I know I haven't been active on here for awhile, but things have been going on. But I plan on coming back, and hard. This here was submitted to a previous place and I unfroantly didn't get picked. But this is in honor of a very speical person to me who passed away a few years back, I wrote this to honor her and I want to share it with the people on this sight. This is for my grandmoter, Rita Marie Hacker, who passed away September 3, 2004. She had suffered most of her life and that's how she passed, in pain, and I want to just show how much she still is missed. This is my orginal work. And yes I want honest reviews. Thank you.
Lost Angel
Born with silver wings stitched
To your back, halo set upon your
Head. Yet your mortal
Living on this earth of crime and
Hate yet your silver wings never
Blackened. Your love for humanity
Grew, your trust in humans grew
I was a victim of your kindness
And hope. Never understanding
Why, but you kept faith.
This pain these mortals put
You threw, yet you still
Had faith. Cradling me through
The storms of life, protecting me
From the demons that haunted
Me. Those silver wings where
A barrier from the outside world
This faith that held you, I still
Can't understand, but angels
I'm sure are real cause you were mine.
Despite your wings, illness
Overtook you, the constant fights
Took it's toll. Through knife and needle
You fought until the last silver feather
Of your wings fell, a sign you were
Needed elsewhere. Despite the pain
In my own heart I knew that even if
I could no longer see you, you'd be
there. But someone else needed
You and it was my turn to stand on
My own. The pain is gone now for you, now you
Are able to fly with those silver wings
That were bestowed to you, to spread
The same kindness and love
Is being spread onto others as you
Had given to me. The heavens
Lost an important member, and now your
Back were you belong, watching and guiding
Others threw their own storms
Not only had heaven lost its angel
Now I had lost mine.