hey im new. i haven't written a story before this so a lot of help is needed preferably in review form

disclaimer: i don't own anything associated with one tree hill

Chapter 1

Haley James realised she'd fallen in love on her wedding day. Fortunately the lucky person was the man she was marrying. Nathan Scott, a successful businessman from Tree Hill who Haley had agreed to marry after several failed relationships.

As Haley walked down the makeshift aisle, she remembered the day she had told Nathan about her dream wedding location.

FLASHBACK

Haley and Nathan were having dinner near Haley's house in Charlotte, an idea by both sets of parents to help the two get to know each other. Haley had just finished telling Nathan about her sister's wedding a few years ago when he asked "When you were younger did you ever plan your dream wedding."

"I never planned the details but I did know exactly where I wanted it. Funnily enough it's in Tree Hill. There's a hill overlooking the beach with an amazing view."

"There's more than one hill in Tree Hill Haley" laughed Nathan "you'll have to be a bit more specific".

"It's the one near the old ice cream shop. When we used to go to Tree Hill, I was allowed to go and get ice cream because it was nearby and I used to get really bored. My parents friends always asked me the same questions, even if we'd seen a few months before. It was always what grade are you in?, how old are you?, What do you want to be when your older? Do you…"

"Haley! You're rambling"

"Oops sorry. I do that when I'm nervous or annoyed. I guess the trip down memory lane wasn't such a good idea"

"So the hill by the ice cream shop. Why do you like it so much? There's loads of hills with amazing views in Tree Hill. I should know. Some of them were better known as make-out spots for the high-schoolers"

"I guess you spent a lot of time there if you managed to notice the view"

"I'm happy to say that I did but you still haven't answered my question"

"there's only one simple answer. The view takes my breath away"

END FLASHBACK

And it still did. Nathan had done what very few men in Haley's life had done. He'd listened to her and not only that but he'd gone as far as to get her her dream wedding. She now realised that during the time she had spent with Nathan over the past few months she had slowly fallen in love with him. But Haley wasn't stupid. She knew that Nathan would not fall in love with her, not after everything that happened with his ex-girlfriend.

As Haley reached the end of the aisle she smiled at her best friend, Rachel Gattina, the one person in the world who knew Haley better than anyone else. Rachel gave Haley a quizzical look. She knew something was wrong. Haley shook her head slightly and gave her a small smile. Rachel understood that if anything was wrong Haley would tell her about it later.

Haley turned to face Nathan. He smiled at her and she smiled back. The ceremony began and Haley James became Haley James Scott.

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