Hehe.Decided to do a response poem. I am responding to Jamie Hasaku aka Rachel's ( story "When the mask comes off"It is 3 years after the war-hence the title-I do not own avatar. k?
This Katara's Version-there maybe a zuko version.
Heres the poem:

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Three Years(Katara's Version)

It's been three years since the war.
I miss the one I love,
the one that left me,
to be the Rebel King of his country.

It's been three years,
he is now nineteen.
Probably even
looking for a queen.

I want to be his queen.
I want to be his lover.
The one to have his children,
when were older.

I am seventeen,
yet i feel the love becoming stronger inside of me.
Tomorrow i will leave the South Pole,
and find my true love.

Not tomorrow! Today!
I walk towards the docks
and what do I see?
But a fire nation ship,
coming towards me.

Out of instinct i gather some water,
then drop it.
The war is over,
the ship docks.

I slowly walk over to it,
and when he walks off the ship
on to the freezing cold snow
tears escape out of my eyes.

I didn't know they were waiting to fall.
I run towards the boy now a man
and kiss him til i can't breathe.
I feel his rough scar against my soft cheek.

My tears mix with his.
Mine of sadness and longing,
his of joy and happiness.
As he embraces me i wish i could stay in his arms forever.

As if reading my thoughts
he hugs me tighter.
He then lets me go
and looks me up and down.

I feel the warmth of were his hands
used to be.
He bends down on one knee and takes
out a bethrotal necklace.

Tears fall harder and i accept.
Katara he says.
Zuko i breathe.
We hug eachother once more.

And I knew he will be with me forever.
We walked to the village slowly
and my hand bumped against his.
He took my hand in his and we walked into gran-gran's hut,
to tell her the news.

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Did u guys like it?Plz review.I think its so-so. Ok,so i changed the ending and today is my birthday.plz review