Hey people so I have decided to repost my story with many changes in spaces and spelling but it's the same.
"Sweetie you'll see that he was a good explanation," Flora told me
"Yeah so where is you're date Flo?"
"It's not far from here Musa"
They walked for about another 5 minutes and both turned to the giant glass window of the café at the same time and saw that there was Helia distracted with some papers in hand, and saw Riven, some tables closer to the door, leaning down to kiss the girl next to him in the lips. Flora stared at the scene for a few seconds and turned to Musa.
"Are you okay sweetie?" asked Flora
Flora saw that Musa was paralyzed and glaring at both of them.
'So this is why he couldn't get to our date...' "Yeah Flo I'm okay why wouldn't I be?" answered Musa after a few seconds.
Riven hadn't noticed them and was whispering something to the girl as she giggled and he smiled.
"I have a plan so just go along with it okay Flo?" Musa said
Flora just nodded and followed Musa into the café. Musa walked next to Flora to Riven's table first, she was going to end all the lies he toll her. She stopped in front of the table as Flora stopped next to her and Riven took his eyes off the girl next to him to look at the persons that stopped. He looked, his mouth fell open and he didn't know where to look. Musa, from what Flora could tell, was very calmed and relaxed.
"Musa...? Flora..."Riven whispered
"What's up Riven?" Musa faked to be excited and rise up her fist so he could punch her back as their greeting, which he did.
"Hey" said Flora
The girl next to Riven was confused, Musa also held up her fist just as she did with Riven and smiled at her too.
"Ugh no I may break a nail! And like who are you?"
"You sound like Stella, I'm Musa and this is Flora we're old friends of Riven and you?" said Musa
"I'm Ashley, Riven's girl, and who's Stella?"
"How long have you two been together? And Stella is a friend of ours" said Flora helping Musa out
"3 weeks" said Ashley
"Well nice to see you again Riven and nice to meet you Ashley but we got to go Helia is waiting for you Flora" said Musa
"Yeah bye"
Musa and Flora walked to where Helia was sitting and saw that he just saw Riven and his "problem".
"What was that about?" asked Helia as both girls took a sit.
"Nothing important Helia don't worry about it" said Musa
"But Musa you-"
Musa's cell phone interrupted Flora.
"Yo…yeah I'm Musa...what?...where is he?...alright I'm on my way...His son is kinda busy but I'll be there soon...thank you"
"What happened sweetie?" asked Flora
"Riven's dad is in the hospital but they didn't tell me why so I'm going Helia can you tell Riven I got to go" said Musa
"Yeah I'll see if I can," answered Helia
"Thanks and please take care of Flora for me the hospital is the Joyner Hospital (made-up) bye," said as she started to the door. She stepped out of the café, stopped, took a deep breath, and started to run. Helia got up from his seat and walked to Riven's table.
"Hey Riven can I talk to you?"
Riven started at his best friend and saw some worry in his eyes.
"Yeah I'll be right back Ash" Riven said He was surprised when he saw Musa rush out of the café. "What do you want Helia?"
"Riven, Musa got a call from the hospital and-"
"And what?"
"Your dad had some sort accident or something that's why Musa hurried out of here"
"My dad..."
"Yeah"
"Where?"
"Joyner Hospital. Do you know where it is?"
"Yeah I'll go see him later, but right now I got to go" said Riven as he left Helia and went back to Ashley. Helia went back to Flora, felt badly about what happened to Riven's dad, and Riven didn't even seem to care.
Flora-what did he say?
Helia-that he'll go see him later
Flora-I feel sorry for his dad and Musa, I can't believe he actually cheated on Musa and about his dad...
Helia-yeah but the only thing we can do is help Musa so she doesn't over do it since this problem, and her concert, I can't believe Riven would actually propose to Musa and then got together with another girl.
Flora-yeah well, I just hope Riven knows what he is losing and I hope Musa can manage everything on her own...
Musa had just arrived at the hospital, asked for Riven's dad in the information booth, and was now going to his room. They toll her that he was okay but he had gotten a burn while trying to cook. She felt happy and relieved that he was okay.
"I ran about 3 miles and had to get a taxi because someone got burn now, how did that happen?" she asked as she walked into the room. Riven's dad was sitting at the bed looking at her with a guilty face. She looked at him and had to smile at his guilty face.
"So are you okay sir?" she asked him with a smile
"Yeah I'm great, Musa it was just a small burn and where is Riven?"
"He was kinda busy and couldn't come"
"Well at least my daughter-in-law is here," he said with a grin
Musa frowned. 'That's right I'm still engaged to that player until I give him that ring back' she thought as she looked at the gold ring in her engagement finger. Its shape was a music note with red and white diamonds. You could tell that it was expensive and made by request. She, in front of Riven's dad, took off the ring and placed it in the pocket of her jeans.
"No sir I'm not your daughter-in-law"
"What! Why?"
"That's not important right now sir"
"Yes it is are you okay Musa you seem kind of pale?"
"Yeah I'm okay"
"So are you ready for your concert?"
"Yeah even though I'm getting a bit nervous"
"You'll be fine Musa"
"Yeah I hope so-whoa"
"What is it Musa?"
"I got dizzy that-"
A nurse knocking interrupted Musa.
"So are feeling okay sir?" asked the nurse
"Yeah I'm okay but can you please see her she seems too pale and got dizzy"
"No, I'm okay" said Musa
"He is right come with me you're way too pale, are dizzy, and breathing too heavily"
"No really I'm fin-" Musa wasn't able to finish her sentence because she passed out.
Slowly Musa opened her eyes and saw Riven's dad sitting on a chair next to her bed. His head was on his hands and from his breathing Musa could tell that, he was awake.
"What happened?" she asked
Damian, Riven's dad, quickly looked at her. "You fainted"
"How long was I out?"
"An hour. The doctor did some test and they are waiting for the results"
"Oh, okay but I feel fine"
"We are still waiting on the results or I won't be calm"
"Okay" Musa smiled at him
"What kept Riven from coming?"
'I go to tell him sooner or later' she thought
"Well you see-" There was a knock on the door
"Come in" said Damian
A doctor in about his mid 40 came into the room.
"So what's wrong with her doctor?" asked Damian
"There is nothing wrong with Musa here but..."
"Then why did she faint" asked Damian interrupting the doctor
"I am getting to that... Musa fainted because she is about 6 weeks pregnant"
"W-what?" asked Musa and Damian at the same time
"Congratulations Musa you're 6 weeks pregnant"
"You're not kidding are you?" asked Musa
The doctor shook his head "No"
So people just know that I'm doing this to make my story better and help all of you guys read it better. Thanks for all the support!!!!!!!!!