Okay, I feel a little bit guilty. I know I promised that I would stop writing depressing stuff for awhile... But I guess I did techincally already fulfill my FFA promise, (for those of you who don't know what I'm talking about, see the author rant from the first chapter on Yumi's Bouquet) so I don't have to feel quite so bad. I need to talk less. Anyway, enjoy!
Fallen Angel's Deathnote
Fallen angel weeps
as she writes her final note.
Her friends are all gone.
---
Once, there stood five strong
before the darkness came and
took them one by one.
---
Times were getting hard.
Evil was threatening to
overcome the group.
---
First was the trickster.
He tried to lift their spirits
out of gloominess.
---
Violet eyes full
of laughter, he helped them learn
to smile again.
---
But disaster came.
And the enemy attacked.
He was the target.
---
He could not escape.
And the violet eyes closed.
The laughter was gone.
---
Fallen angel can
watch, but she can't cry. For she
has a job to do.
---
She was the next to
go. Her brown eyes shone with the
courage in her heart.
---
One of the group loved
her. She helped him through the loss.
He held together.
---
But disaster came.
And the enemy attacked.
She was the target.
---
She died in his arms.
And the soft brown eyes closed and
the courage was gone.
---
Fallen angel can
watch, but she can't cry. For she
has a job to do.
---
At first, he spiraled
out of control. He lost his
grip on sanity.
---
Then he decided
to fight for her. His jade eyes
filled with his power.
---
But disaster came.
And the enemy attacked.
He was the target.
---
He whispered her name.
And the pained jade eyes closed and
the power was gone.
---
Fallen angel can
watch, but she can't cry. For she
has a job to do.
---
Only two remain.
He loves the fallen angel.
And she loves him most.
---
They continue to
fight the darkness. His blue eyes
alight with wisdom.
---
Together, they learn
how to beat it, but her life
will be on the line.
---
Fallen angel knows
that she must do this. Her job
will be completed.
---
She is still afraid.
He comforts. And their plan is
put into action.
---
But the evil knows
of the danger. Angry, it
decides to strike back.
---
And just when it seems
that victory's near, the blow
comes. Evil's last act.
---
And disaster came.
And the enemy attacked.
He was the target.
---
He told her goodbye.
And the bright blue eyes closed and
the wisdom was gone.
---
Fallen angel has
watched, and now she can cry, for
her job is finished.
---
Fallen angel weeps.
She holds his cold body close,
whispering his name.
---
None of it matters
now, though the darkness is gone.
Hollow victory.
---
Fallen angel can't
fly. Her heart and wings are both
broken, shattered, now.
---
Fallen angel stops
crying when her note is done.
Her friends are waiting.
---
Fallen angel will
die. And the green eyes will close.
The angel is free.
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I'll be quiet now. We both need to get on with our lives. Until next time,
Railynn