I'd like to start off with I don't own Naruto or any of its characters, schemes, and shenanigans.
This is my first fanfic so I'd be happy to get any helpful criticism.
I'm trying to take this in the direction of a Dark naru fic
I may have a poll about who Naruto should be paired up with I'll have to think more on it
Anyway please enjoy
Character thoughts will be in italic
Kyuubi will speak in Bold
Kyuubi's thoughts will be in Bold Italic
Hand of the Demon
Ch.1
Naruto…
"Zzzzz"
Naruto…
"Zzzzzzzz"
"NARUTO!! Wake up" Iruka was starting to run out of patience having been up all night helping the hokage plan for naruto's special day.
"Huh? What I'm awake! I'm awake!" in his attempt to get out of bed naruto ended up falling off of it in a crumpled mass. "Ouch"
"Naruto how is it that you can manage to sleep in on your own birthday?" iruka signed as he knew this was going to be a long day. "Still he should be able to enjoy his own birthday the way he wants to he deserves that at least." With that thought iruka smiled and helped naruto get up.
"Sorry iruka sensei I was just so excited about my birthday I couldn't get to sleep" Naruto flashed his trademark grin and started getting dressed the entire time bombarding iruka with questions.
"Where we gonna go today iruka? Can we have ramen for lunch iruka? Will I get to see ojiisan today Iruka?"
"Naruto quite down today were going to buy you some new cloths, and then Hokage Sama will teach you a jutsu for your birthday." naruto couldn't believe his luck he was gonna get new gear and learn an awesome jutsu from the hokage.
"Cool! Lets go iruka sensei" with that naruto and iruka left naruto's apartment and headed for the shopping district. On the way iruka couldn't help but notice the glares naruto was getting from all the villagers. "Kami does everyone act like this every time he comes outside." seeing the way naruto's mood seemed to darken as they walked told him yes and he felt more and more sympathy for naruto.
Hoping to make naruto feel better iruka pointed out an expensive ninja gear store and told naruto he could have anything he wanted from there. With that naruto's mood went back to its regular headache inducing high and he started pointing out all the things he wanted. "I feel a sharp pain in my wallet" Iruka thought to himself.
When they were all done there naruto was wearing a fishnet shirt along with a new orange jacket and new kunai set. "thanks iruka sensei I look so cool in this new gear" naruto smiled and began going on about being one step closer to becoming hokage. "I almost forgot your supposed to meet the third in training ground 3 so I'll see you later naruto ok" with that iruka went home trying to figure out how he was going to be able to pay the bills if he kept spending all his money on naruto like that.
At training ground 3
Naruto met the third sitting in the middle of the area reading what looked like a small book. "Hey Sarutobi sama what are you reading? is it a special ninja guide or something" hearing this the third hurriedly stashed the book in his sleeve before naruto could see what it was and possible ruin the hokage as a respected person.. "oh nothing naruto just a little reading material I was using while I waited for you."
To preoccupied with wondering what jutsu the hokage would teach him naruto didn't put any thought into why the third was so flustered about the book. With a huge smile he asked the hokage what jutsu he would get to learn. "is it some really cool ninjutsu that lets me shoot fire from my palm? Or an awesome taijutsu that lets me take out an opponent with a single punch?"
"No I won't be teaching you anything like that naruto, but you are close" said the hokage with a small laugh at naruto's willingness to learn anything to make him a better ninja. "today I will teach you the emo-shon kibosh jutsu better known as the emotion fist jutsu. With this jutsu you will be able to turn all your emotion into one powerful punch " "I'm sure with that jutsu naruto will be able to channel all his confidence into that attack and show those fools he isn't a demon but a savoir."
"COOL! How do I make the jutsu hokage sensei?" Naruto in his hurry to learn the jutsu began channeling chakra into his hand trying to get something to happen all it did though was make his hand glow a dull blue.
"why isn't it working hokage sensei?" The third seeing this remembered that naruto wasn't fully tutored in the ways of making hand signs and such so he decided he'd have to take it from the top. "But it is strange though this young and he's able to concentrate chakra into his hands at a gennin rate he must have large stores of chakra to pull that off." The Sarutobi decided to put more thought into it later as he began to show naruto how to make the hand signs .
