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im also known as a reviewer "action naruto lover"
and this is my first story
Title: Hiraishin no Naruto : Naruto of the The Flying Thunder God
Summery: The chunin exams preliminaries and finals matchs are different, Orochimaru and the sand never invaded, and who is this cloaked figure? and Naruto decides to reveal his true power and be feared as...Hirashin: The Flying Thunder God. Naru x OC!
WARNING!! THIS IS JUST A TEST STORY!! (well i might add some chapters someday if im not shy) IT MIGHT NOT BE UPDATED!! I JUST WROTE THIS SO SOMBODY CAN HAVE IDEAS!!! and maybe someone can write this for me)
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chapter one: the real Naruto
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Naruto POV:
Naruto looked at his so called teammates, cell 7 with hidden contempt, anger and strangely relief. 'Tch! look at them...fools, if only they knew '. Naruto thought as he spy Sakura, Sasuke and kakashi outside the village, his eyes narrowed to Sakura who is ranting how good it is without the 'dobe' around. "bitch". He muttered.
"My so called TEAMATES just went to another mission without me again, and they still thinks I'm too stupid to notice they're gone!" Naruto ranted quietly "and Kakashi sensei used kagebunshin no jutsu (shadow clone jutsu) and henged the clone into me so Sandaime and Iruka wouldn't get suspicious," he continued.
'But why am i so angry?' he thought, 'Shouldn't i be happy that they're gone for a mission that will last two weeks, which gives me time too spare and to do some real training without them around, so why am I SO FREAKING PISSED!?'
With a chakra enchanted fist, he busted the wall behind him and froze realizing what he just hit, the good news is the wall does not belong to his house, but the bad news is, that the wall belongs to the building where women soak in a hot bath after a rough day.
"calm your self Naruto" a demonic voice out of nowhere.
"he's right Naruto" this time a mans voice.
Naruto ignore those voices as he took out a kunai, but it wasn't just an ordinary kunai, this one is tri-tipped with kanji writing on the taped handle and then Naruto flashed some complicated chains of hand seals with speed that only jounin level shinobi can follow, and disappeared in a flash of yellow before anyone or rather pervert hating women came dashing to beat up anyone who blast the hole just to peek at them.
Seeing no one, the half naked/naked women walked backed in but not until they heard a perverted giggling.
As if they have pervert radars, they ran to the source of the giggling to see a white long haired man, and then they do what women do to a peaking Tom.
They came, they saw, they beat the crap out of the perv,
and the paticular long haired pervert was still giglgling after a harsh beating. mumbling how he got a "boobies". in his face.
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Naruto who appearance and the not so quiet personality has makes other think of him as a pushover and those 'think' they know him will either in disgust, annoyance or as a grandson/older brother/little brother or a son figure. He is considered shorter then most kids at his age at 12, at stood least 4'9, he wears an orange jumpsuit and pants that seems too big for him and inside of all of that is a scrawny, malnourished, body. He has tan skin, sunny blond hair, sky blue eyes and whisker like marks with 3 horizontal lines on each cheek.
The said boy is now standing in his broken down apartment, it was suprisingly clean but smells like a mixture of ramen, rotten milk, and well...old.
He reached is room and plopped down on his bed, relishing the comfort it gave him.
"Arashi, Kyuubi tell me,do you think im strong enough for the exams?". Naruto asked, Yes thats right Namikaze Arashi A.K..A "4th Hokage" and "Konoha's yellow flash" is sealed within Naruto and also the legendary Kyubi no Kitsune as well.
"Hmmmmmm" replied the legendary man and legendary beast "maybe after your bed time," they answered.
"WHAT!?" the demon vessel exclaimed "BUT I'M NOT EVEN TI-," and eyes eyes began to droop and every part of his body screams tired!
And with that his head fell on the pillows and instantly fell asleep.
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"Narutooooooooo...waaaaake uuuuup..."
"Waaaaake up Narutoooo..."
"..."No responce
"...sigh..."
..."DAMN IT!!, WAKE YOU HUMAN FLESH BAG!! W.A.K.E U.P WAKE UP!!!!!"
Naruto bolted on the other side of his bed... "AAAaHHHH...!!!!" and landed on his head "!OOOOOWW"!! he cried, and after a minute he calm down...and exploded again "DAMN IT KYU-TEME!! YOU COULD'VE GIVIN ME A CONCUSSION!!" He screamed.
The magnificent beast roared with laughter.Yondaime with having a concerned face, while his mind is saying."take that you little punk! Thats for tying me up on a pole while your eating MY storage of ramen!!". cackled chibi Yondaime said while slapping the bottom of chibi Naruto's butt.
"Aaaarg whatever after i get a leak, then i'm going to the ramen bar(1), "he said to his mental/soul neighbors and left for the bathroom, drowning out the voices of his Father and the kitsune but not until he stopped to look at the alarm clock,
'Hmmmmm, 6:32 huh? In a half an hour I'll finally do my reguler training scedule since I joined team 7' naruto with a scowl at thought of his teamates.
