I wanted to state a few things. In this story Hinata isn't a ninja. If she was don't you think I would have had her use her byakugan on the monster instead of stabbing it with a knife? Also, the spirits are secretive about giving the mansion away. It was mentioned they choose their targets so they don't make a public news about it which is why nobody knows about it other than the one's that encounter the spirits. Also, if Hinata makes it out alive she would be the first. Also, the spirits lure people to there mansion which means that they don't leave it so it's okay to stand outside of it as long as you don't go in. Okay, let's continue the story now cause I'm tired of explaining. I'll do some more later.
The monster raised it's claws a prepared to swing them down on Hinata. Hinata was sitting down breathing deeply when she noticed a shadow next to hers onto the floor of the shelf. She turns around to see the creature and rolls aside to avoid its claws. She rolls of the shelf and lands upside down in an empty barrel below her. She tries to get out, but is stuck and can't get out of the barrel. The monster jumps down next to her and swats the barrels side making it fly through the door used to enter the storage.
Hinata tried harder to get out of the barrel as she felt herself rolling along the ground. She hears a noise made by the monster as it jumps into the air and falls down upon her ready to jab its claws through the barrel into her. She felt an increase in speed and realised she has started rolling downhill. As soon as she starts roll downhill she hears a thud in the ground as the monster missed her barely and got its claws stuck in the ground. It makes an angry gurgling sound as it sees Hinata rolling away.
Hinata rolled for quite a while until the barrel hits something and shatters into several pieces. She gets up and staggers around as she tries to regain her sense of balance, but falls back down because she is too dizzy from rolling however fall she rolled. After she recovers her senses she looks around and finds herself in what looks like the backyard of the mansion. She crashed into an old tree that had know leaves and was a rotting as mold chewed it down.
Hinata walked around the yard searching among the stuff for anything useful. She saw busted lawn ornaments, a dried up fountain, and a vegetable patch that was invested bugs and rotten from age. She hurried passed the vegetable patch because its smell was unbearable. She finds a toolshed and opens the door. She does a quick survey of the inside and was about to leave when she finds something that catches her eye.
Hinata rushes into the shed and picks up the object to examine it more closely. It was a piece of orange clothing that looked like it came from Naruto's outfit. She sniffs it and smells the cologne on it that Naruto's been wearing recently thus confirming her suspicion. She puts the cloth in her pocket and leaves the shed.
Hinata starts walking through a section of the backyard that is lined with row after row of tombstones. She felt creeped out as she passed by the stones wondering whose they could belong to. She stops when she feels something moving beneath her feet and lifts them up to examine the ground, but finds nothing. Suddenly, the ground beneath her starts rumbling loudly.
Hinata falls down because she is unable to balance herself. The rumbling stop for a moment, then the ground in front of her tears open as a new monster comes out of the ground in front of her. This monster was at least 8 feet tall and 4 feet wide. It has grayish, decaying skin, thick arms with three fingered hands, legs that were small and only useful for standing, and white eyes the size of baseballs set over a mouth with four teeth like a hippos.
It raises an arm and swings it to strike Hinata. Hinata manages to roll out of the way to avoid it and gets up to start running away from it. The monster monster uses its arms to run after Hinata. Hinata is slowed down by her injuries, but still manages to stay a significant distance ahead of the monster. She looks back at the monster to see that it was starting to catch up to her because of the stride it made with its long arms.
Hinata turns to look forward just as she bumps into an old well and tries to regain her balance to keep from falling in. She regains balance and turns around to face the monster. The monster slams its fist into the ground in front of her causing her to lose her balance again and lean toward the well. She screams as she falls into the well right before the monster takes of the covering of the well with its other hand.
The monster stares into the well see nothing but blackness. It walks back toward the graveyard that it came from presuming the girl was gone. Meanwhile, Hinata layed at the bottom of the well in a world of pain from what the fall did to her injuries. She slowly opens her eyes and looks up to the top of the well. With covering gone, the moon shone down onto Hinata. She guessed that she was at least 150 feet into the ground. How she survived the fall, she had no idea.
Hinata inspects the cell phone and flashlight to find that they survived the fall. She struggles to get herself to stand and after much effort she gets herself to stand. The well had a 7 foot radius which gave her some room to breathe. She walks to run wall and starts to scale it toward the top. She has to fight hard against the pain to keep from losing her grip. After she gets to about 40 feet she slips and tumbles down to the bottom.
Hinata groans in pain and struggles to get up again. She starts climbing again to get to the top. She gets about 70 feet before falling down again. She gets up and tries again. When she gets to 110 feet she feels her grip starting to weaking. She tries to hold on, but her grip slips and she falls to the bottom again. This time she is unable to get up. "N-Naruto..." she said silently as she stared at the moon from the bottom of the well.
That's the end of this chapter. Read the next one to see what happens to Hinata. Read and Review please!