Disclaimer- ( This isn't a chappie it's an informal.

Alright, look it. At the moment this is dedicated to this review and the person who wrote it; I can already imagine how old you are.
I would aim that your age is quite young.
You're obvious actually.
Your style of writing hasn't developed at all and it doesn't seem like you have a style quite yet.

Your ideas are good but I can already bargin that you haven't been really watching Teen Titans.
It wouldn't be Teen Titans if you changed their names.
Here's a hint so you know next time if you make mistakes and makes you look older.

Robin: Richard Grayson (even check with the Batmas series, that's his name as well as the TT episode Fractured).
Starfire: Koriand'r - Kori Anders (humanised version, check in TT episode Betrothed).

Raven: Raven Roth (some think it's Rachael but her name is actually Raven).
Cyborg: Victor Stone (his last name was in the TT episode Deception).

Beast Boy: Garfield Logan (his first name was in the whole of the last TT season)
If you want to additionally add Terra: Terra Markov (some think it's Tara but it's Terra).

I put 2 and 2 together so you could read them easier, I didn't put them in a specific order, just what came to mind first.

Also, you should know about each of their pasts, it doesn't take long.
I'd look it up if I were you.

By the way, I liked the songs in your fic, nice choice.
It would have worked better if you proof read before and edited as well as extended it and imcluded better words.
Maybe you should get a beta or someone at home who can proof read.
Also, as it is FF, you should have neat paragraphing so it looks good.
Note: when paragraphing, don't do it like you see it in a book, that's to crowded.

Thanks for hearing me out.
It's just to help you for the future.
Best of luck in your upcoming fics.

Okay, I know what the Titans real names are. I know all of their past too. And I have been watching Teen Titans maybe not as much as I did before when I started my Fic, but I have been watching it. The reason that I twisted Robins past is because I WANTED TO BE UNIQUE! It's called FanFICTION!!!!!! And if all of you people felt that way then why am I writing Fanfics? maybe I won't write the sequal to this. Anyway, it is MY fanfic not yours but I take your suggestions but when this sort of crap appears in my inbox, it makes ME seem retarded. And the worst thing is that I KNOW ALL OF IT!!!! Why would I write a fanfic about something that I have absoulutly no clue about?! THAT'S reatarded. Anyways, send me reviews/messages about this and tell me HONESTLY how you feel about it. Most of you think I'm overreacting and that it's apart of writing, all of the critisim. But I'm insulted because it's flaming me on stuff that I know and choose not to use! And tell me if you want the sequal. If most of you don't... I'm retiring from fanfic.