Authers note: Great! now all the the 4kids suporters, this isn´t the mad-house (where you belong) but a very violent fanfic. All non-4kids suporters (sane people) I hope you enjoy!

Disclamer: My wordly possesions consist on a pot of peanuts and a album of photos of Carlos Baute, oh, he´s so goddam HOT, so sexy, so hansome... Oh, yeah, lets get to the point: I DON´T OWN ONE PIECE! Oda-sensei does.

NAKAMA FOREVER

Chapter one

"Yes you did, you forced all of us to join your crew, and don´t try to deny it!", said the straw-hats swordsman.

"No I didn´t!", said the captain.

"You bloody fool! You did and you should be mature enoghth to admit it!"

The conversation had started over dinner when Ussop had started to tell tales about his "great adventures" to Chopper. Zoro had told Luffy that it was getting to much and that he hated listening to Ussop bragging about being the captain, when he knew he wasn´t. Luffy told Zoro that there was nothing wrong with Ussop wanting to be the captain. Zoro had punched Luffy and said that Ussop had no right to declare himself as there captain. And from then on the conversation had just got worse...

"I didn´t even want to join your shitty crew from the start!", said Zoro.

"Please...", the crew´s navigator begged but Sanji cut across her.

"There´s no point, Nami-swan, when they start fighting like this there´s no way to stop them."

"Fine! I´f you don´t want to be on this crew, there´s the door!", Luffy said pointing at the door.

"Great! I´m going and you can´t count on me to save your skins when you get caught by the marines!"

"Then, go! We´ll do better without you! And I´m not gonna let you back even if beg me at bent-knee."

"Good, because I´m not gonna do anything of the kind!", and the ex-pirate hunter stormed out of the room.

At that moment there was a big explosion sond and the ship shook violently. They dashed up to the deck of the Going-Merry. They looked around, they where surounded by marine ships.

"We´re gonna hafe to leave the ship", said Nami."Or we´ll all get caught."

"And Merry?" alsked the crew´s sharpshooter."We can´t just leave her hear!"

"We´ve got no other option, we can onely askape by earth!", said Nami, and then inshored Ussop."I don´t htink they´ll harm her, they don´t tend to bother with ships."

"OK", said Luffy."Everyone run!"

Later they were resting in a cave, and when Zoro was sure they had all gone he turned to his captain.

"I´m going, I can´t stand having to stay with shit like you."

"Fine", said the captain shortly.

The sworsman left.

"Are you sure he´s not gonna get lost?", alsked Sanji.

"Well, that´s nothing of my concern", said Luffy.

The swordsman was lost, he had no idea where the village was or even wether there was a village, ha hadden´t alsked. Then he felt a stabbing pain in his waist an a bullet knocked his katanas to the floor. He looked around, he was surounded by marines. He bent down for his katanas, but he was too late; ten bullets hit him from diferent angles. Then he passed out.

Well, how´s the first chapter of my first fanfic, I know I promised it would be violent, and I´m keeping my promise.

LIKE IT OR NOT I´M FINISHING THIS FANFIC, REVIEW IF YOU LIKE YOUR HEAD.