So I realized I haven't touched this story in quite a while, but I wanted to write a sequel soon (yes, I'm finally going to) and I realized I really didn't like how I ended it. So basically, other than the first two paragraphs, everything is totally different. Sorry if you don't like it as much, but some how I think you'll find the courage to live on.
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By the following day, the entire palace knew that Captain Domitan of Masbole was courting Lady Knight Keladry of Mindelan. As was typical, there were even rumors that the lady knight was pregnant with the captain's child, though when asked about it, both denied it.
Although she still had her own rooms, Kel spent most of her nights in Dom's, as they were closer to the rest of the Own, should they need to leave in the middle of the night. Whenever she was caught walking out of Dom's rooms by one of the men, they always gave her a sly grin or whistled. After a while, she simply learned to ignore them.
As Kel was in Dom's room, doing a pattern dance with her glaive, she heard loud thumping noises coupled with Dom's voice yelling up the stairs.
"Kel! KEL!" He slid into the room, a wide grin on his face. "Raoul's moving me."
Kel stared up at him, shocked that he would be so happy. She hung her glaive up on the wall and sat down hard on the bed. "How… how long are you going to be gone for?" she asked.
"No, no, no", he said as he sat down beside her and put his arm around her shoulders. "He's moving me to different rooms. Larger ones." He smiled as her face lit up. He shifted around uncomfortably and took her hand. "And I was hoping that maybe… you'd want to move in with me. There'll be enough space for both of our belongings and since you spend so much time here anyway…" He looked up into her eyes, slightly surprised to be greeted with such happiness.
"Of course I want to. Did you honestly think for a moment I wouldn't say yes?" she asked, chuckling to herself as she noticed the slight blush that had crept over his cheeks. "A good portion of my things are already here anyway. We can more the rest over whenever you want to."
She laughed as he lifted her off the bed and twirled her around the room. "Be careful or you'll break something you big oaf!" His lips met hers, cutting her off from anything else she might have said.
He pulled away after a few minutes to look into her eyes. "If you're sure, there's no time like the present to get started." Rolling her eyes, she took his hand and headed to her rooms.
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So NOW it's done. I really really didn't like the old ending, so you get this one instead. It just seemed too cliché to me. And since I detest anything in that category, I had to change it before I could make a sequel. And yes, I DID say the word sequel. Anyway, so please review this new ending and tell me what you think and all those wonderful things. Thanks loads for putting up with me!