A/N: Ok, so I got an anon comment and soooo want to answer to it so here goes, hope this commenter notices.

Beautifully written. Only a few minor things that could be improved
I jumped a mile as something sounded above me and leaves rustled as it took
flight.
I gave in so willingly and gratefully that I nearly missed the harsh
pounding that did not belong to the night…
(did she miss it and fall asleep, or is she playing at sleeping when he
comes?)
No creature could enter as long as the moon shone
didn't she enter?
But what she wasn't aware if was the fast approaching cloud,
shouldn't the cloud have moved from covering the moon sometime during their
confrontation? or was it storm clouds that came
Very good story. You deserve an A. I'll be checking out some of your other
stuff. Hope to see more soon.

Firstly THANK YOU!I LOVE YOU! Hahahahaha! I love getting reviews and especially one like yours! So thanks a lot and please do check out my other work cos I'd love for you to read it. And please feel free (I implore you even) to show other and spread the word! Now to answer you questions (and happy to!):

1.she didn't fall asleep, in the back of her mind she register that there was pounding but was too exhausted to realize what it was and drifted in and out of consciousness, it wasn't really important so didn't explain it, as that would sidetrack.

2. she entered because she is a child of the light, a good soul so lunar protection is protection for the good, protection against evil. I suppose I could have put in any evil creature could enter.

3.have not really thought about this I just saw it as one long strip of cloud, you know like a missive patch that almost fills a while load of the sky, covers the moon. It's kind of like that but yes they're storm clouds as it does rain later.

And lastly thanks for saying I deserve an A, was so happy I got an A for my original writing as I do want to be an published author so that's great! Yes! I am getting back into my fan-fics a bit so hopefully will be updating more often soon, yay! But I have to work on my book too. Thank again!

Love you all guys, sorry this isn't another chapter.