NARUTO'S LIFE POV STARTS HERE
Naruto was not who he seems, his giddy loud personal was nothing but mask,a disguise to protect him from true danger, and it all started when the nine tailed fox spirit attacked Konoha and as a last resort the yondaime Hokage of the hidden leaves used "Shiki Fūjin" (Dead Demon Consuming Seal) to seal the great beast into a newborn child.
But in a enexpected turn Yondaime messed up on one of the seals, which resulted both kyuubi AND Yondaime to be sealed into the belly of a the newborn child, his son Namikaze Naruto.
Before all of this, a bloody and petrified leaf chunin, came back from a mission to report that a nine tailed fox was coming this way, and every one in the village was prepared but they were no match to the furry behemoth.
As for 4th hokage Namikaze Arashi and his wife Namikaze Kushina, the hieress from a powerful clan of lightning users was now was 8 month pregnate with Naruto and they were heartbroken by what they're going to do.
The blond Hokage was sad that his decision was going to make Naruto fatherless and hoped that his village are going to see his son as a hero.
Kushina was heartbroken when her husband was going to seal the demon into THEIR child and her husband was going to die, but she promised after this she will take her son back to her home Kumogakure, the cloud village where her clansman/family are.
After the battle between Konoha and kyuubi, she has left home because she thought her two love ones are dead, but she never knew that her faithful followers had lied about Naruto's death because they think he would bring disgrace the clan.
Years pass by, and the village was rebuilt but mourn for their deceased loved ones and decided to blame the one who holds the creature who killed all their loves ones.
When Naruto was 6, he was beaten by a mob because he just bumped into someone, and with a blow to the head resulted him to his consience(?) and met the one who made 6 years of his life hell, Kyuubi the legendary demon lord himself and shockingly the 4th Hokage himself as well, also the man declared himself Namikaze Arashi, and what almost send him to oblivion, was that he also declared himself that he was Naruto's father.
At first Naruto hated them both and refused to speak to any of them, which resulting a sad, depressed Arashi sitting in the corner and kyuubi was just...not caring at all, but soon got lonely and sulked in his cage, since he didn't have Arashi or anyone to talk/argue because the 4th and Naruto were the only beings that has ever lived and talked to him for more then 5 minutes.
As time pass by Naruto decides to give them a chance and soon talked freely with them without any glares or being harsh to them, making Arashi cry like a baby and hugged the chibi version of him (which made readers go "Aaawww" or "coughcoughCORNY-cough !!"
Soon they started training him, soon progress was made and Naruto was chunin level at age 9, jounin level at age 11 and ANBU captain level at his current age 12 and he was able to do all of this and with his fake happy personality under the eyes of the entire village, not even the 3rd hokage who keeps tabs on him, never knew of his secret training.
And with the help of his mothers bloodlne he could do lightning jutsus without hand seals or without much difficulties.
After team 7 was made and done successfully completed their first c mission (which turns out to a an A-B class mission) they stated to ignore their orange clad team member.
But they never noticed the glares, death glares and the middle fingers directed by their ignored teammate.
NARUTO'S LIFE POV ENDS HERE!
He reached his destination and decided to look in the mirror to see a face of a chubby 12 year old boy, tan skin and all, blue eyes with one eyelid threatening to droop, his blond spiky hair is ruffled even more then usual and 3 lines on his cheeks to resemble whiskers.
Naruto stared at his reflection and muttered "kai", with a small poof clouds engulfed the boy.
Soon the clouds faded and the boy replaced by a slightly different looking boy appeared.
He was only in his boxers and was no longer a stood 4'9, but now 4'11 or around Sasuke's height and he had a body that 12-16 year old boys would kill, he was well built,t an and had a face that can make Sasuke make a run for his money, his eyes are more narrowed and his bright, happy blue eyes are replaced by a cold, fierce,I ntense electric blue, his hair sunny blond was no longer spiky and mid short, but now it was waist length with many long bangs hanging down his face, giving him a dark, sexy "wow he's hot/cute/gorgeous" look. (think of Envy from Fullmetal Alchimist but thicker"fuller" and same sunny blond color )
"Aaaaaaaahhh". he sighed "this is how i should be-,,,"
"CREEEEEK" he heard the door to his house open
Naruto's eyes widen in panic and his heart was thumping hard through his chest.
'what!? who would be at my house at this time!? it can't be those villiger can it!!?'
and what seemed to be minutes the bathroom door opened and reveal...
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AWWW!! im so evil to leave a cliffhanger! AND I KNOW!!! I ADMIT IT!! I SUCK AT WRITING!!
Also I prefer Yondaime name as Arashi because I like it better and sound better then "Minato" so "Namikaze" means "Wavewind" and "Minato" means "Harbor"
And "Namikaze Minato" means "wavewind Harbor". But I prefer "Namikaze Arashi" and it might mean "Wavewind Storm".
WARNING!! THIS IS JUST A TEST STORY!!(and my first story) IT MIGHT NOT BE UPDATED EVER!!( well maybe i could add another chapt or two if im brave enough)
but i don't know any jutsu in japanese and i can't write to save My own life! I JUST WROTE THIS SO SOMBODY CAN HAVE IDEAS!!! and maybe someone can write this for me)
but i really want my ideas spread so i could read other peoples version of this.
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