Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto. Trust me, if I did, you'd know it because most of the characters wouldn't be straight.
Warning: Yaoi. It's also an alternate reality. If you don't like either of those, or the pairing, then you shouldn't be reading this.
Yo. I have revised Chapter 1. And I just might be revising Chapter 2 before Chapter 12 comes out. Sorry. I have to get 12 organized and stuff. So we're all clear: Here's the revised version of Chapter 1 (because it was crappy). Well here goes nothing!
thoughts / "talking" / 'Inner Naruto'
It was a cool day in Konoha. Perfect for contemplating at the park. Naruto had left his aunt and cousin at home saying he was going to meet up with with Kyuubi, Itachi, and...Well he was goin to meet them at the pizza place. But all he really wanted was to sit down and think things over.
He was going to a new school tomorrow for his sophmore year. His cousin, Arain, and...that guy went to that same school. He and Kyuubi had just recently moved back to Konoha from Suna because his father died. They had left because his father wanted to pursue a career as an artist. He made it big -real big- but died shortly after.
Now that he was back, he would get to see his family and all his friends again -including...him.
There was something about him now. Something that wasn't there before. He had missed him terribly while in Suna. They'd been best friends since...well forever! But something about their freindship had changed. And it scared him. He didn't even know what 'it' was! Maybe he wasn't ready to face...him yet. But it didn't matter because he was going to see him tomorrow, whether he liked it or not. In fact, he was going to see him right now, because the very object of his current thoughts was vastly approaching.
"Hello...Naruto."
"Hi...Sasuke."
SASUKE'S P.O.V.
I've been looking for him for a while now. He said he was going to meet me and our brothers at CJ's -well atleast that's what he told his aunt- so we actually went there to wait for him. It didn't take too long for Itachi and Kyuubi to start flirting...not to mention to endling GROPING!...But I was kind of...well, lonely. I thought he was going to be there. I thought I'd finally get to see him after all this time. But I didn't. And it hurt. Yes. THE Sasuke Uchiha feels. It is not a hoax people.
I sat down on the grass next to him. I was about to ask what he was doing here, but he looked really into his thoughts. I really did miss him. He's become...more handsome. And he got taller! But he's still not taller than me. His hair got longer too. Less spiky, but a little ruffled. But there's one thing that never changed. His eyes are still that mesmorizing blue.
"Is there something you wanted, Sasuke?"
"Well I did want to see you. Is that a problem?"
"No." He went back to that "In-Deep-Thought-Come-Back-Later" look.
"Dobe, is there something wrong?"
"Don't call me that."
"Fine. Naruto, is there something upsetting you?"
"No. Well, not really...I don't know..Yes?"
"What is it?"
"Well, there is this person."
"What about the person?"
"Well um...I uh..." He seemed to be contemplating the consequences of telling me. What is so bad that he isn't so sure about telling me?
"What? Don't you trust me?"
"YES! I trust you! It's just that...I um..uhhh..."
NARUTO'S P.O.V.
What am I going to do? I can tell he's getting impatient! But I can't just come out and say: 'Hey Sasuke, wha's wrong is that I like you and you're sitting very close to me! I really want to kiss you.' 'Sure you can.' Um...Who are you? 'I'm your conscience. You know, like Jimminey Cricket was for Ponochio. That type of thing.'
Oh. Well what do you want? I'm a little busy panicking!
'I have a plan. But you have do EXACLTY as I say.'
I don't know if I should be trusting a voice in my head, but I'm out of ideas. Whatcha got?
xXx
"You know, I've been kind of worried about you. Since I haven't seen you since you got back."
Are you sure that's a good idea?'Trust me kid.'
"It's like you've been avoiding me like the plague. And I think you've been ignoring me."
I don't think he'd like that too much. 'But you know you wanna do it.'
"You might even be a little distracted right now.."
True. But what if he gets mad. 'I think it's too late for that on account of he's leaving...' WHAT?!
"... -nce I have none of your attention, I'll leave."
NORMAL P.O.V.
"Sasuke wait!" Naruto grabbed Sasuke's wrist as he was 'mid-rising' off of the ground.
"What?"
"I'll tell you alright?"
Sasuke nodded. "Go on."
"There's this person. I really really like them…But I'm not so sure about how much they like me..."
"Is it Sakura?"
"Ew. No! I'll have you know I'm over her. She's sooo...annoying now. She won't stop talking about how much she loves you and how beautiful your wedding will be Blahblahblah."
"Dobe, she's always been annoying. You were just blinded by her hideous pink hair."
"True."
"So...Is it Hinata?" Sasuke moved a bit closer to Naruto. Naruto rested his head on Sasuke's shoulder.
"No…not her either."
"You're a bendy ruler, aren't you? Is it Neji? He may be pretty but he sure is lacking…"
"But it's soooo pretty and shin---" Naruto immediately raised his head in shock, staring at Sasuke in disbelief. "Y-You-You're…GAY?!" Naruto stuttered. Maybe there was a chance in hell...
"I guess. I've never really liked any girls and me going out with Sakura is just a way to keep suspicious people's mouths shut. I really don't like her. At all." Sasuke said without an ounce of remorse as he looked at the grass. He seemed to really stress the 'at all' part.
"Well you shouldn't be with anyone you don't like." He rested his head back on Sasuke's shoulder.
"Yeah I know."
"Sasuke?" Naruto raised his head.
"Hm?" Sasuke looked into his eyes. They stared at each other for a while. But Naruto finally got sick of the awkward silence. He put his hands on either side of Sasuke's face. He kissed Sasuke and ran for his life.
As he ran he whispered, "I'm sorry Sasuke."
xXx
Sasuke just sat there. In the dirt. Confused. But -surprisingly- not angry..
What just happened?
Well that's the rewritten Chapter 1. Hehehehehe!! Hope you like it!
You know I love you,
TheDarkestWhiteRose