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Annabel stopped behind an automatic sliding door. She hated those things. At the store where she was at, it took forever for those sensors to figure out that you're trying to walk through the door. She clutched onto her jacket as the cool night breeze enclosed in on her body. She looked up at the night sky. She smiled. The moon was full. Annabel felt a unusual cold sensation pass by her. She quickly looked around, then feeling scared she hastily walked over to her century old car wanting to go home. She felt a cold breeze behind her and turned around out of curiosity. Annabel stared wide-eyed at the silhouette of the man in front of her. He was handsome. Probably 17 years old. He had straight brown hair that grazed his chin. He had prominent brown eyes and his skin was ghostly white. The man suddenly grinned at her, revealing two very large pearly white incisors. Slowly her mind registered the image of the man and the danger she was in. She started to panic. As an instinct, Annabel tried moving but her body was paralyzed with fear. He stood there for a moment and slowly started walking towards Annabel. Move, please, body move. She thought but her body was still frozen. The man was close to her now. She could feel the coldness of his body. He reached his hand out and shoved away the black hair covering her neck. He stared at her, his eyes darkening, yearning for blood. His fangs started to grow their full length. Please don't make this hurt. The man chuckled as he heard those thoughts. "Don't worry, it'll be over before you know it." He spoke.
Annabel stared at the man puzzled. H-how does he know that?
"There's more about night walkers, than blood sucking my dear. Now please shut-up."
"NO!" She screamed.
"Because if you don't my hands might accidentally slip and break your fragile neck." He fiercely spat those words out, looking angry, "But lucky for you, I like my meals alive."
Annabel managed to squeak out an OK. The man grinned and inhaled her scent. He leaned into her neck. She winced, trying to prepare herself for the pain.
"Leave her alone." A voice said from behind.
The man glanced at his about-to-be-lunch and then looked behind her. A hiss emerged from the man's throat.
"I said, LEAVE HER ALONE!" The voice boomed.
Annabel blinked, and the man in front of her was gone. She fell to her knees from the the fear and exhaustion. She hunched over and layed there in the parking lot for what seemed like an eternity. She suddenly felt a cold hand on her shoulder and she looked up and saw, yet again another silhoutte of another pale man. Except, this time he was much more handsome. Long, black flowing hair dancing in the wind. Hypnotizing ice blue eyes and he, too had ghostly white skin. The man tried his best to smile, but it looked lopsided and more of the "I'm going to eat you so you better run" kind of smile. She jumped and tried to get up, clutching onto her neck. The man's smile turned to an amused look.
"Don't worry I won't hurt you." He said in a calm tone. The man bent down and grabbed the carton of milk she dropped.
"Organic?" He asked in an amused tone.
"Is there something wrong with buying organic?" She shot back. He handed the carton of milk to her. Annabel quickly took it from him. The man cleared his throat.
"Are you okay?" He said, trying to clear up the thick atmosphere.
She spared a quick glance at him. "Yes. I'm alright." She muttered. Annabel turned her back on him for a moment. She slowly started walking back to her car, reaching into her pocket to find the car keys.
"And by the way, thanks, you know for saving my life from that uh, thing." She said as she opened the car door, "By the way my names Anna-" She turned to look at the man but all she saw was an empty parking lot and a now-closing grocery store. He was gone.
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So was it crappy, because if it was, i'm not going to continue. Revieww?