I Want You
Authored by dark-halo-princess
:A Smallville fanfic:
Pairing: Clark Kent and Lois Lane
Genre: Romance, Drama and Humour
Rating: K+ (Some content not suitable for younger ages)
Note: Rating may change later on.
Date last revised on: 12/10/08
Disclaimer: I do not own Smallville or any of its characters. This fanfic is created from my ramblings with the use of the characters from the show.
Prologue
There was no light.
No air.
No warmth.
There was only the blessed dark.
The last clumps of soil hung by the sharp edges of the stones, lumped together, smelling foul and appearing sickly. All around, surrounded were stones and stones of different sizes and shapes, jutting out from beneath and from over each other. There was no order, no system to that of what was once nature's creation. There was only mould and the slight glimpses of those pink earthly worms.
Sitting there snugly, surrounded by all of nature's decomposing creation, was an object.
An object so smooth, yet rough and cold to the touch – were anyone to even find it.
The object lay like a crown amongst its jewels, waiting for that someone or something to come for it.
Authors note: Well, here it goes. I'm back guys! I'm planning to revise what I've got of the story so far (not going to change much) – just basic editing and grammar stuff. I feel that the story lacks depth so I'm going to work on that and try to bring the plot a little together. I can already see in my mind what I want – it's just that harder task of getting there.
Anyway, for those of you who have already read this story (what there was of it), you'll notice that first part is new. The prologue I mean... I'm looking for feedback to tell me if I'm on the right track and if my changes are either too bothersome or good. And I will be saying now that unlike last time, I will be replying back to my reviewers – either by private message or a shout to them through the updates.
That's all I've got to say and thank you for reading.
Please read and review!
Ciao! (He – I'm trying to act cool).