Edward was too late.
EPOV
I drove around Port Angeles with my window a quarter down trying to find her scent. I had turned off the radio and focused on the thoughts surrounding me. At the next stoplight I waited and heard a faint voice in the back of my head,
Now that were done with this bitch we can just leave her here for someone else to find.
Without waiting for the stoplight to turn green I burst through it to find the owner of the thought. Turning down a deserted street I suddenly cursed Bella for being so stupid to go down a deserted street at night. Stopping the van first I got out of the car and ran at a vampire speed to the abandon factory and crashed through the door. I saw five guys surrounding my naked angel. I growled at then and got ready to spring but then the scent of Bella's blood hit me. I closed my eyes and tried to ignore it. I suddenly heard someone yelling in my head
Don't breath! Rose is coming! Control your anger and bring her to our house!
I acknowledged it as Alice and focused on not breathing.
"Get out." I spoke calmly to the men. I didn't need to say much because they scurried out incredibly fast. I carefully walked closer to Bella. I heard her heart beating and saw come gashes along her body. I closed my eyes and heard Rosalie come up from behind.
"Bella, sweetie, can you hear me?" Rose asked in a sweet voice. Bella cringed. "No, don't worry Bella, its Rosalie Cullen from school."
Give me your jacket!
Rosalie's voice hissed in my head. She was at Bella's side now and had a hand out for my jacket. I shrugged out of it and handed it to her. Since it was big enough she wrapped it around Bella.
"Bella, my brother Edward is here and he's going to carry you to our car." Rosalie's sweet vampire voice persuaded her and I carried her to the car. I was about to set her down in the backseat but she clung to my clothes. Her eyes opened for the first time and she barely whispered,
"Don't leave me," she whispered. I felt a strange emotion as she held on to me but couldn't identify it.
"Hey Rose, drive," I told her supporting Bella with one arm and tossing her the keys.
Why, you wanna be with your wittle baby?
"Rose!" I said sharply,
"Fine, fineā¦Grouch," she said lowly putting the keys in the ignition. Bella closed her eyes and let me hold her in my lap. I breathed in and let her scent fill my life.
This is my first time doing a twilight fanfic and I already know that I could never match up to Stephanie M.'s way of writing. Has anyone else read new moon in under six hours? I'm talking the WHOLE book. I have and my friends think I'm crazy.