Here is where im just posting my thoughts on the fic and your reply's ok? anyways...
...personally i dont see this couple as anything more than hot and heavy for a time then being over, just a hot fling...that's how it was ment to be written...
...as for substance i added a little but the main focus of this was the act itself not what was going on before it ...once again done on purpose...

neko- sorry. this wasn't a very good story. even with the revision. useless and pointless plot. (and besides, u made ino look like some kind of... slut.)... anyway, the pairing's fine and i like ur style... next time, though, spell check, grammar check, and PLOT check.

me- its ok if you didnt like it dont say sorry im not hurt by it. and ino was ment to look like a slut, i dont really like her character as anything but a slut thats the kind of person she seems to me to begin with so why change it? and i will rarely done spell check unless im really in a good mood, so you can be mad about that forever...and grammer check? a...grammer doesnt have to be correct when things are random thoughts and blurbs its not sposed to be perfect cause again it is random thoughts, plot was how I wanted it so i dont care if you guys dont like it all that much.

ok on to the next one...

Tecil- Hi ! I'm french and I haven't understood everything but there aren't very much fics with Kakashi in my language... : ( It was just for say : a very good fic, but the tittle in French may be better if it were : Enseigne moi. Anyway, it's just my opinion. Do as you want !

me- iom taking french in school im on my third year. woot! anyway Enseigne means sign doesnt it? thats what i got when i translated it, maybe im missing something...anyway can you post a review with what it really means? thanks.

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JessieDevil666- this one was better but it would have been better if you had more description, I agree with the last review, mind, you did better then I would, Id have to type mine at night so none of my family would see XD

you could always try a few chapters leading up to it and maybe read some other lemons (even if you already have, it may help) but it was better then some

me- in most of my lemons there are chapters leading up to it, like in my fic Killing the King for example, and the same with a few others ... and sometimes i write mine at night or just when my mom isnt home ... so i know the feeling.

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gaara's angel- um...this isn't bad but it will still hurt even if ya do that blushes make it more sexy like i don't know make kakashi reseist (sp?) a bit he gave in a bit to willingly unless u forgot to mention that he liked her in that way...
-Ja ne!
Ray-chanĪ˜

me- i know what you mean on making him reseist, i did a little of that at the beginning if you noticed ... where he was like what kind of question is that, and he trys to aviod it for a while ... and yes i didnt mention he liked her that way cause it was from another a third person POV so that's you didnt hear anyone thoughts ...

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NinjaAlchemist- um...generally, I don't like lemon stories without any lead up. This was kinda like, "HI! I'm your former student, now get in bed with me!"...Just a little more plot next time and it would make a good read. Keep on trying!
Ja ne!
NinjaAlchemist

me- yah i know what you mean about lead up, i did change it afterall. and i have many other lemons with lead up so ... and yes i will continue to write fic, it something i enjoy so ...

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seckseeful-ed-lover- ...um, it was an ok lemon, but i personally dont like lemons without any substnce behind them. I think sakura was maybe a little ooc too. Anyways, when u rite lemons, u should use it as a strong tool, otherwise its just porn. This sroty was based entirely upon the lemons and it think it should be the orther way around, other than a few technical and spelling mistakes, u have a good riting style. My suggestion is the next time u rite a lemon, have a story behind it.

me- fics are ooc for the most part so i dont see where that comment comes into play... porn? hello isnt that what a lemon is, porn is for the most part sex and the arousal of it,so is what the characters do in a lemon/lime why wouldnt it be like that?... and i dont get the other way around part ...

ok no wthat you have heard what i have to say you can post back or whatever, there seemed to me alot of bashing and comment on this where people didnt get the point of the story, so i tried to clear that up. anyway i hope it wasnt to painful to here what i think about your posts, anyway and yes to all who said something on my spelling, i know im really bad at it ... so that probably wont change much... thanks for reading the fic and this page your thoughts flame or not are appriechated and might be commented on againso thank severyone bye for now.