Plot: Point: What if it wasn't Bianca that went with Chris to go back in time? What if Melinda, his baby sister, was the one to go back in time? Can she go back into the past, facing her mother in the past, or better yet can she save all of her family before it is too late.
Writing style: I am going to write in Melinda's POV, and switch back to Chris while he is stuck in the future, hoping that Melinda is ok.
Melinda's POVThis is hell. Wy, how could you do this to us? How could you live with yourself after literally backstabbing your family? I can still remember you constantly attacking us, and yet we were always able to get away. What would Mom say, or even worse, do to you? What had used to be such a good life has been torn to shreds. Even though Mom may not be around, the least you could have done is stayed by us, instead of going insane.
Chris and I are almost the only ones left in the Halliwell line, because you killed almost everyone in the line. Once again, I have woken up, on the uncomfortable ground, where the refugees are. The last witches we know to be alive. As I looked up towards my older brother Chris, I heard moaning in his sleep. He had fallen asleep, leaning on the wall, watching me, protecting me. I may need it, but it doesn't mean I can't handle myself every once in awhile. He looked so tired, even in sleep, and instantly regretted thinking he was being overprotective. At this point I really wished I had his powers, so I could just orb him into a bed. Chris, what am I going to do with you?
I slowly got up to my feet, my spine cracking back in place. I stretched and walked towards his sleeping form. Hopefully he was in a deep of enough sleep, so I could move him without him waking up. I pushed my dark hair back, and gently put my hands on Chris's sleeping form, and got him to sit down. I made myself astral project and astral me grabbed a pillow and a blanket. I astraled back into my body, and laid Chris's head on the pillow, thankfully he was still asleep. "Mom," he murmured, as his eyes momentarily gazed at me.
I was blessed with Mom's hair, bone structure, but the only difference was my eyes were jade like Dad's. Tears stung at his eyes, as he murmured Mom again. He thought I was Mom. I lay down next to him and grabbed his arm and wrapped it around me, in a sibling hug. Tears stung at my eyes, and started to spill, and landed on Chris's draped arm over me. Unfortunately, it woke up Chris. He shook his head, and saw me crying. "Mel," he said empathetically. He sat up, and pulled me into a hug.
"I miss Mom so much Chris," I sobbed onto his shoulder.
"I miss her too," he whispered. I just wanted to stay there. Feeling like there was time to mourn for our losses and be able to be safe in my brother's arms, but I knew we couldn't. "You sure you are ready to do this?" he asked as I finally started to calm down. I looked at him; tearstains tattooed on his cheeks.
"As ready as I will ever be." I whispered. Today was the day we will go back to change the past. It is not safe for either of us to be here now. I wiped the tears away from my face and gave Chris a brave smile. He got to his feet, and pulled me up.
Chris's POVMel, I miss Mom so much, but I need to be strong for you, and me. We can't risk being emotional right now. I wiped my face and turned to go grab some wearable clothes for the outside. I cleaned my face, and a couple minutes later I was ready to go. Melinda pulled her hair back and put a couple potions in her deep pockets of her khaki pants. I can't believe I confused her with Mom. Well, I guess I can but, the only difference is that she had Leo's eyes, and had some of his blond hair streaked into Piper's hair color.
I gathered some more powerful potions, and shoved them into my own jean pockets. She had Mom's look in her eyes when she was ready to hunt demons. I gave her a quick smile and we headed out for the manor. We had to go the long way; I didn't want to risk us getting caught by the camera's that tracked witch like activity.
We signed up for a tour of our own home. How dare Wyatt let them do this to the house we were raised in, that Mom and our Aunts were raised in. I felt Melinda tense up, and I put an arm around her. She smiled gratefully, and we headed for the attic, after dodging a camera.
Melinda's POV
As we headed upstairs I couldn't help, but feel someone was watching us. I kept looking over my shoulder, expecting something to be there, but alas, no one was. "Come on Mel," Chris whispered. I nodded and followed him up the last of the steps. "You got the spell to summon the Book of Shadows?" I asked him. He nodded, and I started to look out for demons. Since my power neutralizes them quickly, enough, hopefully we will be able to do this without attracting too much attention. He pulled out the spell, and quickly and quietly started to recite it, "I call upon the ancient power, to help us in this darkest hour, let the book return let it claim refuge in its rightful space,"
The Book of Shadows appeared in white lights and landed on the podium. Chris began to turn the pages, and two demons instantly shimmered in. I flicked my hand one at a time, blowing up one demon, and before he was fully vanquished freezed him. "Hell's demons, creatures of death, may fire take away your very breath," I hissed, and both demons got vanquished. "Chris, you almost done?" I asked, as four more demons shimmered in. I kicked a athame out of the demon's hands, and froze it mid flight and sent an astral me over to deal with the other two demons, while I grabbed the athame, and stabbed the demon, and back flipped towards, my astral self, becoming one once again.
Chris flipped his arm out sending the demons crashing into a wall as soon as the triquetra was drawn on the wall. I ran over to him, and prepared to say the spell with him. "Here these words, hear the rhyme, Heed the hope within my mind, Send me back to where I'll find, What I wish in place and-," I stopped momentarily to freeze the incoming demons, and, "time."
The triquetra glowed a bright blue, and the portal opened up, and just as I was about to walk in, me and Chris went flying onto our backs. "Wyatt," I said, as the dark orbs formed into him. He had an evil glare set in his eyes.
"Little Siblings, you should have known that I foresaw this," he smirked.
"Wyatt, stop we are trying to save you!" I shouted. His smirk disappeared, and his hand shot up, sending me flying up towards the ceiling.
"Wyatt!" Chris growled, whipping his arm out, sending Wyatt backwards. Instantly Wyatt lost control of me, and instantly I crashed back on the ground. "Mel, run!" He shouted at me. NO! I can't loose Chris now too! I flicked my hands in Wyatt's direction, momentarily freezing him.
"Chris! Come on!" I shouted back at him, dragging his arm towards me. I was almost at the portal, when Wyatt unfroze instantly pulling Chris towards him. No, not again! I was about to throw another freeze whammie on him, Chris shot his free arm out, sending me into the portal. "NO!" I shouted as I fell through, and I crashed landed into the manor in the past. Seeing her aunts summoning the evil goddess Meta.
Should I continue? I think I got something good, and if you don't like it too bad :P
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