This is my first lil story. Please review and tell me how I did. This is in Fang's point of view. Please go easy on me, this is my first.
WARNING: CHARACTER DEATH!
DISCLAIMER: Do we have to do these things? I DO NOT OWN MAXIMUM RIDE OR ANY OF THE CHARACTERS JUST THIS LIL STORY!
I always knew this day would come, just – just not this soon. I was made for a purpose. My secret, one I had kept all these years, one that nobody else knew. Now for me, the time has come.
I feel so alone. There's no one I can tell, No one I can trust. No one. My deepest darkest secret, no one can know… not even my best friend… Max.
It was my watch; we were staying in a cave somewhere in Arizona. I looked around at the sleeping flock then took out a sheet of notebook paper and a pen. I had to leave the flock, I couldn't risk it. I couldn't risk their lives.
Placing the letter on the ground I began to write:
Dear Max,
Hey this is from Fang. I need to tell you something, something I should have told you a long time ago. Do you remember that time when we were in that old abandoned house of squatting crack heads? You told me, on the way back to Anne's that when I snapped my wings out I had looked like the angel of death. Well, the easiest way to explain this is that's what I am.
I was made for destruction, to destroy the world. Yours was to save it, from me. We were supposed to battle each other until one of us killed the other. We were exact opposites. If Jeb had never been there to bust us out of the school they probably would have turned me into an eraser, or I would have been dead. Before we were – saved the whitecoats injected me with a syrime. A syrime that is suppose to kick in two years after that. The syrime is supposed to turn me evil, or show more evil then I already am.
All I can say is that they probably found a way to speed up the process. Tell the flock that I miss them, and tell them I'm sorry. Sorry for everything. I have to go. I'd rather lose myself then the world. I can't control myself anymore. When I see anyone, anything, I have the greatest urge to just – crush it. I don't know how much longer I can restrain myself. There's something I want you to do, just don't look for me.
I sighed, just one more thing to write.
Max … I really sorry, and there's one last thing I need to say. I love you.
Good bye forever,
Fang
I glanced down at the paper trembling in my hands. Folding the paper I started walking towards Max. I leaned down and gave her a kiss on the cheek.
"Be safe."
I whispered in her ear. I checked the sky around me, it was just slightly getting pink and the flock would wake soon. As I walked to the very edge of the cave I took one last look back then jumped off, fell about ten feet then snapped my wings out and headed towards the forest I'd seen earlier.
When I got there I ran to the place where I'd seen a large cliff. I knew what I had to do, I have to help save the world, not destroy it. I looked down at the bottomless pit; all I could see is pitch black. I held my arms out, bound my wings behind me with a jacket that didn't have holes, closed my eyes…
"Crack"
A twig snapped behind me, as an instinct I quickly put myself in a fighting stance. Using my raptor vision I saw a small silhouette coming closer and closer. The person slowly stepped out of the shadows. Angel.
"Stop."
She said trying to control me. I really hoped she could but… how could she control someone who can't even control himself? I shook my head, and tears started forming in her eyes. The rest of the flock came up standing next to her. I looked at them with tears streaked down their faces. I didn't bother to look at Max, I couldn't.
"I'm sorry, I can't risk it."
I said slowly backing up until my heals were almost off the end.
"Good bye."
I stretched my arms out, leaned back as far as I enough that it let me fall. Falling towards my end. Besides the wind rushing past me I could hear faint cries of the people I loved. I was plummeting towards the ground. This is the way I wanted it to end. Alone.
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