A.N/ Well. Here it goes! This is my first fanfic. Please R&R! Im not going to post the next chap. until I get 2 reviews. Yup. A measly 2. Get R & Ring! LoveeYooh!XO

Disclaimer: Nope. Last time I checked I wasn't a man, my name wasn't James Patterson, and I didn't write Max Ride.

Claimer: I wrote this crappy fanfic though! Enjoy!

--Max's.POV--

Black. The darkness engulfed me, dulling my senses. I let out a tiny groan, and tried to wiggle my fingers. Immediately a bolt of pain spread up my arm. I heard a scream. Was it my own? My whole body felt so heavy, my arm burning from where I tried to move. Being Maximum Ride, I tried moving my arm this time, and my whole body seared with pain. I screamed out, louder this time, and I realised the first scream had been mine. The pain was unbearable, and I screamed again as another wave of pain cut through me like a knife. I tasted blood inside my mouth from where I had bit my tongue, and warm tears flowed down my cheeks. I didn't struggle to fight them, I just lay there, waiting for the darkness for completely engulf me.

I immediately tensed as I felt someone take my hand, but a familiar voice filled with emotion whispered in my ear. "Its OK Max." whispered Fang. "Hold on". I welcomed the darkness around me, and each wave of pain got less as Fang rubbed circles smoothly round my hand. I sighed, and let my body fall in the intruding darkness.

--Fang's.POV--

I hate it when Max's like this. I admit I was starting to think that the Brain Attacks have stopped, but obviously not. I tried not to touch Max, trying not to put her in any more pain. I've never seen her like this before, and even though I was trying to stay calm for the younger kids, deep down I was panicking. Max's attack had started over an hour ago. I sighed, and tapped Iggy's hand, making sure he could look after the younger kids. He nodded, and then exclaimed, "Common guys. Lets make a fire!" There were a few half hearted cheers, and a few last looks at Max, but ten minutes later, they all were occupied climbing over wood and making a fire for Iggy. I smiled. It was so easy to see why Max cared so much for her flock. But recently, she seemed so different, so unhappy. I was awoken from my thoughts by another scream from Max. I hated this so much, but I knew she would be going through worse. I whispered in her ear, telling her it was OK. I gently held her hand, and starting to rub hypnotic circles round it. She sighed peacefully, and almost immediately her breathing slowed, and her body relaxed.

She looked so peaceful in her sleep, so beautiful. Angel looked over and smiled, and a look of surprise crossed her face as I smiled back. The thought slipped her mind almost immediately, and she continued to play light sabres with Nudge, sequels of laughter emerging from the two girls.

--Max's.POV--

I woke up, and winced. Fang had a hold of my hand, and was tracing hypnotic circles round it, and I immediately relaxed. I don't think he realised I was awake, so I smiled and closed my eyes, enjoying Fang's company and the small murmur of voices and squeals from the flock. Fang must of looked at me again, and let out a small breath of relief. His face, for once, was full of emotion, and he smiled as though glad that I was awake. "You OK?" He asked. I was amazed. Emotion was seeping through Mr Emotionless' voice. I smiled, and simply replied with a 'how's the flock?' Fang sighed, realising I didn't want to talk about the brain attack right now. He nodded, and turned away, but continuing the hypnotic circles round my hand. I turned towards him, and put my head to his chest, using him as a prop. I felt so weak and tired, and I hated it. I relaxed in Fang's arms, watching the flock helping build a fire.

The Flock easily calmed me and I let out a sigh of contentment and closed my eyes. My whole body was aching, yet I was happy and relaxed. Before I knew it I had fallen asleep in Fang's arms.

There you go! First chap!Did you like?

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