Rewriting!

Okay, so I've mentioned it in "Child of Ill Omen", but I've finally gotten off of my lazy ass- or rather, onto it, and started rewriting "Thoughts of a Broken Family"! I've looked back over it, and honestly- there's a lot of room for improvement. So I'm going back and rewriting it with new twists, a –hopefully improved- plot, and different personalities! Plus, I think my writing might have gotten a little better since I've starte that.

So, would anyone be interested in me going back and stitching up "Thoughts"?

Also, I know it's been a while, but if you can remember anything you didn't like that I could touch up, feel free to let me know!