With that naruto tried again this time making the correct hand signs this time his hand glowed brightly and he felt a tingling sensation. "Hey I think I got it should I punch something now?" naruto was eager to try his new jutsu wanting to test his abilities. "go ahead naruto its usually more effective when you channel all your emotion into it but lets see how well it is now."
Spying a nearby tree naruto put all his strength into a single punch and hit it right in the middle.. "OW! That hurt a lot ow ow ow what did I do wrong sensei?" Sarutobi worried about naruto checked his hand to see if there was any damage. "don't worry naruto it's just a scratch nothing a little healing balm won't fix."
But before the thirds very eyes the scratch healed up as if it was never there "Strange probably has something to do with that Kyuubi I'll have to hope it won't cause any problems later." but what the hokage didn't notice is how the tree naruto had punch started to burn at the exact spot naruto had hit it.
After that the hokage had business to tend to so he let naruto go on his way and wished him a happy birthday. On his way home naruto noticed how the sky darkened an indication that it was getting late he started running home not wanting to be out in the streets at dark. Years of cruelty taught him that the villagers grew bold when it was dark.
While rounding a corner he tripped and fell into a puddle. "Aw man this stinks iruka just bought me these cloths now there all wet I better hurry home." as he picked himself up a figure began walking up to him
"Hey don't you know it isn't smart to be out in the streets at dark demon brat?" the figure kicked naruto in the back causing him to fall back down. "what did I ever do to you?" naruto asked as he picked himself up again. "Nothing besides ruin our village and kill hundreds of innocents" snarled the man naruto identified one of the jounin that reported to Sarutobi every now and then.
A crowd started to grow around the two as more and more people wanted a try at hurting naruto.
"Get the demon" "we should have killed him at the start." Naruto was really scared if the people who were supposed to protect him wanted to hurt him then there was no way anyone would come to his aid.
The jounin started walking toward naruto with his kunai drawn intent on killing him. "Naruto fearing for his life began forming hand signs hoping it would scare everyone off. "look he's trying to form hand signs watch out he'll kill us all " screamed one female. "don't worry the brat won't be able to do anything he's not even in the academy yet." said the jounin as he got closer and closer to naruto. "Why does everyone want to hurt me so much I didn't do anything all I try to do is be accepted and every time they hurt me. I don't want to die" but right as the jounin got into striking distance naruto finished the jutsu and threw his fist with all he had. The result was ..well less than he hoped for as all the jutsu got was a laugh from the jounin.
"Ha you think someone as weak as you could pull off a jutsu just seeing you do that makes me sick its time I end this" with that the jounin slashed downward "Not today human" roared a voice that naruto didn't recognize as his own with that naruto's hand glowed red and burned a hole threw the jounin
"B..But how?" said the jounin as he fell over dead. All the villagers seeing this immediately began thinking that the demon child was going to kill them all. Most of them fled hoping to escape his wrath, while a few stayed behind concentrating on they're self made task to kill the demon.
"If we can't kill them demon scum then we'll just have to make sure he can't cause us any harm and won't become a full fledged ninja." Said the leader him being the one to organize the attack from the start.
"But how will we do that he's able to do jutsu and destroy us all with a single jutsu." Thinking for a moment the leader grew a sadistic smile as he figured out an answer.
"We will stop him from suing any jutsu by removing his arms so to speak." he said confident in his answer.
All the remaining villagers agreed and began surrounding naruto as the leader readied a katana he bought just so he could kill the demon.
Naruto being drained off all his energy could do nothing as he was held down. "Please stop" he cried
"Happy birthday demon" said the leader as he swung the blade cutting off he child's arm.
Naruto blacked out from the pain and was left in the street to hopefully bleed to death.
Within minutes the Anbu arrived too late to catch the villagers having left to hide so they took naruto to the nearest hospital around .
The doctors said his chance for surviving such an attack was minimal even if he did they could do nothing to reattach his arm. Naruto would never be able to make a two hand sign again . Or at least that would be the case if naruto wasn't the container of an all powerful demon fox. "I will not allow my container no matter how weak he is to be single handed get some sleep kid its going to be a long night."
In his hospital bed naruto rolled around in his sleep dreaming off dark voices and slashing swords the entire time being consumed with a non stopping pain. Focused on his left arm.
"Happy birthday kit"
End chapter 1
Ok that's chapter one I hope you all enjoyed it I'll try to update often
And I'm open to any helpful criticism.