the very real tree.

"WHAT THE HECK AM I DOING IN THE MIDDLE OF A FREAKIN' FOREST??" Naomi shouted at the sky. Birds flew out of the trees, squawking frantically.

The sky didn't shout back. Nothing did.

Naomi looked down at herself and found herself wearing her clothes, remembering how she'd fallen asleep in them watching TV. Well, at least I'm not stuck in the middle of the forest in my pj's, she thought, relieved. Looking down she saw her duffel bag, and remembered how that had been her pillow falling asleep. She quickly opened up the bag and looked inside. In it she found her work out clothes, a bottle of Mountain Dew, her rollerblades and skateboard, her special cap and jacket, and a lifetime supply of gummi bears and kisses. Naomi grabbed a Hershey's kiss and popped it in her mouth, reading the fortune to herself. 'Changes are coming.'

"Wow….these things sure are slow. Stupid fortune, what do you call this?! Is this not change enough for you?" Naomi slapped her forehead, "Listen to me, I'm talking to a piece of paper. Five minutes out here and I've already lost it."

Naomi crushed the wrapper in her hands and stuffed it in her bag as a strong wind blew over her head, blowing off her black cap.

"HEY! My cap! Get back here you good for nothin-OWW!"

Naomi hopped up and down on one foot mumbling angry. That was when she noticed she was barefoot. People didn't sleep with shoes. Her sneakers were probably still at the foot of her bed.

"Oh for the love of-!! You could have at least let me keep my shoes!!" Naomi shouted up at the sky.

Another hard gust of wind blew, blowing Naomi's cap even farther. Screaming a bunch of angsty, mumbly nonsense at the universe, she went hopping after her hat, attempting not to stub her toe again.

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